Searching for Qingyun: Starting from the Five Disciples of Dazhu Peak

The previous plot of Dazhu Peak is very good, and several chapters of Lu Xueqi are also very exciting, but what does this mortal war mean? Are you writing this in the world of cultivating immortals? Not only is it boring and devoid of any sense of immersion, but it also goes on for a long time, leaving people with no desire to read. You can write about the collision with the demon sect, you can write about the emergence of new races or sects, or you can write about adventures, but this ordinary war is really too disgusting.

This new map is a bit biased. It has already started on the mundane battlefield, and I have no desire to continue watching it.

The mortal army was such a failure, they all skipped it

Damn it, they have all become immortals. And doing these physical exercises?

When writing about cultivating immortals, just write about cultivating immortals. If you write about martial arts in cultivating immortals, forget it. I've written more than ten chapters and haven't finished them yet. I only read this book to read about cultivating immortals.

Can the time traveler know who is in the Patriarch Temple? Still talking about killing ghosts and gods, this is nonsense.

Isn't the protagonist too much of a virgin? Why did he try so hard to save Li Xun?

I think the name should be changed a little. To be honest, the protagonist's name makes me laugh every time I see it.

Let's discuss it. Is it better for him and the Qingyun Sect to try to reveal Cangsong's true identity, Zhang Xiaofan's double-dealing, and the truth about Caomiao Village in advance? Personally, I think this is better. Exposing the traitor Cangsong relieves a major crisis. Zhang Xiaofan can practice the dual methods with confidence and use them at will. It won't be too unacceptable to know the truth when he doesn't have deep feelings for Pu Zhi.

To use an old saying, there are a thousand worlds of Zhuxian in the eyes of a thousand readers. In my eyes, the world of Zhuxian is a vast world with abundant aura, but the world of immortals who have just begun to practice can live forever (such as the beast god, the yellow bird, and the black water snake before the seal). However, no one has yet explored that realm, so everyone is groping, due to their own ideas. They are different, the environment is different, and the purpose is different, so the path of cultivation is a situation where a hundred flowers bloom and all kinds of frost compete for freedom. Therefore, some become mountain people in order to grow up, and some choose to return to the mortal world with the strongest combat power in order to defend the people and things they care about. The world is very big, but the author's writing power is limited and he needs to describe it slowly. There are some shortcomings in his ability and some omissions. Thank you for your guidance.

Time travel? I feel like a native.

The writing of the battle in this book is too slow. The description of the battle lasts for three or four chapters. However, in the end, not many people died, not even one person died. This is not a loneliness, but the author Shui's good writing skills.

Go to the Arctic Circle to absorb purple energy, catch bugs, and become the supreme leader of the world. Those leaders of the righteous way and giant lords of the evil way are not even qualified to carry your shoes. "How can you become a grandmaster if you have a gun and don't use martial arts?"

Lu Daxin trained Tian Linger to become an outstanding Taoist companion, and he walked with him all the way.

If the protagonist wants to travel across the heavens in the future, I hope she can take Lu Xueqi with her and not be that kind of tool heroine.

The story and creativity are very interesting, but there are too many lyrical descriptions. A description of an action is interspersed with a description of what the action embodies and what feelings he expresses. It's like writing a high school essay.

It would be unreasonable not to build an immortal dynasty 😒

Except for the military part, everything is well written. Come on, the author. Please vote for the monthly recommendations.

The story of Lu Daxin, which lasted for nearly 6 months, has come to an end. Thanks to the book friends for their strong support. To be honest, the author himself did not expect that one day the book he wrote would be recognized by so many book friends. I am really flattered. I would like to thank my editor Qing Huda. If he hadn't picked me up during cross-review, I might not have been able to complete this work. The author is writing a book for the first time and has no experience at all. I have finished the book after stumbling for 6 months. However, my writing power is limited and my experience is insufficient. I have taken many detours and many details are not explained clearly. I will write a few extra chapters when I have time to explain clearly the battle after Lu Daxin entered the sealed land and the situation of Qingyun people after the war, so as to try not to leave any regrets. Finally, fellow Taoists, we have a long way to go, and we will see you in the next book.

These more than 20 monthly tickets are directly to the monthly ticket financiers. Can you please write them carefully?

Lu Xueqi is cute(˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )😊

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?