Reborn: Starting by Raising a Little Sister

Where does the stitching monster come from? The title is stitched together. At first glance, it's two stitched together books: Save the Desperate Girl Next Door and Both Are Reborn and Say I Don't Want to Raise a Sister.

The latest 24 chapters make me think of the author as a reverse tribute to the great man next door. I have read the latest chapters, but some of the settings are a bit unreasonable. For example, the top-performing school in the city does not give free tuition. However, there is one thing to say. So far, the whole book is still flawless. The previous settings If it can be rounded, just make it round, and if it can't be rounded, just put it aside for now. Don't imitate the round guy next door. Anyway, the author will write it well. Once it is put on the shelf, the full subscription + monthly subscription will be in place. In addition, the author should not let us refugees affect the rhythm of his writing. As long as he doesn't let the literary youth get in trouble and make mistakes. , You only need to add quick code, and the rest of the brothers will solve it for you.

This introduction reminds me of only this book

Let me digress first. It doesn't matter what's next to you anymore. Just do whatever you want. Unfortunately, I keep following up on updates. I hope the author of this book won't be like this. That's all. I just finished reading Chapter 24. Let me start by saying that the author has a strong idea of ​​lightning protection. As for why it is "idea" rather than "consciousness", it is because the author's lightning protection method is too rigid and not coordinated enough. The author is now in a state of being able to write out surprising points, but because of the author's strong desire to survive, when writing such a possible plot, he will actively seek to make up for it and cut off the readers' random thoughts. This attitude is worthy of recognition, but I still hope that the author can go further and prevent such possible plots from appearing at the root. The author is inspired by this, and the importance of lightning protection naturally goes without saying. Generally speaking, the author's writing skills are still poor and need to work more. There are no major problems, but they are only on the pass line. Whether it is the advancement of things or the emotional expression of the characters, they are a bit dull, and it is difficult to resonate or interest. It still needs careful polishing. Although this is not a big problem, it can only be tempered slowly, but it also needs attention. In terms of plot, it is to make readers look forward to the story that follows and be unable to stop. In terms of emotional expression of the characters, it is to make readers truly feel the emotions of the characters, especially the heroine. It is best to make readers fall in love with her. In addition, the plot and character creation are relatively routine, which is not bad, but not good enough. Routine can reduce the difficulty of writing and make the writing concept simpler, but it is relatively difficult to write brilliantly. If the author is writing this book for stability, and it is just a writing practice, that is fine. However, even if he chooses a routine, he must pay attention to the screening. There are many old routines that have become outdated or even poisonous. As a reader, I still hope that the author can write his own characteristics and write something different. If he can do this, the results of this book will definitely be different. The pros and cons and how to choose are left to the author himself. Also, generally I think the author is writing a light novel, but it turns out it is an urban one. The author can decide what to do. At least for now, it is indeed an urban style, but there is still a certain distance between it and the light novel. From a starting point point of view, the light novel sector is definitely larger and has a larger audience, but it is also more difficult to get ahead. Maybe the author can try to use the style of light novels to fight bloody battles in the city? Of course it's also fine to keep things as they are. Come on, author, at least you have shown your attitude. As long as you are willing to face the problem head-on, even if you cannot become a great master, at least you can make a living from this. By the way, be wary of literary youth disease. Above.

No buddy, it just became a eunuch within a few days of being released? Cut one wave and run away?

It's just that I was just a eunuch and soon you will also be a eunuch.

I sighed, the reality is indeed much more outrageous than the novel, how dare the novel write like this?

The name of Xu Ningzhi is so familiar. Is it the same name as the divorce counterattack system that was just eighteen years old?

Bad news: I met an old tailor Good news: I sewed everything, and the sewing was pretty good, and it looks better than the basic one😃😃

From the introduction, I saw a lot of shadows of old friends. Collections are waiting for follow-up. Go and kill them 😜