Ye Fan Travels Through the Sky and Fights Through the Sky

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I found that you all got one question wrong. In fact, although the combat power of the Dou Po dungeon is not as bad as that of the Heavenly Shade, it is still quite hellish, because it only takes about forty years from the birth of Xiao Yan to the ending. To pass the dungeon, you must at least show explosive combat power. Except for those who are naturally invincible, almost none of the characters in the Dou Po dungeon can survive.

Dou Qi can't be the same as Kuhai. Your Dou Qi won't make your body stronger. Zhe Tian fights from the beginning to the end. Dou Qi is promoted to Dou Qi. It's enough.

This is the first new book written by a newcomer. There are dozens of documents about the setting of the original work organized in a folder, from realm combat capabilities to the character traits of the characters in the story, etc. However, the collision of the two stories itself is the topic of Guan Gong and Qin Qiong, so when writing, there will inevitably be some plots that some readers like and others don't like. In short, I am ready to open the book. If you have any bugs, loopholes or criticisms, you are welcome to put them forward in the comment area. I have seen everyone's comments and will read them carefully. I will also choose the appropriate ones to modify your many good suggestions and questions. In short, I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written, giving everyone a novel look and feel, while also being logically self-consistent and telling a good story.

"Open it for me!" Ye Fan used all his strength to use his tactics, treating a mothership, the densely packed fleet behind it, and the blazing light curtain as a whole, and tried his best to control it and move it away. "Boom!" The sky trembled, the mothership group trembled, and the unbreakable light curtain undulated! Everyone was stunned, what a huge and terrifying power this was, [Controlling an invincible mothership group at such a distance is comparable to lifting an ancient star of life. Because, there are traces of the supreme avenue here, and every trace of it imprisons the world. Who can shake it? This is a giant that can wipe out the stars! Ye Fan, who is at the 8th level of Xiansan, can lift a life star. It's hard to say whether Dou Di is that strong. 🤔

Let's fight the Great Sage Ye Fan and Tian Xie God three or seven times. Ye Fan punches Tian Xie God seven times and dies.

😥 The 200-year-old great sage Ye Fan is not a holy cultivator. The great sage can open a holy land and pass down the scriptures of saints. He still needs to practice Fenjue to find resources. It feels very dramatic. The scene with Yao Lao is also weird. Ye Fan is an old monster with a higher level. Yao Lao relies on his old age and becomes a joke.

Don't associate Yunlan Sect's Life and Death Sect with Dou Di. I don't understand how a fan-created setting could be taken seriously by a bunch of people, and they even made it up to have Nalan Yanran appear in The Lord.

Why can a little medical fairy also heal the sea of ​​suffering? Doesn't the Heaven-Zealing Technique require seeds? To practice the Heaven-Shielding Technique, you must have seeds planted with your body to practice it.

The most outrageous thing about the Great Emperor is that the Great Emperor is permanently stationed in the Divine Forbidden City. The Eight Forbidden Forbidden Zones span eight small levels, while the Divine Forbidden Zone is guaranteed to span more than ten levels. In other words, it is not a problem for a Divine Forbidden Fighter to beat an ordinary Great Fighter to a Level 1 level.

