Fulilian: Starting Wind Spirit Moon Shadow, Game World

Except that the emotional line is not delicate enough, there is no problem

The original setting was for a single female protagonist, otherwise the timeline would not have been set when the Demon King's army was about to massacre Fulian's village. But then I wrote more than a dozen chapters and realized something was wrong. Because Fulian's character design cannot give positive feedback. When it comes to falling in love, buying and writing things, girls will still say it's great and great, but Fulian can't. Even if she buys a city and a copy of her favorite magic, she will only say a verbal thank you. ——Thank you is the most useless feedback. Writing like this becomes a licking of a dog. Big poisonous spot. So the rest of the plot was changed overnight. In addition, Fengling Yueying has a weak growth line and a weak career line at the beginning. It is better to switch to multiple female protagonists and develop the emotional line. Lest you write hundreds of thousands of words without content expansion and then collapse. ps: Although Fenglingyueying is suitable for speedrunning, this book is not suitable for speedrunning, even if the protagonist is invincible at the beginning, because Fulilian has no main plot in the first place, and relies on the emotional line to develop the plot, pretending to be cool and so on. After completing the real speed run, I will start over in the next world. The plot will be the same, and it will collapse if I don't get 500,000 yuan. It's like playing a game with a hang-up function. You can clear the level in three seconds, but after a while it becomes electronic. No one likes to play games like this.

To be honest, the male protagonist is more like an ordinary person who has just obtained the power of a creator god and is on the way to learn in a world with a creator god.

Mainly magic, that is, the setting of the protagonist's abilities (combat power) other than Wind Spirit Moon Shadow. According to Fulillian's world view, the basis of magic is imagination. The following pictures can explain everything in detail: Summary: 1: Magic is made up of imagination. If you can't think of it, you will definitely not be able to do it. If you can imagine it perfectly and understand the principle, there is a certain probability that you can do it if you believe it. 2: Magic can create substances that do not belong to the current world. (Still have to think about it) ...... Secondly: Timeline Flame lived a thousand years ago, which means that a thousand years ago was the ancient period. Beyond the ancient times is the mythical period, the creation of the goddess, the first era. It is unclear when the Age of Mythology began, but it probably ended when the Sword of the Brave was born, because the legend in the world view is that the Sword of the Brave was created to kill the Demon King. Two thousand years before the Sword of the Brave appeared, this means that two thousand years before the demons appeared, there must be a big event at the end of the mythical age. Picture: Forty-nine generations of village chiefs, the generations before and after, average one generation for 40 years, which is two thousand years. …… Finally, it should be gone. If I have to say it, it's race. In Fulian, except for the mythical era, there have been only four races since the ancient times. Dwarves (average life span of two hundred to three hundred years) Humans (average life span of 70 years) Elves (average life span of ∞) - nearly infinite. Finally, the demons. (The average lifespan is more than a thousand years old, and can be longer, this is what Mahat said, and Fulian corroborated it) Demons have aging, but elves do not exist, or even if they do exist, they are hybrids. I don't know if there are hybrids in the worldview, but at least it doesn't mention that humans and elves are infertile. This rather ambiguous setting is available by default. Unless the plot behind it is real. ...... The demons were not created by the goddess. They evolved from monsters, similar to apes to humans, and are non-replicable. Another: There are no slimes, goblins and other monsters in Frilian's worldview ...... Additions are welcome

The rest is okay, but it's a bit stale, there's too much nonsense, even a few rookie robbers got several shots, and the pretense is too stiff.

It's not bad. The heroine's design is quite close to the original work, but the protagonist's personality is not like that of a migrant worker. It's too peaceful. To exaggerate, she doesn't have any desires.

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The author's writing is too thin. But I can't give any advice.

I saw some book friends saying that Chapter 141 is still about eunuchs. There are many female protagonists in the harem, so we don't pay much attention to this, right? Isn't the title of this book just for falling in love? If you don't fall in love, it's just a ghost.

The writing is average, and the character dialogue is sparsely written in some places, but it's not too poisonous, and it's still readable.

Don't worry about the rhythm. I was called a eunuch for no reason. Which of the two characters, Celie and Fulian, can be successful without any emotional scenes? You can't get married to a nine-year-old Volamei, right? The 300,000-word guide to General Seriai is already very fast. Do you have to get a stallion with 100,000 words?

I feel that the character of the protagonist is the kind of person who can go to a temple and work as a monk, eat fast and chant Buddha without any problem for decades without contact with anyone. It may be a bit exaggerated, but the description in the book is too indifferent, and the plot is a bit boring. It would be better if it was a little streamlined.

This novel is like an apple, the most common red apple that has not been improved. There are no flaws or highlights. What original fruit.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's just a bit bland. I've just watched some related short videos and I can watch it, but the part where I beat the bandits felt like it was subpar. The protagonist in the front gave me a very indifferent feeling, but here I don't use magic, but I was punched three times by the gladiator and then I hit back. Compared to the previous process of learning magic, I felt a bit low. I felt like I was pretending. Then I said later that I didn't directly kill the others to avoid leaving a shadow on Fulilian. It felt weird, like eating a bite of egg fried rice and eating a little sand, but the egg fried rice still tasted good.

To be honest, it's hard to see a plug-in novel that doesn't have any shortcomings but also has decent writing☺️. But I felt so bored after reading the first dozen chapters

I feel that there is no problem with the ending now, because I don't see any main plot, and the girl has almost slept and can retire.

