The Spiritual Energy Is Revived, and I Become the Taoist Ancestor in the World of Low Martial Arts.

The best in the world, he can dominate the world, but he still has to worry about food 😥, and he has to hunt by himself, so awesome.

This realm is a bit confusing. There are also local realms such as literary and martial arts. I can't remember it. Why don't the author write a single chapter or comment to explain which realm corresponds to which realm?

When I read the Golden Elixir of Martial Arts, I didn't see any description of lifespan. The main character is still clinging to time, and there is no perspective from the perspective of an immortal. With his realm soaring, I'm afraid he will become a Taoist ancestor in a few years. What's more, the martial arts is even more ridiculous. An ordinary person who is born casually is inferior to a pig or dog with Qi, blood, and martial arts.

I only read more than ten chapters, which is very long and smelly.

First, ancient Chinese days do not need numbers to express, such as the day of the first month or the tenth day of the first month. This is a modernized way of saying it. The correct name is the day of the first month or the tenth day of the first lunar month. Second, the ancient units of length were not meters, centimeters, and decimeters, but feet, and there was no term for kilometers, only mileage units such as miles. Third, the unit of time in ancient times was not hours and minutes, but hours. If you communicate with a modern person, and he talks a lot about classical Chinese, don't you feel that he is out of tune with the people around you?

The next almost 300 chapters have nothing to do with the protagonist. They are all about the natives trying their best and pretending to be cool. It's too watery.

Don't you read what you wrote? How many days can the old man in your low martial arts village practice spiritual energy entering his body?

It's too watery. After 300 chapters, I won't write about the protagonist. I'll just write about how hard the natives work and how they pretend to be cool. It's almost 100 chapters away. Without the protagonist, there's nothing wrong. If the author doesn't have anything good to write, just end it as soon as possible. Just write an ending.

It seemed fine at first, but when I first started practicing, I had to write almost half of each chapter to emphasize the setting. It was really tiring to read, so I gave up! The story is also relatively bland and not very exciting, alas!

This book is getting better and better as I write it. The previous books at least had the idea of meritocracy. Now in this book, it can be said that the main characters around the protagonist in the two hundred chapters are villagers, and they are the kind of farmers who only know how to farm. If you let them manage the land, you don't want to hire a military or master for them. Open an academy and there will be no food. I don't know how to solve it. Why don't you buy food if you can't grow it? A Xiantian sect is already a big figure in the world. How many of you have Xiantian and thousands of disciples who can kill thousands of people by themselves, but you can't even afford to eat? You send disciples down the mountain and go farming with thousands of pounds of strength? You can beat the ground into a foundation by punching it in a day, right?

If you change your identity at the start, your results will be much better. I think it makes no sense to arrange this identity when you have to create a law.

Can you, the author, stop writing so many words during the fight? It looks very, very, very stupid. How much time does one sentence take and how long does one action take? Everyone died before he finished speaking.

A few innate masters are here to steal the treasure. Will they spare your life if they do it? The author must be such a holy mother to let these "charlatans" who kill people and seize treasures go. His writing style is not bad either! Why do you have to write it so disgustingly? Keep watching, I hope it won't be so disgusting later!

I feel that the development of the plot is a bit off-kilter. The three fellow practitioners who were developing well suddenly perfected the Dao of Wen Dao, and they suppressed the two paths of Qi refining and martial arts and did not improve and waited for the Dao and fruit to be perfected. The most important thing is that Swordsman came out too early, and also brought a time traveler. Originally, I thought that the Ming Dynasty had been dealt with well. World, and then the disciples led the people of the Ming Dynasty to explore other places such as India, Australia, North America, etc., But they suddenly turned to other worlds, and for the golden finger of the time traveler, the protagonist even stepped out of the world. Looking at the directory, it is impossible to come back. This plot is a bit like a mountainous road with eighteen bends.

The realm of creative law flow can be improved faster. Don't be invincible in the same realm.

It's amazing. This kind of subject matter can be written in such a way that it doesn't feel exciting at all, and it also seems a bit frustrating. The author is a talent 🙂

Alas, the author is still trying to save trouble. The indigenous world still has Wudang and so on, but the new world is actually a world of laughter and glory. It saves the brain to think about the plot, but it loses a lot of interest. It's useless... Of course, this book is not just about this problem. The steps of preaching to the world are too rough and too impatient. I don't have the patience to write a book.

The plot is too bland, so all the small flaws seem to be magnified infinitely. I can only say that the plot is watchable but too boring, so I can only criticize it, because it is too bland and there is no sense of invincibility at all.

Shen Nong, the writing is okay, but the writing style is average, and it can be read in the shortage of books. The setting is not rigorous, and the plot logic is inconsistent. For example, Liu Wanqing's birth literary style has no foreshadowing at all. She is written just because she is close to the protagonist, and it is not written about other great writers. The character creation is also average, and the author still has a lot of room for improvement.

When the time comes, in the eternal world, we will have a magic weapon that can unify the wisdom of all living beings. Cultivation of oneself, the door to eternal life, refining or maiming them all, beating the protagonist and villain to death, Luo Feng's golden finger, the body-stealing golden-horned behemoth, the protagonist can get it, and train the strongest clone. The ones generated by heaven and earth in my Fengshen are pretty good. Beat Yi Xiaoqian to death, get the benefits yourself, the movie world, the legend of Shushan, be the strongest villain, get it by yourself, the old monster of Youquan, get the beauty by yourself, the speed zombie world, get the secret book of ascending to immortality by yourself.

Before, I was still opening the way and preaching normally. The further you go, the more you go. You take advantage of others by clever means, blame everyone, and take things without asking. Is this kind of mind worthy of being a Taoist ancestor?

How many updates a day? There are so few. Not enough to read.

The realm is too chaotic, I feel like there is no outline, and I can't understand it as I think it out one by one.

It was okay at the beginning, but there was nothing interesting at the end. It felt a bit pale and weak, and there was nothing to write about. The emotional details of the character creation began to be insufficient, and it became like a running account.

The original cover was okay, but I feel like this cover is easy to ignore now. I was just checking the bookshelf to see which books had been updated, but I kept skipping this book.

Just start reading from Chapter 307, you can jump into the prehistoric version of A Chinese Knight Rider

Can you still write a book like My System's Superpowers? Now you are too weird.

Brother Hui is here for a visit

Not bad. Brother Hui is here for a visit. He doesn't read much. If you like it, keep reading. If you don't like it, you won't see my comments.

I'm here, Brother Hui is here for a visit