After Turning into a House, I Turned Myself Over

Why can't we write this kind of cooperation with a country to develop a different world? There are three main common problems: 1. Too petty. In works where this problem occurs, the author often intentionally or unintentionally ignores what kind of power a big country can mobilize. Perhaps in order to prevent the book from ending too quickly, the author has always limited the power that the country can invest in other worlds. Some authors will give reasons why the country cannot invest a lot of force, and some authors simply refuse to give or give a very reluctant reason. But I haven't seen the part about developing another world, so I won't comment. 2． Forcing the protagonist to appear. Unlike the previous problem, which many authors can solve relatively well, there are only a few authors who have successfully solved this problem. Either they are not aware of the problem, or they are aware of the problem, but cannot write group portraits well. Many authors have to set up various situations to let the protagonist come forward, or put the protagonist in danger very bluntly. It feels very unreasonable, as if all the characters in the book don't understand the principle that a gentleman should not stand under a dangerous wall. I hope the author understands that in this kind of article, the protagonist is just a camera. There is no need to force the protagonist to appear until the protagonist appears. It is completely understandable that the protagonist is not mentioned in fifty, sixty or even hundreds of chapters. Some readers' complaints are just complaints rather than complaints. In this kind of work, readers should not bring in the protagonist, but should bring in the national consciousness. But since I haven't seen the back, I won't comment on this. 3． The characters in the book, or the author, lack scientific literacy. In fact, this problem is present in most online novels today. Scientific literacy does not mean that you have to know a lot of knowledge, but that you have to know what the definition of science is, and you cannot just pop up something. The character in the book shouted "This is not scientific!". This kind of book has particularly high requirements for scientific literacy. The author must not only have basic scientific literacy, but also have a large amount of knowledge reserves. It does not need to be very profound, but at least it must be able to fool readers. But unfortunately, the author's scientific literacy is obviously insufficient. In addition to the three major problems above, the problems of embarrassing and deceiving people are also more obvious in this kind of book. Since I have only read a few chapters, I can only confirm that there is a clear reduction of intelligence. However, judging from the previous chapters, the biggest shortcoming of this book is its poor writing style! The three major questions above are the three major questions I raised for this kind of article based on my own thinking before. However, when I raised them at the time, I did not expect that the author who dared to write this kind of article would have such poor writing skills. So much so that the three major issues I raised seem insignificant in the face of the author's writing style. However, since the author's writing style is so poor and there are still people reading it, then the following content should be pretty good. I can't practice my writing for a while, so I can only wish the author not to show up and ask my three major questions.

There are three things that are most comfortable to watch. The first point: like many other world novels, we did not develop another world independently. This is the big picture. When a piece of cake is only enough for one person, there will be many fly camps. What is a different world? Even a little bit of soil is valuable, just like paying billions to collect soil from the moon. When you are needed to open a different world, you are absolutely indispensable. When they have not found a substitute to open a different world, they will try their best to keep you alive even if you want to die. Second point: It didn't go over immediately. It just said that there are several planets in the solar system that you can go to without protection. It didn't say whether there are viruses or the like. In this regard, it is better to send robots and testing instruments first. Third point: Many otherworldly novels with good infrastructure flow have been written as adventure flow. For example, for thousands of years in history, several emperors have personally conquered the world. Even though it is the only key to open another world, they still have to go there. The reason given in many novels is translation. But it takes time to train a translator, but time is useless if the key is gone. This novel is easier to use a clone

Overall map, Descent location,

I haven't started reading it yet, but in my impression, no one of this kind of book that cooperates with the state has been finished alive. Even if it has some achievements, it will be reported by envious people. If it is not blocked, it will make you feel sick, and eventually it will be blocked from the shelves.

Since the protagonist's absorption of power will not destroy the antiques, it is entirely possible to have foreign cultural relics and antiques in the protagonist's hands by inviting foreign museums to hold exhibitions. To be honest, foreign countries are better than us in terms of cultural promotion. Those foreign cultural relics may not necessarily have a long history, but the attention is definitely enough. It is not necessary to only focus on our country's cultural relics. The choice is actually quite large.

