Frieren: Starting with Wind Spirit and Moon Shadow, Gaming Across the Heavens
芙莉莲：开局风灵月影，游戏诸天
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 917k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- English
- Request a translation
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302Chapters
11.8kRecommendations
67.2kFans
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Regarding the female lead (also an important point)
The initial concept was to have a single female protagonist; otherwise, the timeline wouldn't have been set when the Demon King's army was about to massacre the village of Frilian. But after writing more than ten chapters, I realized something was wrong. Because Frilian's character doesn't provide positive feedback.
Honestly, the male protagonist is more like an ordinary person who has just gained the power of a creator god and is learning in a world with a creator god.
Regarding settings (important)
The main focus is on magic, which refers to the protagonist's abilities (combat power) other than Wind Spirit Moon Shadow. According to Frilian's worldview, the foundation of magic is imagination. The following images will explain everything in detail: Summarize: 1: Magic is made up of imagination. What you can't imagine, you can't do.
Everything else was alright, but it was a bit tedious, with too much unnecessary talk. It took several rounds to defeat a few weak bandits, and the attempts to show off felt forced.
It's not bad. The female lead's character is quite close to the original work. It's just that the main character's personality doesn't quite resemble that of a working-class person. It's too bland. To exaggerate a bit, it feels like she has no desires at all.
The author's writing style is too weak. However, I can't offer any advice.
Eunuchs don't look
I saw some readers saying that chapter 141 is still unfinished. With a harem and multiple female leads, shouldn't we be more concerned about this? Isn't the book's title clearly aimed at romance? If you don't want romance, read Ghostly Ghost.
The writing is average, and some of the dialogue is fragmented, but there are no major flaws, and it's still readable.
Don't stir up trouble
Don't stir up trouble. It's ridiculous to be called a eunuch for no reason. Between Celie and Frilline, which of them could have gotten to base without any romantic subplot? You can't possibly have a nine-year-old Volamere, can you? The 300,000-word guide to winning over Celie is already fast enough. Why do you have to add a mature harem in 100,000 words?
The protagonist's personality seems so extreme that he could easily become a monk in a temple, eating vegetarian food and chanting Buddhist scriptures for decades without any contact with anyone. That might be a bit of an exaggeration, but the description in the book is too detached. Also, the plot is a bit drawn out; a slightly more concise version would be better.