This Is Swallowing Starry Sky, Not Resident Evil

In terms of basic settings of fan works, it is best not to make too many mistakes. If the basic settings are too wrong, the overall evaluation will be lowered. No matter how much and fluently you write, it will be a thankless effort. Because I think it can still be read, I am making suggestions, and it is also to improve the quality of the work, which is beneficial to both readers and authors. I won't talk about the previous questions. I have seen the world of Blood Luo. After the world lord dies, the world inside his body will explode. What is being searched for is the stuff that explodes from the world inside his body, not the storage ring. The inner world is the most convenient and safe storage place for realm owners. Generally, valuable things are placed in the inner world. Not long ago in Xueluo World, I also saw a description of a higher gene multiplier of the Manka Star bloodline. Such errors in basic settings were too dramatic and lowered the evaluation. If humans have bloodlines with more than 2 times the genetic multiple, Blood Luo Crystal and Black Warrior will be worthless. Human blood represents the realm of cultivation that can be achieved in adulthood without practicing cultivation, such as planetary level and stellar level, and there is no description of genetic multiples. If the bloodline has a gene multiplier bonus, wouldn't the original bloodline evolution agent be able to increase the gene multiplier? Can the Blood Luo Crystal be so valuable? The three earthly brothers in the original work used the bloodline evolution agent, but there was no description of their gene multiples or how many times their power increased. Gene multiples involve taboos in the original universe, and it is not easy to improve them. If it is more than 10 times, even if it is a special life, it should not be able to reproduce in the normal way. The Golden-Horned Behemoth should have the highest gene multiplier among ordinary lives, and its reproduction is a life-for-life method. Judging from its reproductive ability, it looks a bit like a special life. Although the original work does not say whether humans have more than twice the number of genes, there are many corroborating claims from the side. For example, the effect of the bloodline evolution agent mentioned before, such as the number and reproductive capacity of the population, such as the confidential information authority of the Blood Crystal, only those with Venerable and above can be circulated through auctions. Only high-level immortals from big forces can know this. Immortals who are not from big forces don't know this. Luo Feng said after he successfully cultivated the Nine Tribulations Secret Code in the second calamity of the human body, it could be comparable to the blood of the demon royal family, which proved that the demon royal family only had 6 times the genes. This was also one of the reasons why the demon royal family looked down on the human race. Resources that increase gene multipliers are generally only accessible to venerables. Below the Immortal level, the only resource that can be stably produced is Blood Crystal. The most critical point is that the original book said that the human body is very small in the universe, usually only a few meters high. This is also a reflection of the low gene multiple. Look at how tall Luo Feng's human divine body is, and then look at the immortal height of ordinary humans, and you will understand. Finally, let me talk about my views on the world background setting. The setting of cultivating immortals in the main world is a bit weird, because this setting of gaining benefits by conquering the world is more like the wizard style, which is wrong with the background of cultivating immortals. Especially after the world master made the world public, other people's approach to assisting in the strategy was genocide, which has no morality at all. No matter how bad the world of immortal cultivators is, only demon cultivators will exterminate life indiscriminately for the sake of profit. There is also a void setting similar to Cthulhu, which does not fit well with this world background. In this type of strategy for the heavens, there is such an unclear setting, which feels inconsistent. Because this anti-human setting is not only unreasonable, but also makes the plot look a bit messy, as if there are some extra things that don't match the style of painting.

The three chapters are extremely poisonous, causing several big lumps. But everyone swore that it would be fine after three chapters. I endured the nausea for three chapters. Chapter 8 I can't stand it and leave. I believe your evil deeds. Writing a fanfic about Devouring the Starry Sky, I can't even figure out the basic settings. What a shame for you.

According to the setting of this book, the low level of the dungeon may be due to the problem of openness. From what I read in the first few chapters, the protagonist's openness is very consistent with the first-level evaluation.

He was directly poisoned and died. What I was thinking about didn't even enter the tomatoes.

It's too poisonous. Is this for children? Do you still have proof? It's no longer popular now. Gou is the king. What's the point of waiting for you to become great?

