I Use My Talents to Gather Authority and Build the Heaven

Author, please don't engage in a plot like this where other people can really practice cultivation, and the protagonist, the person who defies heaven and changes his destiny, is still at the bottom! You should make the protagonist truly become a god, only then can someone in the world be able to cultivate something real! You come up with such a random thing, which does not have much blessing on the protagonist's ability. The fake method written by other fantasists has come true. This shows that the setting is spiritual recovery, which is fundamentally opposed to the ordinary world you originally mentioned. Since it is the protagonist who raises the upper limit of the world, it should be the protagonist who has gained the most fortune. The way you write this chapter just makes the protagonist retro and revives spirituality again. Think about it!

It's all nonsense, Che Zhuluan said back and forth, it really affects the perception. If you talk about settings, just talk about settings. Can't it be more streamlined? What can be said in three sentences, take the latest chapter I have seen so far as an example. The previous paragraph "Stronger power is needed to press the national destiny into the ball of light" The next paragraph "This will lead to the stronger and stronger power needed to condense the national destiny" This kind of wheel talk appeared more than once or twice, and it appeared in a large space. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I glanced at the title and went to the next chapter. I don't care about the few dollars I spent on the subscription, but it's really unacceptable to spend money and be disgusted.

It's really outrageous. We are determined to go in an extraordinary direction. You train soldiers for me, saying that they are soldiers of the common people and soldiers of the people. This is the Ming Dynasty. They don't even have a basic ideological program or awakening of consciousness. They use modern ideological theories in ancient times

Don't limit yourself to the framework of Tiangang Disha and 108 magical powers. After all, Tiangang Disha is the fantasy of ancient people and has limitations. For example, many magical powers in Tiangang are either from the mountains or the sea. Many modern imaginations are much stronger than Tiangang Disha.

To be honest, the subject matter is okay, and the author is very thoughtful, but in a feudal society, you are telling your soldiers that everyone is equal, that everyone is a soldier of the people... Soldiers of the common people... The people who rebelled with you because they were still hungry at one moment are told to die for people they don't know... You are shouting lofty slogans... You have not yet unified the whole world. The next one is within the scope of your rule... Promote that everyone is equal and can live and work in peace and contentment... Who is willing to risk their lives to fight with you (don't talk about modern times, it's different), and the aristocracy will not want their own interests to be harmed... Since everyone is equal, how should you, a powerful person and a god considered by the world, deal with it? Now that we are all equal, if you build the Heavenly Palace in the future, can ordinary people travel to the Heavenly Palace when they have free time, visit the Lingxiao Palace, Tushita Palace, etc. I also want to sit on the throne in the Lingxiao Palace 🤓... It's really fun... I think I feel excited just thinking about it... I want to live longer... Go get the book of life and death and change it. I don't want to die after living. You can live for so long, I also want to live longer, okay? Jade Emperor, didn't you say that everyone is equal? Have you forgotten what you said at the beginning?

Five of the ten chapters are about explaining the setting. It's really unnecessary. Let's be concise. There's no need to explain it so clearly. The protagonist's setting is probably to push the human world to establish heaven. In the end, in order to explain the setting, he insisted on becoming a bandit for dozens of chapters. Why bother? The protagonist is also honest and stupid when it comes to people. In ancient times, he even lied when he was a leader. If not, then don't be a fool. All those emperors claimed that they were gods descended to earth, and many of those who revolted were doing so in the name of gods descending to earth. Zhang Jiao could make up any magical power he wanted to gain momentum. The protagonist actually had supernatural powers, but he was still a bandit. A time traveler with plug-ins, he couldn't compare to the ancients. When will the protagonist become the emperor of heaven like this?

In a good fantasy world, the supernatural power system has to involve guns and artillery. It's so damn hard to persuade me to quit. I can't stand the one about guns anymore. Or I'll keep writing fantasy to the end. Why do I have to modernize it?

Author, I think your settings here should not always be limited to supernatural powers. You can refer to dragon qi. Other practitioners can refer to the most classic cultivators in Yi Ding. With this world view, their cultivation must rely on luck to absorb the training of their subordinates. The protagonist can also think about some marching laws, such as marching quickly, cheering up, and seeing death as if he is home. Later, he will luck in the dynasty, step by step to legalize the rule of heaven, the emperor's dragon qi, etc., There is no need to think about magical powers to strengthen himself and so on. , This view of the world that the dragon energy is invincible to all methods is no joke. The main thing is to gather people to nourish the energy, consume the dragon energy to activate laws, and in the later stage promote the harvest, and other practitioners, use a hammer to speak the law and wipe out all the cultivation of the opponent with one sentence. , Now the protagonist can also build a military flag and add faith, and create this kind of luck magic weapon, which will make him unparalleled in conquering the world. The protagonist is still the pioneer of this system, but if you fight with other latecomers who have thought about their own cultivation, you will lose.

