The Evil God Who Only Wants to Be Good Refuses to Be Fawned Over by Them

I collected this book when I was only writing three or four chapters. I have to say that the quality is not bad, but the biggest problem is that there is no main line to promote it. In fact, it doesn't matter if there is no big main line. It is not impossible to make it into a daily novel. But it's a bit different at this stage. I'd like to ask a few questions personally. First of all, the protagonist needs the will power, because without the will power, the protagonist will go crazy. The problem is that it is not difficult for you to get the will power. You can get a lot of it by killing casually, so it is not necessary to help the heroine to obtain the grateful will power. Secondly, at this stage, the male and female protagonists are working as priests, and the heroine's goal is to revive the Dahe Church, but there is no other way except to make money. In fact, it would not be better to have some abnormal events, and then the male and female protagonists act together to promote their relationship, and then revive the Church of God. Except for the male protagonist laundering the dirty money and the male protagonist's charm attracting some female followers, this religious sect doesn't feel like there is any sign of revival. I feel that the author has plot foreshadowing on the scholar side, but you have written more than 20 chapters. From a physical point of view, the writing is okay, but the plot has not progressed at all. There are many descriptions of the heroine selling meat, but every time I meet the male protagonist, the evil god vest, I will go to fight with him. You must know that even the vest belongs to the male protagonist. How many times have I encountered it? The first time was when the heroine was meddling in her own business and the protagonist got into a grudge with her. The second time was when the hero stole something from her. The heroine messed around a lot and finally the hero wiped her ass. The third time was when the heroine's morals did not allow her to use the stolen money. The hero used a vest to pretend to be a bad guy and laundered the money, and then donated money to the religious cult so that the heroine could use the money with peace of mind. As long as the male protagonist wears a waistcoat in the plot, the female protagonist assumes the role of an obstructionist. This description really makes people speechless. It doesn't matter once or twice. It makes it more difficult for the male protagonist to do things every time. Nowadays, readers are not very tolerant of drag queens. Even being a vase is better than being a drag. Pig teammates should not exist even more than divine enemies. And even if the heroine is holding back, she has nothing to do with the hero. Apart from their physical ambiguity, the two of them have nothing to do with each other emotionally. The heroine may have a vague crush on her, but the hero doesn't feel like he likes her at all. In addition, The drag heroine you wrote is even worse physically. If they are a couple or they have a crush on each other, it would be okay to be a drag. The male protagonist gives the impression that he is trying to revitalize the religion to survive and then mix up his willpower. For the heroine, it is only her high-quality willpower that helps her. I can only say that the plot should enter the main plot as early as possible or find a way to appreciate the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists. There is no need to confirm the relationship too early. At least let the male protagonist have other emotions besides lust. Don't look at the body a few times and feel nothing else. If she is always dragging her down, why not listen to the system and distort her personality from the beginning. Other book friends have no problem reading this book. The problems pointed out in the comment area are that the plot is not promoted. There are no major problems in other aspects. The advantages are not so prominent that they cover up all the problems, and the shortcomings are not intolerable.

According to this condition, it is definitely a high-quality work, with smooth logic, relatively reasonable conflict design, and good characters. Unfortunately, today is a fast food society, and not so many people pay attention to logical relationships (which is a pity), so it is really a pity that this good work has not been noticed.

The unit is busy with the year-end review and needs oxen and horses to be on standby at any time. It has been working overtime for several days and is unable to write.

Oh Nei, please update another hundred chapters. I will do anything.

Although I don't mind the protagonist being stabbed into the sea by a woman It's not the problem with this chapter But what you wrote didn't make me want to read it Record post

Others are Golden Chapter Three, but you are Poisonous Chapter Three. It gives you a headache.

It's actually okay to read it in one go, but it's a bit of a torture if you catch up on updates. It can be seen that I want to write a story about the character slowly changing, but it is a bit inconsistent with the current situation of fast food in contemporary novels. If you take a quick glance and see the heroine who has a bit of high blood pressure, you will be satisfied.

It looks good, there are no flaws in the logic, and the character of the protagonist is also good. Maybe it's because the plot is a bit long, and the world view hasn't been opened yet, but it doesn't affect the perception. Good luck, author 👍

Updated one month ago. . . How was it derived? A lot of new people and new things are wasted just waiting.

My writing is good, but maybe I didn't get the outline of this book right. I'll keep working hard on the next book.