I Really Didn't Want to Cut Miss Witch in Half!

If the Emperor be beheaded, wouldn't the spoil be the Empire?

Tsk, the two-dimensional writing technique is too strong and I can't stand it.

What can I say, the author should keep working hard. When I first found this book, I thought the setting was quite interesting. But it feels weird when I read it later. For example, the mercenary group members were unfavorable to the protagonist and were killed. The mercenary leader wanted to kill the protagonist because the group rules did not allow internal fighting. Although there is the author's setting that "the team is not allowed to fight within the team", it is still a bit flawed logically. After all, in reality, no country has the legal right to counterattack in self-defense. Writing this way feels fragmented. Then there is the issue of the protagonist's three views. Taking the heroine to steal people's money is not impossible to write in this way. After all, there are also people who follow the dark and self-interested stream at the beginning. But the character design you gave the heroine in front of me is a very positive character. If you write it this way, the character design of the heroine will be lost. I have only read sixteen chapters, the writing is limited, and the review may be too one-sided. I wish the author gets better and better and his works sell well.

Don't you think it's too much of a digression? As for the other Elaine, I didn't even mention it. There has been intrigues here.

This is a completely traditional Japanese light novel, which is different from the current localized light novels. It is estimated that the audience will not be too large.

It's relatively pure and quite good, but most people may think it's too light novel.

Let me say it first, the writing is pretty good, and some plots are handled well. Of course, it may be because it is too Japanese light novel. I felt this way when I read Neon's light novel. Then the bad thing is, the introduction is deceptive, except that the split into two is real, there is no plot about the two witches that I want to see, and the male protagonist actually chooses not to let the witch know that she has been split into two. The male protagonist is too two-dimensional. In ancient Japanese comics, the male protagonist wanted to be very powerful but it felt like a waste house. The main plot and direction were unclear. Did the male protagonist really just think that he saved the witch? He definitely didn't want to become stronger, it felt like he was copying a cat and imitating a tiger...

I thought I wanted the two of them to get to know each other again, but who knows?

The plot was good, but it gave me a headache watching it. . . Some people think the writing is good. . . I think the opposite. . .

Now that I'm updating, I really feel like what I've written. The protagonist pretends to be a pig and is really a pig. He has the ability to kill people to gain special characteristics. Instead of developing them, he always wants to cause trouble. The conditions for killing the god are just stated and then it's over. In the past, it was like the protagonist restrained the God of Destiny. Now he only looks like a clown. When he gains the ability to kill others, he can obviously find the mini-boss in the version to kill. Anyway, this book is not as good as writing a romance novel in which the protagonist is invincible from the beginning. What kind of fantasy novel should I write?

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. The previous ones are obviously okay, but the writing without foreshadowing and relying solely on added settings is rubbish. It is written about the time traveler who has not yet understood the world, but it can also be used as a discovery. It is written about the world that has been known for a long time, and it is obvious that there are so many plug-ins that can be obtained. It is so like to participate in the things between gods. It would be good to just kill the Vulcan. In the previous plot, it doubles the talent. Killing the Snow Spirit is not a kill? An additional setting can be added to the end. A slut has desires for his biological sister. A person who gives such a high performance due to his strong character turns out to be a weak princess. Is the protagonist still unbeatable with his true strength? If you kill someone to gain talent, you won't be able to understand magic.

