Elf: Starting from Qingmei Xiaolan

First of all, Pokémon is not very popular at the starting point and belongs to the sewer level. Secondly, among all the Pokémon articles I follow, you are the only one who has written a special chapter. Maybe, but I haven't seen it. Everyone is basically a celebrity. This is a good thing and a bad thing. The good thing is that there is no competition, and the bad thing is that no one reads it. Because the special chapter is not well-known, it is difficult to attract casual fans. In other words, your audience is basically all old Pokémon book lovers. Furthermore, after I read your article, I found a problem. The full text is mediocre and has no explosive points. It feels like drinking plain porridge. There are even a few writing errors. After reading the full text, I turned around and forgot about it. It cannot give people the desire to continue pursuing it. I personally suggest that the author thinks about it carefully. It doesn't matter if it is slow, it must be distinctive! Finally, I still hope that the author can stick to it. After all, Pokémon has been in decline. It's not easy to find someone who writes a special chapter. I still want to continue reading.

The writing is good, but the plot arrangement is not good. I am not criticizing the author's writing style. The interaction between humans and elves, as well as the interaction between humans, are all very well written. The author knows what he is writing about very well. The author has left a lot of blank space in the first three chapters and streamlined a lot of plots to make the plot compact and attract readers to read. But, this is an online novel. The author does not understand what the readers want to see. I will use the first three chapters of the novel to explain. What elements appear in the opening of the third chapter? Protagonist identity, Dr. Oak fell into the sea, another Dr. Oak, parallel universe, mysterious girl, traveling through time and space, elements of Arceus, masked pursuers, Xiaolan, Xiaolan is afraid of birds, and Silver Feather. With so many elements stacked up, readers who are familiar with Pokémon Special and Pokémon The Movie will be able to understand it and will continue to read on. What if you can't understand? What if you are a reader who has never come across special chapters? It's so confusing. Originally, there are not many people who read Pokémon fan fiction. The author's writing method also sets a threshold for special chapters and does not help readers cross this threshold. Therefore, most casual readers have a very poor reading experience. In the case of extremely large amounts of information, readers need to process a large amount of information quickly, and the blank spaces in the plot need to be filled in by themselves, which can easily cause cognitive fatigue and make it difficult to continue reading. For example, when reading an article full of technical terms, the reader feels "out of breath" and chooses to give up reading because he cannot follow the plot. This situation is mainly related to the author's plot arrangement and whether he thinks from the reader's perspective, and has nothing to do with the writing style. In the case of a large amount of blank settings, the lack of reasonable explanations and logical transitions between information makes it difficult for readers to establish a clear understanding and understand the rationality and logic of the settings, which reduces the credibility of the novel's content. If readers have an incoherent perception, it will be difficult to retain readers to follow up. And readers need to understand the story in order to empathize with the characters, but the accumulation of information hinders understanding and makes it difficult for readers to be emotionally involved. If the characters experience complex and unexplained backgrounds, it is difficult for readers to empathize with them. This is like why so many novels start with time travel or amnesia, because the reader's perspective and the author's description start from scratch, and the information is synchronized to facilitate emotions. Writing so much is not to criticize the author, but to analyze the author's perception from the reader's perspective. Even though the author's writing style is good, he persisted in writing so much, and his love for Pokémon can be seen. I hope he can continue his efforts and organize the plot better. After all, Rome was not built in a day, so just take your time. ㊗️The more you write, the better

Well, I just got it. Looking at the introduction, the initial elf is Chenglong? This kind of large aquatic Pokémon is not easy to release and interact with frequently, which makes it a bit more difficult for you.

To be honest, the subject matter is quite interesting, but the quantity is so small that I don't have the desire to read it. Please vote to support it

Wc, Xiaolan, I promise to order all of this, as long as the writing is not too bad.

Does it look good? Can you see it? He won't die, right?

Can any friends explain to me Xiaolan's encounters and background before the timeline of this book? I have not read the original work 🙂