Back to Eighteen, I Kissed Bai Yueguang at the Beginning

I don't know if the male protagonist has a low EQ or a low IQ. Is it because he is a scumbag and is forced to lose his intelligence? I don't understand, this kind of deliberate wisdom in life seems too pretentious.

Well, why don't Li Yue accept it? It's very well written. I like the harem. Otherwise, it would be so miserable. It's a tragedy.

How can I put it this way? I think the main character is quite disgusting. He is a scumbag just for the sake of being a scumbag. He keeps saying that he likes her, but in fact, he thinks with his lower body throughout the whole process without any emotion. The more he watches it, the more he feels like vomiting.

No, this time I will stand with Ye Yao

This male protagonist licks Ning Yu too much. In the harem story, he licks only the female protagonist and ignores other real exes.

Why does the male protagonist keep losing his wits...

It's really funny to me. I know I have someone I like just by doing intimate gestures with Sister Yao. Why haven't I thought about living with Ling Xue? If you want to disgust people, just disgust them, right? The logic is inconsistent, the character is deceptive, reborn but not reborn, just a bunch of answers.

Outrageous, Ye Yao has been with the protagonist for 19 years, why doesn't the protagonist treat her better?

I don't understand why the author made the male protagonist so disgusting? Does he have no brains or no emotional intelligence at all? If you delete his descriptions of forcibly subduing his intelligence, I guarantee that it will be much better than what you are doing now, which no one can see at all. Just talking about the character of this male protagonist is really disgusting! Invincible

Brother, is your status too high? The prince of a large group, with his status, he can't handle two women, not to mention two, he can handle ten.

This kind of wife who goes back to the past and starts a harem is a poisonous group to me. Lao Liu's writing style makes me feel that the protagonist is not worthy of being a human being

There are too few female leads. We need at least ten more.

It's written as a stallion novel, bye bye

Now I see that Ye Yao, Qin Ruo, Ling Yu, and Li Yue are all very good, but Ning Yu cannot touch my heart.

What a scumbag, see you one by one

I'm really speechless. This is not how you open a harem. Even your aunt doesn't let her go.

This protagonist is really nb. After falling in love with a girl, as soon as Ning Yu, Ye Yao, and Luo Yueying screamed, they would immediately abandon the girl they just fell in love with and run to do dog licking. He also flaunts that he is possessive, and immediately abandons him to become a dog licker for another girl. If that girl doesn't love him, he will be fine in all directions.

I was a little confused at the beginning. Did you remember the rebirth? Apart from yourself, Ning Yu, Ye Yao and Li Yue, you didn't write about the characters? Just writing the name, I can't even come up with it in my head, let alone the character.

I finally understand why the eunuch was a eunuch. The part about amnesia was really baffling.

The author really likes Nian, there are too many older people

I don't understand why the 100,000-word manuscript is not updated

Refining

Did the author want to write a story that only pleases himself or is too niche? I still want to write a touching harem story, such as "The Ultimate Servant" and "The Prince Is Fierce". Why write about the interaction between Qiao Feifei and the heroines?

Is Wang Zhe an important foreshadowing? Has the portrayal of Wang Zhe had a significant impact on the protagonist's character? Or did Wang Zhe have a key influence on the protagonist's story goal? Does Wang Zhe's appearance make the story more tense? So why write about Wang Zhe? What if the protagonist is a passive protagonist? Or is it a positive protagonist?

The dialogue is basically vivid, the female characters are described more vividly, and the protagonist is portrayed as cold and indifferent

I haven't read it for a while and I just finished it. It was a waste of my expression.

Why write about women? ? ?

The author's writing is okay, it looks pretty good

Why was that new book taken off the shelves?