First of all, after reading the overall plot, this novel lacks an outline. It can be seen that when I wrote the introduction, I had anticipated what the later development would be like. But when I was writing, I deviated from my own ideas, and there were a lot of hidden clues and foreshadowings buried in the novel. Maybe it was because I couldn't continue writing until the end, so I ended it hastily. First of all, the writing is good, including the thoughts and ideas of the heroine and the protagonist are all online. The overall tone of the novel is also very good. Basically this novel is quite mature. But after reading this novel, the author began to let himself go. To be precise, the later line authors had a lot of ideas. But in the end it was not written. Or maybe I didn't write what I imagined. There are several logical problems in the early novels, including the problem of the tavern and the group leader that many people mentioned. First of all, you can't kill each other in the tavern, but you can definitely defend yourself too much. This evil person can be fooled by his opponent, who wants to steal wealth, kill people, and fly away. As a result, the protagonist's ability was unclear and he was killed. After the follow-up team leader learned about it, he gave a fair attitude. Finally left peacefully. This leads to the previous point. The protagonist has not shown his talent and is considered a somewhat powerful ordinary person in the team. The protagonist's abilities can be made triggerable. But the triggers are divided into white, purple, red and gold. White is equivalent to triggering ordinary abilities with a small probability, such as smell, poison resistance, night vision, and agility. Purple is equivalent to triggering life occupations, such as cooking, painting, gathering, praying, and swimming. Simply put, it is the logistics ability that can be obtained through years of practice. Red is skills. Gold represents talents and characteristics. This ability is to divide the exploded reward into two, and can divide the loot into two. A copy of the loot will lie in its own loot space, and sometimes rare and other strange things can be revealed. Just some of the personal talents above. But the chance is very small. Because there are gods in this world. And these gods. To be precise, they are not good people. There are even ancient gods who want to be resurrected in this town. But through later versions of the game, it's known that this ancient god controls destiny. But because this god is still alive, he is currently unable to be omniscient and omnipotent. His blessing is that the last explosion rate can be constant. So the protagonist is imperative. After in-depth planning, this blessing must be obtained. So he stayed anonymous in this small town. Say something else. The powers of all gods are properties, and theoretically, they can be killed through their properties. The blessings of gods are also exerted through characteristics, but the characteristics of gods are a bit different. They represent the truth of the world. The previous empire tried to study characteristics. They were destroyed by the plans of fate and other gods, but the gods did not expect that they had actually researched something, so they suffered heavy losses and survived. Only the goddess of magic divided herself into seven parts and escaped, but the goddess of magic is equivalent to dead, and the seven existences are her children. Inherits the characteristics of 1/7. Only the seven characteristics together are considered magical characteristics, so he and the founder of the Karl Empire at the time worked together to promote magic. Also destroy all the research on the characteristics of the former empire, and at the same time allow yourself to recover quickly, mutually benefiting, and cheating your fate. This is why Fate and the Goddess of Magic hate each other. The protagonist is in this small town. Being able to be in this mercenary group relies on his abilities such as perception, night vision, identifying wild plants, identifying wild beasts, making traps, and finding and hiding wild beasts. He does not need to play, but he is a very, very comprehensive support. The mercenary group is particularly in need of this kind of talent. And his cooking is particularly delicious. And he is also accumulating strength here. While looking for props and opportunities in later versions, but currently, he must get the blessing of the God of Destiny. This is the first step to get closer. Because in the future, every version of the boss will be impossible to defeat without hacking. And because in the future, version 9.0, A world-destroying witch is ready to destroy the world. But. A little accident happened today. I followed the mercenary group to defeat the Forbidden Demon Colossus. But he discovered a future world-destroying witch in his loot space. The child broke into cold sweat in an instant. After returning, everyone was sent away. After moving the Forbidden Demon Colossus away, I found that there was a girl in his core. Wait a minute, why are you here? Looking at the sleeping girl and the dormant magic flashing on her body, cold sweat broke out instantly when she saw the girl in the trophy space. Did I split the future witch of death into two? A witch is going to be destroyed in the future, and now I create another one for him? Played off. The most important thing is why is the witch here? Why in this colossus? At this time, aren't you escaping pursuit and hiding your name? No wonder no one can find it. It turned out to be hiding inside the Forbidden Demon Colossus. The future witch has special characteristics. And was pursued by the goddess of magic. At the same time, this experience of being hunted also made him fight harder and harder, and finally turned completely dark and turned into a world-destroying witch (the protagonist is anonymous because he has special characteristics and has to hide it) (First of all, let the heroine know that the protagonist also has special characteristics, and is naturally hunted by the enemy camp of the goddess of magic. It is equivalent to the protagonist and the heroine being in the same camp. At the same time, set the same goal for the protagonist and the heroine, so that they can travel together in the future and work together for this goal, instead of the heroine directly killing him and snatching him when he gets something good in the future.) After the protagonist rescues the heroine, he introduces him to the mercenary group anonymously and introduces this to the outside world as his sister. Then he gave the heroine an artifact that could hide her appearance. The next step is to be attacked. Because of the protagonist's special ability, he can sense the actions of the snow spirit in advance (he has killed the snow spirit before, has the ability to sense the snow spirit, and demonstrated it when the mercenary group attacked the snow spirit armor king). This way you can hit a small town and catch it off guard. Unexpectedly, this was all arranged by the male protagonist in advance. Because he knew the next snow spirit disaster. It is to seduce the mastermind behind the scenes, so that he can have a reason to tell everyone about the snow spirit disaster in the future. In the end, he and the group leader succeeded in catching the inner ghost, but the group leader discovered that the inner ghost turned out to be a dragon-blooded person. The leader is still thinking about why there are dragon-blooded people in the mercenary group? He also wants to kill his own members. At this moment, someone rushed in and said that there was an ice disaster outside the city and approaching the town. (In an ice disaster, the ground turns into ice blocks due to the enrichment of elements, and the ice blocks continue to push toward residential areas due to the extrusion of the ice blocks). Then the protagonist said that there is big trouble this time. First experience the first expansion pack. The town is attacked. As for the game, there must be a version update. The first expansion pack for Novice Village would be better for Xue Ling. Then we will definitely use the power of the mercenary group to defend the town together. 