Hammering Out the Water Margin

The art style is weird, it feels like it's trying too hard to be cool.

The previous book, which was clearly about to turn escalating from its oppressive phase to a more enjoyable one, was abruptly cut short. This new book, already over 200,000 words long, is still slowly introducing background settings to cater to new readers. There haven't even been any major chaotic events yet. You're already a slow-paced author; the lack of climaxes makes it easy to lose readers. The author could have sped up the plot.

I'll trust you one more time. Don't do what you did in the last book. One minute you're playing innocent, the next you've not only taken a concubine but also have several children. The disconnect is too drastic. The transition is too abrupt. It feels like at least 100 pages were missed. The beginning was clearly excellent. Why did you have to do this?

The first part seemed okay, but the second part, according to comments, features the protagonist's son as the main character. However, the thought of him being a native makes me not want to continue watching.

The best feeling is freedom, the best mood is childlike innocence.

Shouldn't the author promote it? At least release some older books.

It seems this book won't be updated anymore; let's go back to Faerûn.

What is this writing? It's all a mess.

Good books, good stories, heroes

I knew it was part of the Chaotic Song Dynasty series, and it's all by the same author!