Heavens: People Are Relying on Heaven, Let My Sword Come Out of Huashan?

I understand the Yitian Huashan, the Red Cross, men take off their jewelry and necklaces, and women take off their jewelry. . . . . .

I don't understand. Many martial arts novels nowadays teach all about swords and swords. It's the same as you practice. Just add some light kung fu and fists and kicks. Why do you learn so much? The most important thing is that most of them are useless.

The beginning was actually good. From the beginning of the treatment of Xian Yutong, I felt weird. They pressured him to go all the way to apologize to Miaojiang Chieftain (Xian Yutong cheated on her), Hu Qingniu (Xian Yutong cheated on his sister, and killed one body and two lives). However, he committed the most and biggest crimes in Huashan (killing a respected senior brother, enriching his own pocket, and killing many people at the last moment). Pressuring him to go out was not so much a plea for apology, but If it is considered that he is lying low to the whole world, Xian Yutong is still alive in the end, and is poisoned and tortured by Miao Jiang, and then given to Hu Qingniu, who is used as a guinea pig by Hu Qingniu and his wife to compete in poisoning and detoxifying. It is better to kill him in front of them. You Huashan gave them face, and the prisoner was sent. Then there is Jinhua Yinye. Hu Qingniu refused to see a doctor for her husband, but Jinhua was directly angry with the protagonist and attacked the protagonist with eight successes. Is this because she came to kill people? The protagonist even went up to the pole to treat Yinye (Jinhua's mother-in-law's husband), just to let Jinhua help you conquer the water village you conquered earlier? It's inappropriate, right? Granny Jinhua is not that worthy of licking, right? (The comment said that she was having an affair with her later, but I didn't read it, so I don't know if it's true) The above is my personal opinion. I watched it in the middle of the night and it made me vomit.

This book is also called "A Martial Arts Rookie Falls in Love with a Menopausal Middle-aged Heroine"

Is there a female protagonist? Can't you create an original heroine?

Had a baby. It's dark and soft. What a rarity. It's poisonous. Pick up Yin Susu's worn-out shoes. Also destroy others' union and separation. I have lived together. Everywhere is almost finished and is rotten. Are you really so inferior that you have never touched a woman? Encourage people to be successors, and there will be no successors.

The timeline is a mess, the plot development is nothing new, and the protagonist's character is not likable. Let's cut it.

The time calculation is wrong! Shooting the Condor is from the late Song Dynasty, and Yitian is from the late Yuan Dynasty! !

Jump to watch, the protagonist now accepts Granny Jinhua and Yin Susu, and likes young women around 30 years old who have given birth to children.

It feels so boring. There are so many opportunities and systems. As a result, after practicing until now, I am not as good as Zhang Wuji when he was this old. Now that Zhang Wuji has returned to the Central Plains, I guess he will be better than the protagonist in a few years.

It is not rude to add a Tathagata palm if there is a system

It feels like there is too little excitement, the timeline seems to be in a mess, and I have no desire to watch it.

Zhou Zhiruo

This is Yue Buqun's first transmission of Zixia Gong. The practice of superior internal strength has standards for superior internal strength. It was Linghu Chong who failed to live up to expectations, not the former who was stingy.

This novel violates the rule of not losing followers in time traveler harem novels: good women should not be missed, and bad women should not be wasted. At present, a lot of them are wasted, Ji Xiaofu, Zhao Min and so on.

Zhao Min

Damn it, no matter what, the old man is here to get you started. You are messing with him. He has no reason to mess with you and use you to make elixirs? Practicing?

The poison started to get worse in the third chapter. You just went up the mountain and you didn't want to choose between the two factions? Are you afraid that you won't die quickly enough?

The protagonist likes fat women, and they are second-hand goods

The disposal of the deposed leader Moss Yutong was garbage at the beginning.

Chapter 3 persuades people to quit. There are currently many people on the Internet who are apprentices to Yue Buqun, and Xian Yutong should be the first. Xian Yutong and Yue Buqun are both hypocrites. Some people write very well, but yours is a bit worse. I don't know if you have read the preface to Ma Sheng in Dongyang. The full text of this article is working, "Yu Li waits around, asking questions, leaning forward to listen; or when he is scolded, "The more respectful you are, the more courteous you are, and you don't dare to say a word; if you are happy, you will ask for it again." You have to pretend to treat this kind of teacher, do you understand, hypocrites usually pretend, you can't always fight against him, on the one hand, you will die, on the other hand, he is your savior. Why are you so stubborn about a savior who has gone astray?

Finally, you became someone else's mistress. I don't think it was because of love!