Hogwarts Soul Wizard

At the beginning, the protagonist's mother took the initiative to hand over the Horcrux, which was very confusing. For a family, the most important thing is continuity. Not to mention that according to the situation at the time, it was almost in the later stages. Voldemort was all over the world looking for children born in July and had no time to deal with Death Eaters. Handing in the Horcrux is equivalent to playing a bright card, and the pitiful number of zone changes is equivalent to having no protection and messing with a powerful wizard. Concealing this news can not only be used as a tool to jump back at any time, but also avoid the next series of troubles. Is this a tough job that the matron of a big family can do? Take the initiative to expose yourself in front of the enemy and show your lifeblood. How dare an orphan and a widower commit suicide? Not to mention anything else, just your operation. Being a Death Eater is not a big problem at all as long as you have money. The Lucius family relied on a series of operations such as financial bribes and perjury to survive. Even if someone claimed that they were dark wizards, so what? Still in a monopoly position. If no one pays attention to it anymore, it means the decline of the family. A lot of suffocation was done just to put the protagonist together with a group of people from Harry Potter, and to forcefully create enemies for himself. . .

Let's talk about the things I can't stand. One is that the protagonist, Black, chose Ravenclaw for a very lame reason even though he was highly matched with Slytherin. As Black, Slytherin can be said to be your base. Whether it's forming a group or buying people's hearts, you can do it openly in Slytherin, because you It's Black, you're Slytherin Second, even if you want to highlight the alchemy genius setting, do you have to make a magic pistol? This idea is very boring. No matter who it is used for, no readers like it. Don't make such changes in the wizarding world. What we want to see is the original world. Isn't it better to make some powerful spells than pistols? Third, the protagonist chooses a magic wand. When choosing a magic wand, a debuff is inexplicably given to the protagonist. Although it can be said to be meaningless, it is this meaninglessness that is poisonous. If you do not intend to foreshadow it, then it is useless. If it is foreshadowing, then Will the protagonist lose the trust of the wand in the future, so as to pave the way for the alchemy wand, which will be even more poisonous However, the setting of this book is still interesting. He dares to dismantle the iron triangle and surpasses many authors. The protagonist of the Black family is also very good, but he does not hide his flaws

Don't do any magic pistols😭😭 It really doesn't match the style of Harry Potter.

When I read Chapter 23, I was dumbfounded. Until Chapter 23, the protagonist has not used any magic, and has not reflected any magical place in the magical world. He relies entirely on words. It seems to be all explanations and outlines. At present, the only things that are the same as the original work are the name and power distribution. The rest are all new settings, and even the magic division has been reset. After that, the protagonist's personality remains the same. On the surface, he looks down on everyone. There are only two kinds of people in the eyes of the protagonist. One kind is rubbish, and the other is rubbish. There may be another kind of person who cannot be defeated now and will become rubbish in the future Don't blame me for being extreme. I came here to see magic. What the hell, it started to flow like water for 23 consecutive chapters. I have a lot of resentment.

The writing is too detailed and it feels very verbose. Is there a word count in water?

Is the magic pistol like the anime evil protagonist CAD? Otherwise it is simply unrealistic. The magic power is emitted from the human-induced medium, and the shape of the pistol is redundant.

How? They don't even take my sister Ka to play in Hogwarts now!

Ask, who is the heroine? Don't speculate in stocks.

A six-meter-long eagle? Can animagus exceed the size of a wizard? Author, you are talking nonsense!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~