I Recast the Glory of the Dharma Ring in Middle-Earth

Middle-earth is indeed difficult to write about. The upper limit is high and the lower limit is low. There are powerful Valar and Maia, orcs that ordinary people can kill, Melkor whose strength is unknown, and Sauron who had the Supreme Lord of the Rings chopped off by ordinary people. In short, don't stop updating. Come on.

It means that people from the Dharma Circle come to Middle-earth, and the natives become natives in another place.

To be honest, I am very worried about the plot behind it. Since you have chosen to follow the path of the Golden Tree, your relationship with Lani should not be so close, at least it should not be a partnership with the King of Stars. Lani's ideas conflict with the Golden Tree. You have to know that most players who really like Melina actually dislike Lani. These two female characters are actually the opposite of selfishness and selflessness. So if the author intends to have both, the final result is likely to be that the heroine's character collapses, readers are displeased with both sides, and the book slowly loses readers and then eunuchs. The last few chapters involve the party struggle between Lani and Melina. The protagonist's emotional indecision has led to a very bad impression. What we hope to see is the decisive King of Elden, and we hope the author can consider it carefully.

I thought it was a player who traveled through time, and it was just a waste of time.

To be honest, you really can't do anything too outrageous in Middle-earth. Unless you are allowed by Ilúvatar, you can only follow the great music composed by Aenu.

The most criticized problem is the imbalance of combat power. There are currently seven pure Maia-level forces in Middle-earth. Counting Kaleporn and Galadriel, it can be counted as nine Maia. People like Yiru and Da Lezhang have made it clear that they want to balance good and evil. As a result, when the magic circle comes in, it takes away the C position. Isn't it a bit too much? Second, Whether it is in The Hobbit , such as Bilbo overcoming cowardice and following Thorin's expedition to the Lonely Mountain, helping the team out of danger on the way. The arrogant Thorin was helped to put aside his prejudices and accept Bilbo. At the end, he lay in bed and lamented that if everyone learned the Hobbit's attitude towards life, the world would be a better place It's still in the Lord of the Rings. Frodo had courage since childhood after Gandalf's sacrifice. The wizard's pendant reaches the brave man who bears the fate of all the people in the world. Sam escorts the loyal and brave man all the way. Gimli and the prince put aside their prejudices and malice and become comrades who hold hands and grow old together. Aragorn's evasion of his responsibility as the king of Gondor turns to acceptance, and Pippin Merry's naughtyness becomes mature It is obvious that these characters face danger and danger. The highlights and growth that burst out in difficult moments are the core of the story Now that the transitional interference of the Ring of Law forces has turned the Lonely Mountain Expedition into a backdrop, the original characters have lost their character growth and teamwork. Then Thorin said to Bilbo, whom he despised, to pay tribute to our friendship. Is there any friendship between these two characters? I am very curious about the next Lord of the Rings. Should Latarn and Frodo fly to Mount Doom to destroy the Ring? Aragorn, with the three tribes and gold power, should kneel down to the four hobbits who were confused and thank each other for their friendship.

A king is not born a king, and the same is true for heroes. He needs constant experience. It was Thorin's continuous training on the journey on the Lonely Mountain that was able to break the golden curse in the end. The Hobbit also grew up through experience. Now the protagonist has basically blocked all difficulties. This journey cannot be said to be an adventure, but more like an outing. The local heroes of Middle-earth are becoming more and more passers-by... Maybe it is an issue that cannot be avoided when writing fan fiction. I just feel that something is wrong. If the author can see it, please don't criticize me.