What a pity about the subject matter. Most of the chapter contains instructions for the formation and use of magical powers. I have to explain them over and over again. The level is at best like hay. It is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to discard it.

Come on, the more you explain, the more confused you become, and the more you explain, the more you cover up. Everything you said is later, however. You didn't control it well. So it has appeared before. The protagonist is obviously the source, but he cannot control others. In this fast-paced era, no one has the patience to wait for you to get two or three hundred pictures before you can get that kind of real qualitative difference. Who is in the mood to just paint a big cake? Don't you think everyone is eating enough of the pie in reality? If you keep thinking like this and continue writing your book, you'd better wait to be thrown into the street. There is nothing wrong with sticking to an outline. But because you stick to the outline, you don't listen to the readers at all, and most of the people in the book still don't approve of your book, so you should just wait and pounce.

Brief discussion, personal opinion I originally thought that the protagonist was the founder of the world in the ordinary world. In the early stage, he only had his own way. After unifying the world, he would spread the word to the world. Unexpectedly, when the protagonist was still at the bottom of society, he began to "resurrect spiritual energy", and the monks and Taoists had already begun to cultivate magic power, which directly greatly reduced the protagonist's specialness. When the protagonist starts at the bottom, does it feel good to unify the world by himself, or does it feel good to unify the world when the world has changed from ordinary to extraordinary and various monks appear to take away the protagonist's light? This is the same as some of the urban novels in Qidian. When the protagonist is ordinary, the world is ordinary. As soon as he has super powers and practices, good guys, various ancient martial arts families, and immortal cultivators appear. Of course, this book is definitely not a one-on-one approach. The most dissuading part of this book is that the protagonist is at the bottom of society and has not yet had the strength to suppress the world. There are signs of extraordinary people in the world. Not to mention that they are not as fast as the protagonist in cultivation, and are not as high as the protagonist. Just the appearance of this point can dissuade a lot of readers.

After reading it, at least 3/5 of the content was skipped. I thought these nonsense settings were interesting at first, but when I got to Chapter 120, I realized that these nonsense were just nonsense. I always thought that the author would come up with a conclusion, but when I finished finishing it, I realized that it was only the author who was making up the process, but there was still no result. There are many sci-fi and interstellar books on the site, and the authors also edit them, but after they are compiled, readers can make up their mind and compile a nuclear fusion engine, and readers will naturally accept spaceships. This book is hard to finish at one glance, and it's really uncomfortable to read the author's farewell.

From the introduction, it is said that the protagonist is the only one who can be the founder of the path. As a result, others can practice while the protagonist is still at the bottom. However, the source of cultivation is still the protagonist. In the middle and later stages, will there be cultivators who come out to compete with the protagonist? The logic does not make sense. It seems disgusting that the villain steals the protagonist's things to fight against the protagonist. This is the biggest poisonous point.

Originally, we should have started to promote the game as soon as the national games were upgraded. Even if it didn't work out, we would have to speed up the pace after becoming the king. The result is this ink mark. Under the Immortal Dynasty system, talent is not a problem at all. After controlling the national destiny, no monsters can be hidden. Associating with the "rebels" is even more poisonous. Dragons don't live with snakes, and their grades suddenly drop. The protagonist is regarded as the incarnate emperor, not a gangster. What do you make your subordinates think? Liu Bang was also a gangster, but he still had the courage to return to his hometown when the wind was blowing and the clouds were flying. He only dared to call himself the son of the Red Emperor. What's the difference between you, the Emperor of Heaven, and the Saint of Nuclear Bombs? The protagonists are the same, they have to grow but don't break up, otherwise the results will be collected. The above is just a matter of fact. It's just that I can't bear to see a creative book turned into such a mess. I hope the author will think about it carefully.

The author writes until now. I wonder if magical powers will be used to give birth to gods in the future. When they are conceived, the magical powers will become their natal magical powers, or authority.

I don't quite understand the protagonist's thinking. You will starve to death at the beginning, and you will have to practice if you don't find food. Cultivation of other things is not enough. You must practice bringing the dead back to life and making wind and rain. emmmm Are you going to come back to life and then starve to death, or are you going to bury yourself in the rain? Can't the problem of starvation be solved by using some photosynthesis, breathing, or inescaping? What to bet on? People are about to die and still gamble? The problem is that you can't live if you bet on the direction, and if you bet successfully, you will die. If the main problem is not solved, the secondary problem must be solved, right? I was purely illiterate in my previous life? The kind of illiterate person who can't even read novels? Normal logic, does a powerful ability require more energy? Just a little start-up capital at the beginning, you have to develop magical powers, right? When ordinary people have no money, their first reaction is not to work or borrow money? After all, I have no money, so I have to find a way to make money. It's better for you. Don't worry if you don't have any money. Let's cultivate immortality. Once you become an immortal, you will naturally have money The question is, can you wait?

