
The Condor: Xiao Feng Travels Through Yin Zhiping
神雕:萧峰穿越尹志平
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 154k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Qiao Feng is a wolf killer. When he didn't learn martial arts as a child, he became ruthless and even killed doctors who refused to treat his mother. As a result, you wrote Qiao Feng as a holy mother.
I don't quite understand, since you want to use the identity of Xiao Feng. Then what is the purpose of traveling to Yin Zhiping?
In fact, the big problem is that the Quanzhen Seven Sons and the others don't know Xiao Feng's true identity. It's impossible to call him Xiao Daxia
The writing is not good, and the subject matter is wasted 😠. It should be written that Qiao Feng was having sex with Xiao Longnu when he traveled through time 😅.
In fan fiction, the author must understand the character's personality. Otherwise, you will definitely rush to the street, remember this. You have to take on the role of Qiao Feng and figure out what he would do and what he would not do based on his character. For example, if you write that Qiao Feng is Qiao Feng after jumping off a cliff, then there must be no female protagonist, because the female protagonist is already dead, and there is only one A'Zhu in the world. Writing novels is not for everyone.
With Xiao Feng's heroic spirit, it is probably impossible to accept Xiao Longnu
Nonsense, why not watch Shi Potian travel through Linghu Chong
I didn't see any trace of Xiao Feng in the protagonist at all, and the character creation failed.
Xiao Feng was upset, and Yi Zhiping was also upset. Can an interesting article be written from the perspectives of two extreme people? One is altruistic and considers the overall situation, the other is self-interested, cowardly and timid... What a magical idea, I will wait until others try the poison to see...
When I read Chapter 7, I can't see any trace of Xiao Feng. Either it's a studio article, or the author didn't read the original work at all. It's just a cover story.
How could Xiao Feng covet his innate merit?
I just read Chapter 4, and I have a big question, why did Yang Guo insist on worshiping Zhao Zhijing as his disciple?
Yiyangzhi's acupuncture skills are superb, but Xiao Feng only has little experience.
Dragon Knight Xiao Feng
Dragon Knight Xiao Feng! Hahaha, bring your new article "I am from Dixian Village" to cheer for the King of South Campus
To be honest, Qiao Feng's heroic spirit cannot be written by ordinary people.
I advise everyone not to watch it, otherwise you will see Xiao Feng in full condition, unable to defeat an ordinary bear, and being chased all over the mountain You said that is Yin Zhiping's body, even Yin Zhiping cannot defeat a bear.
What did you write? Doesn't it advance feelings at all? Who cares about watching "You are invincible in the world"? It would be better to read Jin Yong's original work.
Xiao Feng, he is brave and resourceful. His talent in martial arts can be seen from Taizu Changquan's superb skills. Such a person gets a chance to start over. He still has to be the Xiao Feng he was before, and if he doesn't talk about body memory and muscle memory for half a year, his martial arts should not be too weak. In the end, he can't beat a bear...
I haven't watched it yet, but I have a question. Didn't Qiao Feng fall in love with A'Zhu after his death? Why did he fall in love with Xiao Longnu here? Forced? ?
What does this say?
Like the title, to be honest, I really didn't understand what was written. The author didn't describe Xiao Feng's heroism at all. After Xiao Feng died, he fell in love with A'Zhu. The author did not describe Xiao Feng's image at all. This is Xiao Feng, not the kind of soul piercer from later generations who gets obsessed with every sight of a woman.