I have read Chapter 169 and would like to share my thoughts First clarify the protagonist's personality: Although there is a chapter in the novel where the protagonist says that both Xiao Yan and Ye Fan are themselves, "I am me", but based on experience, Ye Fan is obviously dominant, and the author himself calls the protagonist Ye Fan, so the protagonist's personality is Ye Fan, while Xiao Yan is just an experience, but also has feelings 1. After clarifying this point, there are the following questions: In the Tagor Desert, Qing Lin rescued him and talked to him because he felt like an old friend. At first, he didn't recognize the two brothers. He only remembered them after hearing their names. Just pretend that you haven't seen each other for a few years and didn't think of it. After knowing it, you didn't say hello and you were busy looking for strange fire. But after being called out for the second time, the protagonist didn't really want to talk to him. The reason was that "I have a long way to go, and I am destined to have countless enemies. I am afraid of bringing destruction to my loved ones, so I don't want to deliberately have too many interactions." This is not in line with Ye Fan's character. Both Ye Fan and Xiao Yan are people who value love and justice. And the enemy will let your two brothers go because you have little contact with your relatives? I mentioned once or twice later that my path is too difficult and there are too many enemies, and then triggered the plot of not being close to xxx, which felt unnecessary 2. Canaan Academy Chapter, at the beginning of this article, I felt that the shadow of the protagonist Ye Fan was also disappearing. Ye Fan came through the period when the Great Sage was fighting for the Dark Supreme. During this period, he was calm, domineering, decisive in killing, caring for all living beings, heroic and tragic. Ended up going to Canaan College to play house with the old students? It's not that he can't come. I understand the author's writing about his great fighting master strength at this time, but he is now comparable to a fighting emperor. It would be meaningless to write in detail about the promotion of the inner court to the ring competition and the competition for the old fire. The details are inappropriate and look like a plot. When the Tianfen Qi Training Tower first encountered Yao Sheng and was about to start a fight, Han Yue kindly came out to stop them. As a result, they did not understand the protagonist's strength and forcibly triggered the plot of the three gangs surrounding the Leaf Alliance. There, Piapia slapped two gangs to shock them. It was understandable that one person suppressed the three gangs and pretended to be a wave. However, the last step of the victory forced the elders to appear, causing the three gangs to have an "unwilling" mentality, and they were blocked again 3. Strength issue In the novel, the protagonist says that the two methods are practiced at the same time, but it is obvious that the main method is to cover the sky, and the Dou Po method is a dependency. Since it is a dependency, it seems more comfortable to directly improve with the cover of the sky method, but it is a setting that is comparable to the Dou Huang's external cultivation level. I understand that you did this before the Canaan Academy chapter because the Yin people wanted to grab the Qinglian Earth Heart Fire. At Canaan Academy, you tried to prevent the academy from being wary of your Douhuang strength, but you came here to get the Fallen Heartfire. But when you and Zi Yan just met and had a sparring session, you directly exposed the Douhuang strength, so why did you show off your strength as a great Doushi? In the novel, Hei Jiaoyu talked about mixing tigers and eating pigs, but ended up going to Canaan College to mix pigs? Forcing a pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot? The key is to pretend to be cool but not finish it, and it doesn't reflect the pleasure of pretending, so it's too twisted, so it's better to just set the fighting spirit level as Dou Huang 4. Title and name issues "Little man", "little bastard", "little guy", "little pervert", "little monster"... I understand that the heroine occasionally flirts with the hero, so do the enemies? Do you like the title "little xxx" so much? I got goosebumps when I read it, would Dou Po Zhe Tian write like this? And in the Canaan Academy chapter, Xiao Yan's identity is hidden. I don't understand it. Do you think it will be hidden in the original work? And you didn't hide it, even though you knew your identity, you were still called "Ye Zhetian". I'm really speechless about this name. Originally, the names of Ye Fan and Xiao Yan were not the same, but I was speechless when I made it even more embarrassing... 