The author can link up those different worlds with divine settings, such as worlds with gods such as Suqing and Dicuo. The setting can refer to the dnd god. Most gods are in the unified god world. There are many worlds underneath. Each god has its own world in charge (such as Suqing Eris, Gesha God, Dicuo God). Gods can visit each other, but they need the permission of the god of the world (for example, Aqua can preach in the world of Eris😂) And the protagonist has the identity of a brave man. After killing the demon king, it can be said to save the world. When you go to other worlds later, you have a pass. Compared to the group of cannon fodder heroes that Aqua teleported to, the protagonist, who has actually saved the world, is much more pleasing to the eye. 😁 I sorted out some of the worlds with gods that I have read (the author can refer to them): RE0, Jobless Reincarnation, Turning into a Slime, Dicuo, Gesha, Suqing, and Game Life. Worlds that can be linked: Uncle from another world, Shield Hero, and Shadow Powerful One. And the author can also put the protagonist into a comprehensive comic world (such as Kirito, Kazuma, Rudy, 486) and even write another book 🤓 with specific reference to the three books from M the Hedgehog Next Door. The first book "Alchemists Don't Need Self-cultivation" tells the story of the indigenous protagonist in a stitched version of the steel world using the Door of Truth to travel through different worlds. The fifth volume is a mixed world of Black Lagoon, Black Street, Queen of Arms, Full Metal Panic, and Revenge Classroom. The second book is based on the fifth volume of the first book, "Macho Men Don't Want Everyday Life." The protagonist is the son of the protagonist of the first book. I have read a little bit of it and it is currently a comprehensive comic. The third book "The Reincarnated Band Magician" is about the indigenous protagonist who gets into a car accident and travels to another world with Mr. Daxiang, who died suddenly while working, to fight the devil. Originally, he was going to travel to Suqing, but due to Aqua's operation, he traveled to the world of Frilian (unfortunately, my writing is as bad as 💩, otherwise I would have written it) At the end, there is a picture

Encountering the cool protoss in another world, the instant kill and blood lock are as strong as monsters, and you can't defeat them even though you try your best

1. The story begins a thousand years ago, and Emperor Liquor happens to be the character of Fulian a thousand years ago. She is innocent and a little stupid, not the boring gourd in the anime, without any emotion. In terms of human age, Fulian at this time is about eleven or twelve years old mentally. She has no closed feelings and will take the initiative to find people to chat with. Although the lack of closed emotions does not mean that he has emotions, at least he is a normal person, but he is too young to understand adults. ……………… 2. During the massacre of the village, Fulian experienced ups and downs during this period. Her emotions were completely closed, her demeanor became negative, and conversations were initiated by others. Fu Lillian's weak performance in the anime is due to its influence, plus she has not communicated with others for five hundred years ……………… 3. Three years after massacring the village, she is still negative ………… ... 4. Fifty years after the massacre of the village, his expression has become calmer, but it is far from normal than fifty years ago. At least the naive stupidity is gone Summary: Since he is a normal person, so many basic human emotions are normal. Being seen in embarrassment and shame are one of the differences between humans and beasts, not to mention when he just woke up in the morning. I always see people refuting me about the character design of a thousand years later. As for Celie's restriction of magic power, there is indeed a problem. After all, when I started the book, I was always digging for Fulian's character, and the others were looking for information along the way, and I can't change it now

There is too much room for upgrades. The superficial pseudo-invincibility is far from the real mathematical invincibility. In fact, it is not necessary to be completely invincible. However, the protagonist's IQ is too low and can actually be brought into reality. My own experience is that the second dimension itself is a big pit and the world view is too limited. Many authors do not fill in the details until the end. I hope the author is not that kind of person.

According to the current progress: three in the Fulian world, one in the Slime world, none in the Labyrinth rice world, and three in Suqing Will we add more later?

Can the author write Goblin Slayer? I want to see the protagonist kill this world's unknown gods to the ground

I feel like I can go to Jobless Reincarnation later. In terms of energy levels, the level of destructive power of fighting spirit practitioners and magicians in Jobless Reincarnation is much higher than that of Fulian and Labyrinth Rice. The main reason is that there are some very desirable magics in Jobless Reincarnation, such as the old Rudy from another timeline. The magic he developed before he died is particularly awesome. Does it span timelines or parallel universes? Anyway, it's awesome😃😃😃

You can use your own plug-ins as the basis to create a magic network that can connect to other worlds.

How about going to overload 🙂

Mom suddenly had the power to destroy the world, but she didn't turn into an ancestor. It's really strange (｀Δ´)!

Is there an image of The Devil's Daughter?

I want to ask whether the world of Fulian here will fade away and gradually withdraw from the plot, right? So many worlds…

I haven't watched it yet, but there's a goddess heroine? Could it be Aqua? ? ? Can you say it? ? ?

Magic appears in a world without demons, and the world changes from a world without demons to one with low demons. The first to master magic and power stand at the top of the world. As time goes by, if not destroyed, the original magic will lag behind until a drastic change occurs, either from the bottom up or from the top down. After the change is over, if there is no epoch of civilization, the level of magic in the entire world will increase. Until the end, ordinary civilians can use some magic. The world enters the world of demons...