If You Do Evil, All the Gods Will Become Talented

What did you write in these three golden chapters? Are you screening readers? They are a mess.

Gives a feeling of insanity

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It's confusing. Is there no outline? You just write about Wearing, stripping away the sense of touch from your fingers and heart, and possessing others. These two are enough, and it's meaningless if you add more. Just remove the messy communication consciousness. Wearing I control my finger and heart, and look for the feeling when writing. Currently, there is a bunch of garbled characters between the lines, which is too pale and poor.

Come on, this book won't do well.

Forget about everything else, this Daiqing is not the official Qing harem, it is too ugly to be mentioned.

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The first three chapters are really messy, but it gets much better in the later chapters. Overall, the book is very colorful (yellow).

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The mess doesn't look good at all

The first few chapters are a little confusing, but the rest is pretty good.

Actually you can write better

The author has written several books, and the first three chapters confused me.

Your Yue Buqun's book "The Great Desolate" is about to be finished?

Give me a thumbs up, you are such an awesome author, I want to pay attention and follow you for updates