Return a Hundredfold to Cultivate the Land and Cultivate Immortality

I cheated on my sister behind the scenes and used my golden finger in front of my sister.

The other party gave you a heroine, and you decided to return a hundred heroines a hundredfold?

The whole process was baffling, baffling, and baffling.

This Yu Zhang is quite inexplicable. He is a mere ordinary person who has not even embarked on the road of cultivating immortals. His body is broken and he has not been cleaned yet.

In Chapter 45, the protagonist himself puts forward the reform proposal of establishing a harmonious society where immortals and mortals are integrated, all people ascend, and immortal cultivators protect mortals. Chapter 50 is the key to enlightenment. Those mortal users will not feel bad if they give up all of them. I don't agree with my own opinions at all. So far, mortals are basically the protagonist's tools and consumables. The way the demon appears is also a failure. If the demon is bound to appear 1. The time of appearance should be set at the highest point of the turbidity, when natural and man-made disasters are at their strongest. The locust plague, coupled with the ideas and techniques spread by the protagonist, set off a refugee rebellion under the instigation of thoughtful people, and they broke into the city and had a meal with resentment. 2. The location must have an immortal background. In places like ancient capitals, the opportunities for generation can be closely related to people. 3. After the protagonist explodes, due to the flesh and blood refined by the shock wave, the Yin attribute dream, etc., The right time, place and people merge into one, creating a formless demon related to the suffering of all living beings. For example, A uses the protagonist's martial arts to create his own magic power, using force, resourcefulness and the protagonist's ideological deception to coerce the refugees to attack the ancient capital. After setting up an altar to generate a dream with a negative attribute, he is discovered by the protagonist. Because of the danger, the protagonist decides to abandon the dream and kill people, blowing up A into pieces. Blood, turbidity, and resentment gathered into a demon on the defunct formations and altars of the ancient capital city. Then the protagonist grew up and decided to exterminate the demon. When exterminating the demon, he obtained a dream of Yin attributes (the demon needs to remove personal characteristics. It is the way of the world that turns a group of people into demons. The protagonist should not be too strong to destroy it. The righteous way must have actions. The demon should not directly target the protagonist, but the protagonist should target the demon)

I was originally expecting Goldfinger to be repaid a hundredfold, but the plot unfolded like a lunatic, it was too abstract, bro. What are you going to do?

This kind of conceptual golden finger is afraid that its own logic is not rigorous, and that's really it, haha

The writing started well, but the plot design of the remaining chapters is a piece of shit. Did you write it based on the fake fairy tale in the bloody TV series? 😰Watch less TV dramas.

Is it related to farming? In the finale, the protagonist will go farming.

The protagonist is a cultivator, and then goes to dance practice. Can you believe it, he keeps pushing his level?

Isn't it funny to ask a hundred monks in the Cave Heaven Paradise to be sucked dry? You directly said that cultivating immortals is a mystery... If only one person knew it, it would be sequence 0

What are these pictures written on? Are they obscene?

Goldfinger can't even tell the protagonist apart, but someone who can assimilate the protagonist is gone in an instant. . . Are you deliberately being disgusting? Elementary school student or studio AI? ? The novel you generated has too many holes. . .

You can watch something new without thinking

What you write is just like the devil, you are the devil cultivators wearing skin.

The last few chapters have been too subversive and too discouraging. If you don't have the writing skills, don't write those subversive plots. Change it to normality now that you haven't written much. If you don't change it, it won't be a problem and no one will read it.

There is only one sentence: It's very depressing to watch.

It felt like a lot of content was taken for granted, and the family villain at the beginning was not written well.

The writing is complicated and a bit messy, and has no practical meaning.

The protagonist has a large pattern, and it is rare to see a work that uses cheats to this extent. After initially solving the survival problem, the protagonist changes from passively using cheats to becoming more and more subjective. He makes full use of the functions of cheats to promote the evolution of civilization and feed back self-evolution, constantly discovering and solving problems, and an experiment in the process caused... It's just that some of the early plots may have seemed a bit strange at the time, but they are reasonable in terms of humanistic logic. Compared with the creativity displayed in the article, it's okay not to mention them. In short, the shortcomings are not concealed. The author has great potential!

Why is such an interesting novel not popular? Why only 36 comments?

Is this writing broken? It was pulled too fast.

It's different from what I thought. I agreed to farm and you'll start a company.