1.1: Snow Spirit Disaster Task, investigate the occurrence of Snow Spirit Disaster. Process. First, an ice disaster destroyed the town. Then start the low temperature. Then came the blizzard. Finally, the snow spirit wreaked havoc. And the first boss of this information chapter. The Great Snow Spirit King and a Frost Dragon. Finally, the frost dragon is killed by the protagonist. The Frost Dragon is to revive its own clan, the dragon clan. Obtain a key to a secret realm, and this secret realm is the ruined remains of the kingdom of the God of Destiny. They want to get the power of the God of Destiny and fight against the Goddess of Magic. They're almost there. But in the end, the male protagonist and the female protagonist came to the Kingdom of God. But this is actually the manipulation of the God of Fate. The Frost Dragon was manipulated by the God of Fate without knowing it. It's a pity that the God of Destiny's plan was interrupted by the male protagonist. After the protagonist killed the frost dragon, people were dumbfounded again. Why did someone fall out of the frost dragon? It was discovered that it was Miss Long who was numbered in the later period. Miss Long was numbered by the God of Destiny in the later period. By the way, the God of Destiny took over most of the dragon clan. As long as someone from the Dragon Clan can revive them. It feels even better to have a god standing behind me. And now the male protagonist sees a Miss Long in the space. There is a Miss Long outside. The head is big. I didn't act like this during the plot. What's wrong is that he is hiding inside the frost dragon. The second expansion pack. 1.2 Destiny Shadow The god of destiny killed the male protagonist. Taking over the male protagonist's body. And through destiny cards (fate cards strengthen one's own attributes, there are 10 cards in total, the first one has a 100% chance, the second one has a 10% chance, the third one has a 1% chance, and so on.) Destiny uses cards first to strengthen its own attributes. Then he gave himself a blessing. Force your odds to be 100%. But at this time. The hero's backhand allowed him to take the lead, and the God of Destiny was thrust into his body, and at the same time the blessing took effect, 100% activated. Gain the destiny attribute. (In the original plot, Frost Dragon and Miss Long entered the ruins and were taken over by fate. Destiny accumulated strength and manipulated many major events in the later period under Miss Long's title) Now. The protagonist uses the power of fate to manipulate many major events, because the game version and plot are the greatest guarantee. So the protagonist tries not to deviate from the version. It used to be the God of Destiny, standing in that position. But now he has become the protagonist. Next, open two nodes. A Miss Long first went to the empire to make plans. After all, the God of Destiny still needs someone to open up destiny. Another Miss Long followed the male protagonist. Two plots await the male protagonist to continue his development in the empire. This time. The male protagonist scratched his head and finally explained to the female protagonist. In fact, I also cut you in half. Then the heroine in the space was released. Looking at each other with big eyes and small eyes. Next is the interlude: there will definitely be some transitional plots after the major version of the game ends. Including post-disaster reconstruction. Some tasks after the disaster. As well as some information about dragons and gods in detail. Includes a weapon, a weapon with characteristics. A weapon capable of inhabiting a god. Of course, the most important thing is the heroine's aftermath and sugar issues. You can write about life in a small town and the process of finding weapons. Exploring a different world definitely requires a team. Miss Long is a warrior, the heroine is a mage, and the protagonist is a wet nurse. Have you ever seen a talking book? That is the protagonist's weapon. The book records the Great Resurrection Technique and the Divine Technique. The protagonist can play a guest role as a priest. Then there is the heroine's staff. Of course this was her former staff. Miss Long also needs a set of light armor. Then open the third expansion pack. Version 1.3: Former Braves I think there are still many things to discover about those who resisted the empire in the past. Now in the Karl Empire, a statue must be erected to the former man. And this little town on the way. It was the original starting point of the brave man. Gather your allies, receive God's blessings, and finally overthrow the previous empire. So the town is now a small city. In the middle of the city is the statue. Versions 1.1 And 1.2. It is to reveal the characteristics, talents, dragons, gods, and three forces to players, all gathered together. Let everyone understand the world. Version 1.3 Introduces the development of the empire. And why it became what it is now. Including the original epic adventure. Let players slowly learn about the empire. In this small town, the protagonist saw the remnants of the old era. Those people from the old empire conspired. There is also a mercenary group here. The three parties are complex. Then the third princess came to this place to give a speech. As a result, he was killed by a mercenary group. Of course, behind it is the remnants of the old era. Because they want to use the mercenary group and the third princess to be killed. To cover up their rituals. And this ritual is related to the first brave man. . . . . Damn, I have so much I want to write. I can't talk anymore, and I can't sleep if I talk anymore. Then after this matter is resolved. After getting in touch with the royal family, we arrived at the royal capital. It turned out that a larger vortex was inside. Because it is above the royal capital. They are 7 magical goddesses.

This is not simple, you only need to establish a cycle of first occupying something, then deliberately losing in rock-paper-scissors, letting the male protagonist copy it, and then reassigning the obtained items to yourself By simply performing dozens of such operations, you can create a supermassive black hole out of thin air, and then destroy the world With such a big killer in hand, do you still need to pursue the combat power of a witch if you want to destroy the world?

Suppose you meet a beautiful young evil villain who is beautiful and slutty in every book, and she is transformed into the original person or a corpse with a knife, a freshly baked and uncontaminated beautiful young woman 😰😏😏😏 Wouldn't this become a journey to save the beautiful villain from another world?

These chapters are so boring. I really don't know why I have to write this Princess B plot. It's so boring.

Can the author please reply to me? Do you have any knives?

The subject matter was well chosen, but the writing was not very good. I gave up after reading two chapters.

This kind of plot tests writing skills, and you may not be able to master it in the middle and later stages.

I need to update. I quite like this book.