It's all water setting, no plot at all

There is too much nonsense literature. Please restrain yourself. Don't kill this supposedly popular subject matter. Don't you review your writing? Reading experience is very important if you are on the readers' side. If you are stuck, I suggest you take a leave. I have saved more than 10 chapters. I am so embarrassed to see those settings. Forget about just talking about the settings. You also mixed nonsense literature into it. My account is currently the only one on the bookshelf that I am chasing. Be more diligent. Although creation is not easy, there are many people who cannot stand it. Set your goals higher. Come on.

It's so speechless that the protagonist is licking his face like a bitch and begging others to give him extraordinary power. This is not an ancestor.

The protagonist's name is a bit confusing. Using an inherent vocabulary as a name makes it more difficult to read. You can just call it Wang Chao/Wang Mang/Huang Chao. There is nothing about the modern setting, but there is an ancient setting called a dynasty. Who knows whether it is the protagonist or the dynasty?

I think the national destiny also has stages. For example, the current national destiny is tangible but insubstantial. Assuming that referring to other fairy tales, all Buddhas, immortals and gods have Tao kingdoms, then the national destiny of the immortal dynasty is naturally Tao fruit, taking the form of a dragon. That is equivalent to the fate of the world being in one city (capital), so it is necessary to consider the establishment of rules and regulations for the government and gods (gods and gods), Taoist temples, and Buddhist temples to form a legal network.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br Then county towns, prefecture towns, and prefectural cities are nested in arrays to form a town-state-level barrier (Kyushu Great Barrier). Moreover, the beliefs of ethnic minorities can also be naturalized under the rule of the Immortal Dynasty Shenting (you can also write characteristics), and attributed to Haotian (I think the protagonist's ability can be tried to replace the heart of heaven with his own heart, all things belong to me, immortals, Buddhas, gods and demons, hundreds of schools of thought, heresy, three religions and nine streams are all for my use) The Immortal Court is consuming the national destiny all the time, and it is imperative to save the national destiny. Therefore, there is a boundary between civilization and wilderness. The wilderness is where demons, monsters, barbarians and other unregulated forces are treated. Civilization is the towns and villages managed by the government, and some sects and sects of immortals and Buddhas live among them. Naturally, I can write about the feeling of the battle between good and evil. I think there is some appropriate struggle so that the fairy court or the social environment will not become rigid. If you want to really conquer the demon sect in the future, I would say that the four major demon sects can be launched as vanguards outside the barrier, and the east and west will really conquer. 🙂🙂🙂 Rough thoughts on the settings after reading (book friends are welcome to add)

I hope the author can follow his own pace and make fine adjustments, but don't be dragged along by others. It will be difficult to write if some readers disrupt the rhythm.

He talks too much and likes to explain and say one thing over and over again.

Why should we let go of the celebrity effect? What about the unpleasant thing to say, that the Ming Dynasty is the enemy of the protagonist? How about letting some people go because of their celebrity effect? Shouldn't they all be killed? It doesn't matter if it doesn't affect the protagonist, but it's one thing to kill or not? He should be killed. Take whatever you say, take whatever you want. What does not kill mean? What kind of celebrity effect is there? Cut.

Even if I write it, it is no longer a book. Still can't catch it. There is some farming. Field is not written, there is extraordinary, ability is not written. There is fighting. There is no description of the battle

Don't watch it, there's no plot, it's all about the crazy setting.

There are many ideas and the writing is good, but the application of spiritual power feels a bit vague. It is difficult to remember them if they are described in detail and classified into various categories. It is better to just divide them into darkness and justice, which is simple and easy to understand.

After reading the first chapter, I said I didn't know about the emperor's reign, the emperor's great achievements, and the emperor's succession. That is to inform the world. If the officials below do not inform, it will be enough for them to drink a pot if they are reported. This is a necessary procedure. After that, various documents, tax collection, conscription, etc., You can not know the emperor, but you cannot say that you don't know.

The realm feels very high, but in reality it feels very low

This book is full of mistakes made by the author. It seems that it is not smooth at all. He has sewn a little bit of this and that and just wrote it here. What is said here is that everyone is equal, but not equal. Why bother to cover it with such a layer of skin? And why develop guns? It's not enough to just blow open the city wall with cannons. Now researching guns will do no harm to the protagonist. The protagonist's bow can shoot four to five hundred meters and the hit rate is very high. Why do you need a gun when you are wearing heavy armor and walking like flying in close combat? There is also business, which is the protagonist that I can't stand the most. If you don't do well in the state-owned economy, you won't be promoted or appointed, and your lifespan will be so short. Who can bear it?