Honghuang: Mr. Mu Dexing Must Live in Peace!

Of course there are poorly written works. Please don't attack them. If you don't want to read them, don't read them. Don't attack them. The author has no ill intentions and he is also growing. Everyone has those who support and those who do not support, those who dislike and those who like it. There is no need to force others to be the same as you. So please stop saying this.

I remembered that Tianlu Xingjun was in Shuiqun again today

What should I say? The content is quite nonsense, quite nonsense.

Because I was following the author, I clicked on his homepage and discovered this book. Looking at the title and introduction, I thought I might give it a try. Having read 20 to 30% of the book, I feel a little bit offended, but the author said there is a reason, a setting, and an outline design, so keep reading. After reading 60%, there are some things I really want to say: 1. Daily writing is not a running account. Not to mention the ups and downs of the plot, the ups and downs of the narrative, there is no suspense or hook at all, and the development of the story has nothing that readers can expect, it is as bland as water. 2. There are too many bad jokes. Bad memes don't mean that the memes themselves are bad, but that the memes appear out of time and are too dramatic. I feel like if you delete all the memes and leave only the story, the review might be better. Secondly, these memes are either popular memes in the comment sections of existing online articles, or outdated internet memes. If you want to make things better as an author, you can consider doing a lot of work on the plot yourself, and don't carry bad memes on a daily basis. 3. Character creation. I understand that living longer does not mean how much you can grow, because character growth is related to experience. What the protagonist has experienced in a thousand years may not be more than one year in modern times. But all the characters are too flat, such as the silly and sweet loli Kang Jinlong, the decadent beauty Qinglong, the imperial sister Feng Doumu, and the controlling sister Fuxi. The characteristics of the characters are not simply to label the characters. It is the readers' business to turn characters into labels. Mentioning a certain label will directly realize a certain character, not what the author does in writing novels. 4. Although readers often ridicule some authors, "What do you say when they complain about everything?", Others write in a rhythmic manner and will not cause drama. The focus is not on complaining but on the story, and complaining is also a part of it. In this novel, the author is not like an author, but more like a reader, who started writing the novel on a whim. In fact, I feel that this book is just for occasional entertainment, especially when there is a book shortage, but the memory points will not be very deep. I may forget it if I throw it on the bookshelf. Ignore the small poisonous points in the front and barely count it as hay. I put this book on my bookshelf and occasionally open it to read. I support the new author, but I hope to see the author's progress, otherwise it will be meaningless.

Successfully created a new genre of kindergarten

The author writes well, and it's okay to update four chapters in one go.

It's a bit similar to a book called Tianluxing Only Wants Water Qun

Chapter 67 ends at the most difficult part. This and the aggrieved plot either need to be explained quickly in a few more chapters or explained in one chapter and slapped in the face.

Although I don't read Honghuang novels very much, you just read them casually here and count the data, but there are still some things I have to say. Whether you listen to them or not is up to the author. That is, your writing is a bit scattered. Of course, I still say the same thing. I basically don't read Honghuang novels. Maybe Honghuang is written in this way. Then I can only give one sincere suggestion, that is, the author should think of the ending of the book as soon as possible. Only when the ending is thought of well can the prose be kept intact. Otherwise, if you keep doing this, I'm afraid you will eventually lose control and destroy yourself!

If you can, please leave your valuable comments! ! ! Come to the last chapter when you have time! ! ! ! Thank you baby! ! ! !

Innate Star God? When the demon clan refines the Zhoutian Star Dou Formation, they will die. Either they will resist the demon clan and be refined into a flag, or they will be recruited and die in the battle between the lich and the lich.

It's not as good-looking as Tianlu's book, and it feels much worse. Emmm, this one feels like a diaosi's portrait of women. I don't know what style the author wants to write. In the past, I was just a little bit of a cultivator, running around everywhere, and then carelessly asking others for things, saying I owed karma, emmm. Maybe I wanted to write the protagonist in a more exciting way, but I didn't see the outstanding points. I felt a bit inferior and just for the sake of being funny...

Hehe! Abandoned! Not my thing!

I don't know where the author came to follow me, so I clicked in out of curiosity, and at first glance I thought it was a female channel. I don't understand the introduction, but it seems to have Cthulhu elements. The reviews seem to be good and it's from Xianxia, ​​so I'll put it on the bookshelf first.