Frieren: Starting with Wind Spirit and Moon Shadow, Gaming Across the Heavens

The original setting was for a single female protagonist, otherwise the timeline would not have been set when the Demon King's army was about to massacre Fulian's village. But then I wrote more than a dozen chapters and realized something was wrong. Because Fulian's character design cannot give positive feedback. When it comes to falling in love, buying and writing things, girls will still say it's great and great, but Fulian can't. Even if she buys a city and a copy of her favorite magic, she will only say a verbal thank you. ——Thank you is the most useless feedback. Writing like this becomes a licking of a dog. Big poisonous spot. So the rest of the plot was changed overnight. In addition, Fengling Yueying has a weak growth line and a weak career line at the beginning. It is better to switch to multiple female protagonists and develop the emotional line. Lest you write hundreds of thousands of words without content expansion and then collapse. ps: Although Fenglingyueying is suitable for speedrunning, this book is not suitable for speedrunning, even if the protagonist is invincible at the beginning, because Fulilian has no main plot in the first place, and relies on the emotional line to develop the plot, pretending to be cool and so on. After completing the real speed run, I will start over in the next world. The plot will be the same, and it will collapse if I don't get 500,000 yuan. It's like playing a game with a hang-up function. You can clear the level in three seconds, but after a while it becomes electronic. No one likes to play games like this.

To be honest, the male protagonist is more like an ordinary person who has just obtained the power of a creator god and is on the way to learn in a world with a creator god.

Mainly magic, that is, the setting of the protagonist's abilities (combat power) other than Wind Spirit Moon Shadow. According to Fulillian's world view, the basis of magic is imagination. The following pictures can explain everything in detail: Summary: 1: Magic is made up of imagination. If you can't think of it, you will definitely not be able to do it. If you can imagine it perfectly and understand the principle, there is a certain probability that you can do it if you believe it. 2: Magic can create substances that do not belong to the current world. (Still have to think about it) Secondly: Timeline Flame lived a thousand years ago, which means that a thousand years ago was the ancient period. Beyond the ancient times is the mythical period, the creation of the goddess, the first era. It is unclear when the Age of Mythology began, but it probably ended when the Sword of the Brave was born, because the legend in the world view is that the Sword of the Brave was created to kill the Demon King. Two thousand years before the Sword of the Brave appeared, this means that two thousand years before the demons appeared, there must be a big event at the end of the mythical age. Picture: Forty-nine generations of village chiefs, the generations before and after, average one generation for 40 years, which is two thousand years. … Finally, it should be gone. If I have to say it, it's race. In Fulian, except for the mythical era, there have been only four races since the ancient times. Dwarves (average life span of two hundred to three hundred years) Humans (average life span of 70 years) Elves (average life span of ∞) - nearly infinite. Finally, the demons. (The average lifespan is more than a thousand years old, and can be longer, this is what Mahat said, and Fulian corroborated it) Demons have aging, but elves do not exist, or even if they do exist, they are hybrids. I don't know if there are hybrids in the worldview, but at least it doesn't mention that humans and elves are infertile. This rather ambiguous setting is available by default. Unless the plot behind it is real. The demons were not created by the goddess. They evolved from monsters, similar to apes to humans, and are non-replicable. Another: There are no slimes, goblins and other monsters in Frilian's worldview Additions are welcome

The rest is okay, but it's a bit stale, there's too much nonsense, even a few rookie robbers got several shots, and the pretense is too stiff.

It's not bad. The heroine's design is quite close to the original work, but the protagonist's personality is not like that of a migrant worker. It's too peaceful. To exaggerate, she doesn't have any desires.

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The author's writing is too thin. But I can't give any advice.

I saw some book friends saying that Chapter 141 is still about eunuchs. There are many female protagonists in the harem, so we don't pay much attention to this, right? Isn't the title of this book just for falling in love? If you don't fall in love, it's just a ghost.

The writing is average, and the character dialogue is sparsely written in some places, but it's not too poisonous, and it's still readable.

Don't worry about the rhythm. I was called a eunuch for no reason. Which of the two characters, Celie and Fulian, can be successful without any emotional scenes? You can't get married to a nine-year-old Volamei, right? The 300,000-word guide to General Seriai is already very fast. Do you have to get a stallion with 100,000 words?