So far, it seems that the previous chapters have been written quite carefully. The author has a certain understanding of the world view of The Lord of the Rings. At least it is not written as if it were an ordinary medieval world. Except for the beginning that destroys the mystery and style of Yiru, it is okay. The dialogue words have local characteristics and the writing style is also certain. Then I would like to make a suggestion: There are many fans of The Lord of the Rings, and each starts in a different location. Some are in Linton, some are founding in the Rovanian Wilds, and some are hanging out in other places. I didn't want to say it at first, but several Lord of the Rings fanfics that have come out recently, including this one, all have to imitate the explosive beginning of the book. First, go to the Shire to touch Bilbo and work for Bilbo as an assembly line worker. Can't we think of something else on our own? Last month, a book that started with the story of Shire heading west was completely copied from the MC's plot. At present, this book is going in the opposite direction. The subsequent plots are also original. I hope to write my own style and avoid excessive overlap. Leave a favorite to read and watch next

It's about Middle-earth, and the author's writing is quite interesting. But I don't know much about the game Ring of Law, so it's difficult to understand the characters and background. Is there any way to lower the reading threshold for readers who have never played Ring of Magic?

The creator god of Middle-earth is not dead

I'm someone who doesn't have much interest after looking at my resume. Middle-earth has too many cheats, but Middle-earth doesn't need such big cheats. The Lord of the Rings wants an epic feel, not a flat push.

The writing is not too bad, but the ban caused a reaction and more people scolded it.

Just after seeing the golden tree planted, others gave some benefits, and the protagonist had already given away a bunch of things. This is not like Marlin Frenzy where I get as much pleasure from other people's reactions. He gave me a dull feeling, just like throwing money away

The plot has started to get boring. Let me tell you, no matter how much the original Lord of the Rings praises long live friendship, the overall plot is about unity, the weak defeat the strong, and the main theme is a friend in need, even the Lord of the Golden Flower, a big boss in Middle-earth, has to step aside The current situation is that the dry friendship is boring to readers, and the suffering that reflects the true love is not at all, Bilbo is useless, and a good adventure turns into a fair. Road movie, the kind that rides on a donkey, After defeating the dragon, if you are not going to call Morgoth back for a beating, my suggestion is that in the next plot, just take Bilbo's Lord of the Rings and recruit an army of 10,000 gold to crush it, and try to solve it within fifty chapters. The Maia-level strength of the Golden Flower boss is there. He slashed from the Gray Harbor to Mordor without even doing anything. No one directly interfered, and the protagonist has no idea what kind of influence he has mixed up.

This author mainly talks about not listening to advice.

I have only read about a dozen chapters. I became interested in this genre recently because I read the Elden Ring in One Piece, but this book is too weak. At the beginning, Da Le Zhang said that it would be fine if he was not the main character, but later on he would still be fighting like an ordinary warrior. If you are not the main character and are building a home nearby, why should you weaken your strength? Then what is the point of watching it? Isn't watching a fan just watching the sparks of friction between two works? Why should we only restrict one party to force the other party to conform? This is very boring. If you don't cut it, you can also let the people in the original work fight the creatures that match the original work, and let the strong people in the original work fight Eldon. What's the climax of forcing the strong Elden to work as a miscellaneous soldier? This kind of thing, you know at a glance that you will win, and if you lose, you should complain. It's not interesting at all.

A eunuch? The best way to deal with the third hurdle in writing a book is to turn a blind eye

What the hell, you are doing things in a place where the God of Creation is like this, are you worthy of the supreme will?

I feel that the writing is a bit poor. The Faded One killed the whole border area by himself (if he were put on a player who searched the map carefully, it would be equivalent to massacring the border area). During this period, many NPCs he came into contact with ended in tragedy. The Faded Person was originally a warrior who followed Godfrey. He has experienced strong winds and waves, so he should be a very determined warrior. Why does he always show a sad expression?

Just like the title, no man, I've been reading it for a few months and it's updated to 24 chapters? If you can't write, why don't you just cut it into the palace so that I can move it out of the bookshelf?

I just updated it, I don't know how long it has been, I will update it when I remember it.

Brother, do you still want to update? Suddenly I found that two chapters were updated two days ago, and they are gone again today...

It's dead again. It's been coming in and out. Fortunately, I didn't order it.