Humane Immortality

Brothers, the contract application has been passed. If you want to make a profit, invest quickly. After the contract is signed, the profit will be much less 😍😍😍😍

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

Why isn't it on the shelves? It won't be free forever! Still ready to stop updating?

The world structure is quite overwhelming. I hope the plot can be more integrated and the other characters can be drawn better.

See Chapter 10 First write about a little girl who has a crush on each other. Then it fell asleep for 70 years, and the little girl got married, had children, and died of old age. Later, it is written that the classic saint found a loser as a follower to send the saint son who pursues her or something Everyone distinguishes himself

The chapters I wrote in the past two days feel so bad.

Did you brush this Silver League yourself?

There is actually a Silver Alliance, so rich 😰

A brainless novel The plot of the fifty-plus chapters is about getting the Holy Fire, and the tribe expands to kill people. This naturally attracts attention, and it is natural for the Holy Fire to disappear, but a normal person knows the importance of development The previous one gave all the yin and yang, and the Saint also gave the third Once, no matter the person or the love, although it seems correct, you switch to the villain's protagonist's perspective. The protagonist of this book is a bit like that. Although he almost died, he also understands that the saint is an investment. But once you think of the villain's protagonist's perspective, from the perspective of a passerby, , the protagonist has many flaws A strong sense of deja vu as the villain succeeds. In the Holy Fire, it is clear that humans and aliens are not at odds with each other, and it is natural to damage the enemy's foundation, but it gives people the feeling of a villain succeeding, which is very clown Also, the plot of the fight with the fire spirit has the temperature again and again. Ascension in the valley is clearly described, and there are various movements, and there seems to be a pillar of fire rising into the sky, but it is not until the protagonist spends at least a few minutes, and when it is over, others realize it, and the nearest saint realizes Are you taking the reader as your brain for the above? Or is it that when I opened an account and wrote short articles in the past, my brain was exhausted, and I didn't talk about basic logic and it was pure and refreshing? Mom* finally found the possible result, but then came a big mess ... The villain has a sense of ambition, and the basic logic is ruined

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]