Chapter 2 can't be solved directly by me! In addition to the age of the time travel, the protagonist is already 40 years old, but the protagonist behaves like a primary school student. Can the author confess how old he is?

The three golden chapters are written as three chapters of defense. I can't count the poisonous points in the three chapters. 😄

It smells like a girl's novel from ten years ago

It will be boring to abuse the master later... The greater the change in the world, the greater the backlash. The greater the backlash in the world, the more the protagonist will change. Isn't this an infinite loop? In the end, either the world will be destroyed or the protagonist will be gone →_→

The beginning is extremely poisonous, the female author or the kid brother? Let the author write a short play 😅😅😅😅 Who doesn't know the ultimate virtue of cultivating immortality? Are you afraid that you won't be enslaved quickly enough?

After thinking about it again, I will come back and talk about it. The ancestral tomb volcano erupts at the beginning, and you are sent to heaven at the beginning. This is not just oil, it is much richer than the gold mine of the gold miners. You know the specific value, Blind Eye King: You are a waste Everyone: Waste Protagonist: I am really not a waste, this value is incredible, try again, I want to go to a key university. You:………… It's almost like you have no strength but are shouting in the swallowing starry sky universe that the earth is a treasure refined by mountaineers, not an indigenous planet. Damneng: I, junior, quickly let go of the opportunities. These opportunities are not something you can interfere with. DaPuDuShu is arranged for you

Chapter 2: How many people were poisoned to death? Who's looking behind them after they've been poisoned to death?

After reading the first few chapters, the character of the protagonist is not good and his mentality is too bad.

New Taoist friends, welcome to the comment area. I haven't read more than two chapters and I quickly came to the comment area to take a look 😅😅😅😅 I feel like there are no good female videos in front of me. There are so many comments and a lot of disdain. Everyone agrees that the front is extremely poisonous. Are you sure this is not the kind of brainless heroine in a female channel? ? ? 😅😅😅😅😅😅 It really doesn't look like a male video, because the normal protagonist of the male video will just leave quickly and continue to develop, instead of proving anything.

This introduction is overwhelming. Did this author still live eight years ago?

The low rating of the copy is probably because the protagonist is mentally retarded. The protagonist's talent is quite good

Don't always suppress the protagonist's growth. There are no cheats in the main world, and slow growth is normal. But with such good conditions as Devouring the World, if it were anyone else, at least the ten major laws would be recognized by the laws. The protagonist started to develop decades ahead of Luo Feng, but he was overtaken by Luo Feng in the law of space that he was best at. His understanding of this law was too much.

No, please don't send random messages. This one is quite nice, but the first two or three pictures are a little bit toxic, and then it becomes quite interesting. The first two or three. Introducing the main world. You can then play Devouring Starry Sky directly. The new ideas are quite interesting.

Isn't it a bit far-fetched to think that he was hunted when he first emerged from the universe? Can a universe-level family know whether the strong man who covers the coordinates of the dark universe has died? Even if he knew he was the inheritor of immortality, whether he dared to pursue him or not is another question. . . Secondly, I think the chance of being intercepted if you fly in any direction in the face of pursuit is infinitely small. . . What level of detector can find the protagonist in the vast universe? The scale of the dark universe and the primitive universe is 1:10080000! In the dark universe, if light travels at the speed of a few seconds and then exits, it has traveled a light-year! After entering the dark universe for one minute, it is already more than ten light years away when you emerge. . .

This novel disgusts me. It's really disgusting.

Is the realm of the protagonist's body too chaotic? , Write the realm better,

I suggest you take the time to revise the first part. The second part is obviously good, but the first few chapters have made people run away.

What did you write? There are poisonous points everywhere and it's a mess.

I took a look at the book circle and found that there was a very outrageous comment. It was an account that had just been registered for a day. All the negative comments were about this book, and they were concentrated in chapters 301~313 and 317~328.

The subject matter of this article is novel and the setting is tight. However, it is obvious that there is no experience in the plot. Fortunately, the author's writing skills are good and it will not get out of control. Overall, it is recommended.