Start with the Lie Game

It suddenly occurred to me that the confused father-in-law and mother-in-law would definitely get into trouble at this time, so I typed and mailed it directly.

Some of the ideas in the novel are quite novel, and the content of the story is quite substantial. The author revised it quickly after feedback about typos or clerical errors, so it is not a studio article. It looks good, overall "food and grass +", a few plots can barely reach the level of grass jelly.

It was a headache to watch. The first game gave people the feeling that it was a garbage semi-finished product without a good design. The main character complained very well about the rubbish planning. In other words, I feel like the characters are a bit weak, and the rules and plot narrative are weird. You can see, hay.

The author's writing is very smooth. I hope I can keep writing.

The book is okay, but there are indeed some holes in the details. The most important thing is that there are too few updates. If your volume is larger and faster, no one will pursue those loopholes, and they will only enjoy watching them.

There are a lot of holes to be dug and various Riddlers. The author should have a good grasp of the situation. You don't give any clues. Even if the foreshadowing breaks out in the end, it is more about the original situation and the feeling of being solved, rather than how awesome the protagonist is or how great what he does. You have to at least write what the protagonist did. You don't write a single word. After a few chapters, you say that the protagonist has a backup plan. To be honest, it is baffling and you can't understand how awesome the protagonist is.

This writing style will become popular sooner or later as long as there are no eunuchs.

The plot at the beginning is too confusing and misses the point.

Let me taste it. Is this a piece of shit or a piece of food?

It's very beautiful, why is there no one there?

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When will the author update?

Match the brain waves 😄

I feel the beginning is very strange. I don't know if the author wants water or how to put it. He insists on adding a strange adjective. I can only say that it is unnecessary.

If the protagonist introduces himself, he says: I am the gardener who cultivates the flowers of "the motherland". Does it count as lying?

This book is very interesting, and the battle of wits is exciting, but it must be understood by most people. For example, in The Emperor's New Clothes, the girl who spoke first gave a very good answer, saying (I personally think it was very smooth), which means that as a (liar), she deceived the emperor very smoothly. Then the author needs to explain it, or describe it psychologically (to marvel at her intelligence or something). As long as you write with explanations in this way and prevent most readers from being confused and persuaded to give up, your grades will be doubled several times. Even Thriller Park has to be smart and tell what happened after the operation is completed. The author should do this even more

The second sentence of the first paragraph of the introduction has no subject and should be changed to "The life span of all mankind...", And the comma in the first paragraph is not needed. Summary: negative review