Dream of the Red Chamber: I've Got Plenty of Confidence

The writing and plot are like shit. You can wear it with an air show. Why don't you wear it with the earth? You can wear it with your mother.

It's a bit hard to think about. What's not good to bring? I'm going to wear it to an air show. Most of the exhibits at the air show are models. The rest have guns but no bullets. I'm just asking if you're in a hurry.

I've read a few chapters and don't know what to write. I feel like I haven't read them yet. I'm just depressed along with the pig's feet.

The protagonist looks like an outsider in civil war and an expert in fighting outside. Modern history and alien invasions are mentioned every few chapters. Shouldn't you just kneel down when you see the emperor? What's the use of opening such a big hook for the protagonist? Just the temperament of being a slave. When the protagonist fights the aliens, the emperor will say two words about you: "You are a good dog."

What did you write? It's a mess. You are a senior citizen of the Duke's palace, and you are thinking about doing business all day long. I am really convinced, but your words are not fluent, so I deleted it.

I watched it for Wang Xifeng, but after about ten chapters, I really couldn't understand what the protagonist was going to do. It is probably just a stream of consciousness, without an outline. I write where I think and where I write, leaving the reader confused. And I always feel like I have a petty attitude, and I don't know if I am too open-minded. I can obviously use my advantage to suppress others, but I am always thinking about making some inexplicable things all day long, such as milk tea and fried chicken.

When I saw that Wang Xifeng was one of the female protagonists in the introduction, it didn't seem like it. Wang Xifeng had little but no big ideas, and was a jealous person. She was a master at house fighting, and her own man couldn't even control a girl who was in the same room with him (in a wealthy family like the Duke's Mansion). (And he is the inheritor), Jia Lian was forced to steal food, and he had not yet given birth to a son for Jia Lian. If an heir does not have a son, the title will be lost. He cannot even see this clearly, so Wang Xifeng is only a little smart, not a good wife.

What a pretentious protagonist. He played such a big trick. As a result, there were several chapters full of ink and I didn't know what to do.

After reading ten chapters, here's a summary 1. There are a lot of mental descriptions, various speculations, and very few dialogues 2. There are many words in each paragraph, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Is there no editor? 3. The text is not white enough, it is obscure, and I find it unpleasant to read. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Rubbish is rubbish. I didn't write much about the garden drama. I went to construction every day. The emperor was not anxious no matter how many civilians died. The protagonist, the eunuch, was very anxious.