Start with a Saliva Song

I endured reading 30 chapters. There are some problems with the story structure and song selection of this book. It is hard to imagine that this is the work of a platinum author 😅

I read several urban novels in the rebirth entertainment genre at the same time. I am quite patient. In others, I kept up with the updates and urged the author to hurry up. I tried hard to convince myself to read more than 30 chapters of this one... I really couldn't stand it anymore. The writing style is like a fifth or sixth grade elementary school essay. The details of the conflict are actually the common plot points of a brainless short play. It gives people the impression that a 10-year-old child is keeping a running account, and it is smelly and long. I saw someone in the comment area saying that the author is a great god... A great god? What can I say about this, and I came in through the recommendation of this book. If you can recommend it at this level, then if you have a DeepSeek, you can use it every day. Many authors don't have enough writing skills, so they have to make up for the plot, but they don't have enough plot, so they have to use their writing skills to make up for it. This article has neither writing nor plot...

I have been reading novels since I was in elementary school. In the early days, I read Jin Gu Wen and Liang Liu. In high school, I started reading Huang Yi, Ni Kuang and Rosen, and then I came into contact with online novels. I still remember that the domain name of my starting point was cmfu. Com, how the bad guy was made, Zichuan and the like. Now I am over 40 years old. I have been reading for decades and basically don't post anything. But sometimes I can't help but say a few words in a paragraph. This should be the so-called silent majority! As long as the writing is smooth and the plot isn't crazy, any book can be read. Before reading this book, I read through the comments, and most of them were filled with complaints. I didn't want to read it. But then I thought about it, most people read books and don't know how to post. They are the main readers. You will know if it is suitable for you. After all, most platinums in the early stages of Qidian can tell stories and have basic writing skills, and some platinums later only My ability to write stories is acceptable, but my writing style is just not interesting. The success has a lot to do with the background factors of the times. Now that I write a book according to the model of Jin Yong and Gu Long, I think it will also hit the streets. Dare to write about Xiao Longnu being ✕, dare to write about my favorite woman for Long Xiaoyun, dare to write about A-Zhu being beaten to death by myself, dare to write that the woman I like is a high-class bitch and continue to use myself? I read more than 20 chapters with the mentality of giving it a try, only to find that it is not bad, the writing is capable, there are few long sentences, the story is told smoothly, the writing is refreshing, not abusive, and the plot is well advanced. I finished reading it in one sitting today, and I realized with embarrassment that I had forgotten most of the previous plot 😅! I believe that most book friends are similar to me. After work, they read and read after dinner to pass time, relax their brains, read when it suits them, and quit when they are not satisfied. How can I have so much time to comment in the book review area? In conclusion, if you like entertainment, this book can be read, it is not amazing, not ugly, and it is enough to pass the time! I just realized that I have written 600 words. It is my first time to write a long book review, and I am really tired. I have been a member of the Qidian Gao v account for 20 years. Including this post, there are exactly 10 posts. I will basically stop posting them in the future. I can't help myself this time. The main reason is that I find that the book review environment is much worse than it was more than ten years ago. There are few valuable ones and it is more about venting emotions!

If you have a system and still have to be a dog for capital, you should bring your own dry food. Don't look for various excuses. To put it bluntly, you still have a guilty conscience and no confidence.

The author is actually platinum, why haven't I read the novel he wrote? Never heard of it🤐

Xiaodao also tried to write about the city. Many people who came into contact with online novels after 2000 are old readers. They are used to seeing those imaginations that came out of thin air in the past and are completely out of touch with reality, so much that it feels like watching cartoons. Many writings about fantasy cultivation are either like playing games and fighting monsters, or like school classes (a group of children destroying the world with magical magic) Although urban novels also need to fabricate some imagination out of thin air, they are based on some real phenomena in reality. Not 100% full imagination, 50% imagination. Even in the Jin Guliang period, those martial arts were based on real history (even if they were not completely accurate, they were based on facts, had roots, and were not water without roots). Then whether it was Guo Jing or Seven Swords Down the Tianshan Mountains, Yunhai Jade Bow Edge, there was smoke and smoke, but the imagination was not wild enough at that time. The novel always takes place in the human world. Martial arts and immortal magic can reach the sky and destroy mountains, but other things cannot be separated from people. The most important thing is that many fantasy fairy tales are only suitable for those under 18 years old. They have no sense of immersion and are completely out of touch with the real world. If you are writing about mysterious martial arts (that is, martial arts that surpass traditional martial arts), you can write it into the real world. Even if you integrate mysterious martial arts masters into the real city, it is not impossible to be close to the magic of immortality. It is not the 3010 of science fiction, it is not genetic modification, and it is not superpowers. After the fusion of the alien planet and the earth, the immortal magic, science, technology and martial arts are part of it. However, many of the humanities and reality that happen on the planet must be exactly the same as those in the city now, otherwise they will have no roots. There must be a strong sense of substitution. Many protagonists are doing very poorly in the city. Suddenly one day he can practice peerless immortal skills, which is extremely powerful. What will happen now (this principle must be very real) Reality) If the readers themselves are the protagonists, what do they want? (This present is borrowed from the current phenomenon, but it is written in 3010 to prevent it from being harmonized.) I like the city, not because of the type of city, but because the city is yy and not completely divorced from reality. It may be a wild imagination, but it is still a person who writes it, not an illusory god. The urban system flow and time travel so far are similar to Golden Finger, which is something between fairy magic and supernatural powers. It is just using this kind of thing to write about the indifference of the world, the coldness of the world, and the fireworks of the world. But the fantasy fairy cultivator has to find another way out, and there is a long way to go.

