Catering God

Let's talk about the advantages first. The business line has chosen niche commercial catering development. Now readers of Internet/entertainment novels all over the street have begun to get tired of it. The several business operations in the catering industry so far have made me, a layman, learn from it. Let's talk about the shortcomings... One thing to say, I am a very tolerant reader, but this book is almost 1:0.8 Similar to another book from the male and female protagonists to the rhythm of the story. I still can't stand it... You shouldn't be a dog licker if you don't start well. , If someone picks up a little rich woman on the roadside, you pick it up, and if she controls her, you also control her (I know it's a matter of starting point, but you have to replicate it one by one, right?). You're afraid of being dumbfounded by someone else's little rich woman, but you're also afraid of being dumbfounded by others. At present, except for the fact that the heroine's family is different from that of another book, everything else is exactly the same. In fact, because of the differentiated track in the business war part, it is not impossible to read it with the sense of déjà vu from another book. However, some problems have been exposed in recent chapters. The male god of catering has gone to engage in delivery, and it is obvious to the naked eye that he is developing into the Internet takeout industry. The differentiated track is suspected to be gone. Moreover, the plot of the cafeteria stall being closed down after being reported by the campus supermarket is too current. It is difficult not to make people wonder whether the author has an outline and express concerns about the development prospects of the book.

Every time I read the rebirth article on the Internet, I vomit. This book about getting rich by eating is still very novel. I hope the author can write it well.

The heroine should be a little smarter, and don't conform to the image of Feng Daidai. There are a few words that say, "Learn from me, but you cannot be completely like me. Those who transform me live, break me, advance, and resemble me, die." Qi Baishi once said, "Learn me, live, resemble me, die." You should make a table to compare the image of the heroine in your book with the images of the heroines in several books of the same genre. What qualities do you have that he does not have, and what qualities can be shared and unique qualities? How to amplify, so that when others will say, "Oh, the heroine of this book is very similar to that one, but the heroine of this book is more so and so, I like some of her characters" instead of "The heroine of this book is the same as that one, she is a good source of food, you can read it." Of course you think the following sentence is enough, then I have nothing to say. I really hope that the author can write a good story about Xiaoyu who belongs to Jiang Feng, instead of writing a Feng Daidai who belongs to Jiang Feng.

Chen Jingyu

The characters of the heroine and her family are good, and the career line is also very exciting. The level of dog food is hard to tell at the moment. The classmate line emmm personally feels like it's a shortcoming, it's a bit cool but not too mellow.

What's your hand speed? I can't grab it.

If you want to send a larger number of packages, all of them will be robbed by robots. What's the use?

This book suffers from the fact that the author is a newcomer.

The author's level is definitely a reincarnation or an extraterrestrial demon

Twenty days of tickets saved

When I saw a food article with the main character named Jiang Feng, I thought it was a fan article about a life-style game.

Where is the humanity? Where is the law? Link ahem, where is the update?

There are no bad points at the moment, the writing is fairly smooth, and the rhythm of the plot is smooth. The main problem is that the plot arrangement is still a bit outdated in the old city of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.

To be honest, I read another popular book. The characters are not as well written as yours. But you have to be careful. Don't just follow other people's plots. You have to write something new. Otherwise, people who have read the previous popular book will basically not read your book. You will lose a lot of readers out of thin air.

Am I a niche person? , Why is it that I can barely read anything I read? I lost two of the five books I followed every day 😭

I don't know if it's an illusion, but I feel like I'm watching "Who's in Love?"

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I voted for you three times a month, so please scroll up and give me an update! By the way, can you cum for me

I have no sense of empathy. I don't recognize those pictures. If you post a picture of Liu Shishi, it would be more to my taste.

Has the archeology trend started in novels now? ?

I've voted for the monthly ticket, are you going to update it or are you going to cut the book?