5. Role question Was he knocked back immediately and almost injured? A person with the mainland's top qualifications + top resources + Jin Emperor Fen Tianyan, can't he be considered a scumbag student if he can't surpass four stars? Isn't this funny? The scene where the ancient tribe picks her up later is also very stiff. It feels like an NPC. It doesn't have the feeling in the original work and has no soul Little Doctor Fairy: The characters written in the early stage are okay, but when you first meet them, you call them "little monsters"? Qinglin: It feels like it was forced together for the sake of collecting cards, and the interaction is less than in the original work. When the author wrote about not having contact with his brother after rescuing people, I thought he gave up on Qinglin. Yun Yun: Nothing happened in the original work. The sealing protagonist was relieved after a while, and the relationship afterwards was relatively calm, with no ambiguous incidents. Why did the Izumo Empire say something like a confession just after the rescue? It's very abrupt, like the heroine who collects stamps Medusa: The emotions are not as natural as the original work, but it makes sense Zi Yan: The reason for meeting is reasonable, but going to the Izumo Empire with the protagonist has no pure feeling and no effect, like collecting stamps Yao Lao: It's not surprising, and there's nothing wrong with it. After all, the protagonist is different from the original work, so it's okay Emperor Beast: The little black raccoon. I don't understand why this character was set up. It's very abrupt and I feel like this character is unnecessary. Maybe I want to set it as a big black dog, but double penetration is not easy to write, or maybe it is to connect the back of Tuoshegu Emperor with Zhetian. Let's see how the author handles it later Other characters: Except for Xiao Ning who is too reckless, they are okay. Anyway, it is not the focus of attention and it is not obtrusive There are some other problems that I have forgotten and I will not write about them. The above are not big problems and there are no very poisonous places, but it is like eating fish. , I was eating the old card thorn, but I didn't want to eat anymore. I have read Chapter 169 for the time being. I skipped some chapters and couldn't stand it. I will read it after waiting for a while The highlight of this book is the combination of Zhetian and Doupo, the collision and development of the two universes. But because the systems are different, it is difficult to maintain unity, so in fact, some things can be discarded. According to the way the author writes now, it should eventually return to the Zhetian Universe or Doupo will merge into the Zhetian Universe. I don't know what will be written in detail later. Zhe Tian is still the background. After all, the title of the book is "Ye Fan travels to Dou Po", and the focus is "Ye Fan" and "Dou Po", but no matter what, Ye Fan's character characteristics must be written out, and seeing now, I feel that the protagonist is less and less like Ye Fan, the great sage. The state of mind that the Queen of Darkness should have In addition, Ye Fan of Zhetianzhong has basically settled down in the later period. If the Black Emperor had not made a trap in his dream, he would have never taken another wife. But now the author has so many ambiguous heroines with his stamp collecting routine, how can he be safe? As for Pai, it's easy to fool around with characters without thinking. I can't stand it if I don't accept the original Xiao Yan Party. At least Xun'er Medusa can't stand it. I hope the author can handle it well Originally I just wanted to make a few suggestions, but the more I complained, the more I complained. Generally, I don't like what I see. The plot is either skipped or left silently, but I also find the setting of this book interesting, and the author mentioned in his acceptance speech that he wanted to be "logically self-consistent", and the comments section also mentioned how much preparation and information he had made (Originally, I just don't read this kind of book with the protagonist, I read this book because I saw what the author said and felt that the author really worked hard), but now I obviously feel that some parts of the logic are inconsistent, so I complained I hope the author can continue to write well, the author makes money, and I read the book, a win-win situation

Change to [Ye Fan], the upper limit is [Just Become a Saint]!

After the dark turmoil, Ye Fan had already married Ziyue, and he would not be looking for a woman, okay?

Don't talk about whether it's reasonable or not. Are you happy or not?

As for the Soul Palace, I have always felt that chanting the Soul Palace is more effective than crushing it with force. The number of paths in the Soul Palace is related to the soul. In this point, the Soul Palace is really a heaven-defeating Soul Palace. It is a dimensionality-reducing blow to the Soul Palace!

Is there any story about Ye Fan traveling through the perfect world? Can you please write it down?

I feel that the writing is still very good, but there is still a gap between it and Hongmao. One is the character creation, and the other is that there is no bloody battle to cover the sky, there is no golden world, and there are no unparalleled talents of the younger generation. Ye Fan is basically invincible here. I feel that the author does not have to copy the world. He can write some changes and have additional copies.

How come the author never returns? Is anyone still there?

Will this book be updated? ? ?

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