Are you serious about the first song? Writing this song shows that there is definitely a generation gap between the author and readers born in the 2000s and above. Those born in the 2000s are already 25. I feel tacky when listening to this song.

I endured reading a few chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. The plot is very old-fashioned. It can be said that there is no improvement compared with most early works of the same type. In my opinion, it is not as good as others. I really find it difficult to understand the author's song selection. This is not a question of whether it is niche or not, but it just doesn't sound good. The song at the beginning has a smell of the 80s, but the problem is that many people born in the 80s don't like to listen to it. The description in the novel was very popular, and various professors from the music department gave high praise. It was really embarrassing to watch, and it felt like it was all being supported. In summary, it was written to highlight the protagonist's power and to slap in the face. Anyway, I couldn't stand the first part of it. No matter what happens behind it, the front part just doesn't look good. I hope you can avoid lightning. But if you really think you like it, just pretend I didn't say it.

Stop writing urban writing, it's kind of funny. I was screwed so miserably by a woman before, so I turned around and started writing about my relationship with a female internet celebrity. The songs I wrote for others were all good songs, forget about my own. I thought I wanted to start a career, but now it's fucking outrageous. This song is about love and you can conquer the world, it's awesome. What do you want to write about, being a music dad? Then you still wear a vest. Cultivate a group of Internet celebrities, hit the streets, become kings and queens to make you look awesome? I am a little Karami, I am not strong, I am passive when it comes to cooperation, and I am speechless when I say that I get angry when I see a song. There is no main plot at all. It is completely impossible to substitute. How do you look at it!

Your playlist really blew me away!

Please don't see many people saying that the songs are not good to listen to and the song selection is not straight, so they choose to leave. As long as you are interested in novels about writing songs in the entertainment industry, you must not miss this one. The difference from others is that the author is really serious and responsible in telling the story. The plot synopsis is very sensible, and there is no slap in the face. The "plug-ins" are reasonable, the emotions are smooth, and the refreshing points are endless. There are some funny clips interspersed, but the whole movie is not as open and closed as Xiaobai Wen's, and is very calm. The handling of emotions, in so many similar novels, personally feels that it is very delicate, and it is slowly advancing. I highly recommend giving it a try🐉

I'm really shocked. If I hadn't taken a look at the author, I really wouldn't have been able to tell that he was a platinum writer. In entertainment, this level is at best average, but a platinum writer?

Love sees through you. . . What the hell. . . . . You wouldn't think that everyone likes Phoenix Legend and their country style, right? Their songs are not that vulgar. . . . .

The author's writing style is actually OK, but the main reason is that the setting is not good. When the saliva songs start to sound like me, I don't have the patience to see those awesome works published later. I usually open the music player while reading this kind of novel. If you recommend some saliva songs to me, I won't feel happy anymore. Since it is a parallel world and a world dominated by Han people, if you just copy dozens of popular songs from the earth and add dozens of English songs, it will be enough for you to write 2 million words, so why bother to deduct Sou Sou from the beginning?

It's a little better than that one I'm the best at. Since his book Junk Artist became popular, I don't expect Huayu novels to have any aesthetics in the short term.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist needs reputation, and then uses a pen name to write songs for others. How does the reputation come about? I hate this kind of person who writes songs with a vest. Can't he use his own name? The number of water words, and then put B at the end. If you use a vest, how do you get reputation? Is the system regular? As soon as I saw someone writing a song with a vest on, I immediately told him to quit, and the platinum author made me laugh to death.

I don't understand why you need to get a vest, it's a code within a code.

Additional refinement

First, go through and get the vest. Second, create a task chain for each supporting character, and the protagonist has to complete it. It is very fragmented and does not give a sense of substitution. Third, a little bit of ink is awesome.

The routine I wrote ten years ago is still platinum. Go back and write about pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, breaking off an engagement, and Liulong Aotian.

The reviews don't seem to be good, don't panic, I'll take a look and test the water first. If you die from the poison, report it.

I'm convinced. It's a song I've never heard of before. Even if I listen to it, it doesn't sound very good. I still write this kind of ancient song and it can still hit the charts. It's much better than singing a jumping machine. This song is from 2009. I sang it 25 years ago without considering the reality. Can a college student write this kind of song?

Everything else is fine, but the plot is too vulgar, and the beginning of the plot sucks.

It's ugly, it's still a slobbery song, it's just for self-pleasure

There is toxicity, but not strong, but diaphragm effects

You must be young to see the old-fashioned ones who can't choose good songs. When I used to use a flip-slide phone, I would listen to Internet love songs such as Leng Leng, Liu Zhe, Zheng Yuan and Huan Zi. They were very popular at the time. Later, pop songs such as Wang Sulong, Xu Songbenxi and Xu Liang appeared, which really filled my memories.

I can't stand watching the third golden chapter, the author is also talented

The platinum author is also poisonous, and that school girl is outrageous. She is a small internet celebrity with 5,500 followers, haha. I can't stand it anymore after seeing dozens of pictures, bye bye

Damn it, was this written by Platinum? ? Poison, platinum? Ha ha

It was well written, but suddenly the system ate half of it. Pour yourself rice, no wonder this book is not popular