See Chapter 39. There is a shortcoming that is not a poisonous point. It's because the author didn't do a good job with the data. Can the author make this data slightly larger? Otherwise it would be just like Warhammer. The previous one, 10 times the amount of anesthesia for an elephant, anesthetized the dragon. No matter how bad the dragon is, it's still not the same as paper. There are also 38 pictures. Did the reconnaissance soldiers find the large indigenous tribe a hundred meters away? Get some data, the author is great. Don't really imitate other people's war hammers.

There is a feeling that the author has never taken a class, and many things have a student flavor. Including people's speech, handling methods, etc. I probably didn't imagine what was going to happen at the beginning, so I just wrote it based on the novels I had read before.

Hand it over, hand it over with a hammer, the prince and general Xiang Ning will have the guts! Why should we hand it in when we already have the chance to be the protagonist?

You also deleted my comment, I am Shennong, I am a piece of shit, run away! ! ! ! ! !

Turn it in Why don't you make some anomalies yourself and let others study them? Your request can be expressed as the characteristics of the contained object.

Let's put aside whether it's bad or not. Based on the book's ability to use words and sentences, I guess I didn't graduate from junior high school? Of course, the most important thing is that the plot is really bad.

This is written like a foreign country colonizing the whole of China.

Originally, the author's writing style was poor, so bad that there was only a little innovation and novelty left. From the appearance of Loli Dragon to now, the author has inked at least seven or eight pictures of him. In my opinion, it is disgusting and useless.

This subject is not naturally suitable for online writing. Experts who have writing skills and ideas will not touch it. Some are sensitive and cannot be touched too brainlessly. Newbies are not suitable for writing this kind of thing.

A bad book in a bad book deserves to be thrown out

Which stone on earth does not have a history of hundreds of millions of years?

From now on, I will no longer read the books that I handed in with my golden finger. I finally understand why everyone said that the protagonist should develop on his own. In order to suppress the development of the plot, the protagonist's plot development is not as fast as that of other single-player and double-travel games. It is very good. Now it is a single-player double-travel game where one person does the things of a country, and even does better. Now, in this kind of handover, a country does one person's things, and it is not as good as one person doing it there.

For an egoist, surrendering to the state is more uncomfortable than killing him!

On January 25, the United States sent people to attack the institute. It was over in one incident. What about the institute's retaliation? It's just as disgusting as someone trying to hit you in the face, but it only hits you in the shoulder, and then forget about it. This novel itself is telling now, how powerful the research institute and the protagonist are. Most readers only read it because they enjoyed it, but in the end, they were attacked, and then nothing happened. I felt inexplicably aggrieved after reading it. The cause, process, and result of an incident are all about tolerance. I read novels to see how you endure it.

Suddenly I discovered that after reading Tomato and being poisoned by some authors' books in QiDian, my poison resistance is so high? Don't you think there's anything wrong with this book? But why do I still get a bunch of book poison in front of me? This is one of the best books I have read in the past few months. There are not many others that are just right. I don't plan to spend money on it anyway...

I haven't read it yet. It's a cover letter. If the author is bad, I won't read it. This is the first time I've seen someone push a bad novel. It's so abstract 😰

[Extraordinary materials allow mobile phone batteries to consume 1/5 of the energy after being used for 9 consecutive years, and other people cannot use the energy inside...] The energy density has far exceeded nuclear energy, and the technical milestone has exceeded nuclear fusion. For this kind of ten-trillion-dollar project, the protagonist comes easily. The author's writing is limited and cannot present the macro-world changes brought about by technology, and continues to describe the protagonist's development from a micro perspective. The road to development... You can come up with similar level of technology at will. It does not describe the disputes between major powers, the surge of trends, and the changes in the industry. It is actually a quarrel with other people. The "shock body" describes a lot... It is recommended that if the author's writing is not good enough, he should reduce the description of this kind of subject matter that requires macro narrative. Forcible description will separate people's perception.

Don't be a eunuch, this book is actually quite good. Writing a book depends on enduring. If you don't endure, wait for the opportunity. You can never get ahead.

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Why does the author feel like a eunuch?

I have really enjoyed reading this kind of book in the past two years, but there are too few. I have read a few of the books in the starting point and I am not satisfied with them anymore.