Game of Thrones Alexander the Great's Iron Throne

In fact, I can't stand it anymore. There is no foreshadowing for this stressful surname at the beginning. Although it can be seen that there should be foreshadowing (you better have it), an illegitimate child transforms into a nobleman too quickly. You might as well not write about illegitimate children from the beginning. Come back to the first half of the book, when you buy a slave, which is a crime in the Seven Kingdoms, you just give it to a merchant you just met. After you buy it, you still give it to a housekeeper who is not produced by the system in the presence of a maid. What if this village girl has such a deep-rooted belief in the Seven Gods that she goes to the master to report it? Where there are people, there is intrigue. Why is it written as if everyone in the master's family is dead? Later, I saw an eight-year-old who was born with supernatural powers fighting an adult. The description of the battle against pirates had almost no details and no sense of excitement. Really! It should be fun to use 20 elite system soldiers to beat 100 natives. As it is written, 8 armored knights attack from the flanks. This dimensionality reduction attack should describe the gap caused by equipment and martial arts in a more in-depth way, forming a one-sided situation. However, none of the above points are exciting. The description of this battle casually does not even mention whether the 8 knights are riding horses, whether the opponent's leader is riding a horse, and what are the nobles who can't even buy horses? What's more, this is a valley, a place rich in cavalry. , Forget it if you don't ride on the other side, why don't you ride on it? When it comes to the economic part, it's a mess. The troops that recruited 5 or 6 hundred people using the system don't seem to need food, drink or salary. There are no maintenance fees for non-system workers and ships. You must know that off-the-job occupations Soldiers cost a lot of money. The 100,000 gold dragons that the protagonist has are not enough to burn for a long time. If the system soldiers do not need food, drink, and maintenance fees, then it must be explained separately. I did not mention it at all before. In short, it is just like a running account to push the plot without considering reality at all. Then the knights will not be separated from the riders. I will give 100 miscellaneous soldiers at the beginning Large cavalry regiments are almost all professional riders instead of knights, that is, knights lead mounted attendants, and you will be given a hundred armed knights directly, and farming is nothing. What else do 100 armored cavalry with aristocratic education need? I will directly push my neighbors, and then use these people to form an administrative team immediately. Constantine XI is smiling with these troops. The castle can still hold on for a few more months. You must know that Eddard Stark only had 50 Winterfell guards when he took over as the king. Give him your team and he will hang Jaime's head on the wall of the Red Keep tomorrow and declare the Lion family treason. Tywin will go to the Hand Tower in person tomorrow to explain that it is best to forgive the debt to the Iron Throne. I really don't want to step on the new book, but you are too disrespectful of the details and the original work. Game of Thrones is popular because of its grand world view and full of details. Families that do not appear in the main TV series have a lot of background settings (such as the Hightower family). Let's start with you. Regarding the conversion of illegitimate children into regular children, the buying and selling of slaves (still slaves with craftsmanship skills, slaves with expertise are simply difficult to obtain, you are like a cabbage, and the slaves are foreigners across the strait, are you not afraid of exposure?) In short, this is what happens when you write a book without doing your homework. I hope the author can encourage you.

Alexander the Great conquered the entire Westeros, and it was not until the Citadel took out the historical documents that he turned around and conquered the entire Essos😏

The writing of Ailin is so stupid that he can't even hold a bowl of water. If the three sisters win Ailin, they might hold their noses and admit it. But if the three sisters lose Ailin, why don't they let out a wave of blood? They also gave the protagonist hush money. How could Aylin be loved by the people of the valley if he was at this level?

Young Cersei

It's really fun for me to watch, a few hundred troops in a bigger place are still king.

Which women will the protagonist accept? Currently there are Pebble Island housekeepers Mary and Amelia. In addition to them, it is recommended to accept Arya, the Three Fools, Cersei, Rose of Highgarden, Princess Dorne, Dragon Mother, Myrcella... Others, others added, author, I can only help you here, I have forgotten too much about the plot of Game of Thrones. . .

Since the recent reading data is not ideal, please adjust the update time. The first chapter will still be posted at 7:30 in the morning, and the second chapter will be posted at 7:30 in the evening. First, try the reading effect within a week after adjusting this time period. It will change later depending on the situation.

After reading the previous content chapter "A Prairie of Rage", could the Bran mentioned by the author be the Night King?

It feels quite appropriate

A map found

The Blackfire family mentioned in this book, I think we can learn from this treatment.

I don't understand why the protagonist is in a hurry to become king?

Author, please continue to maintain the progress and rhythm. The Five Kings are approaching chaos and it will not be easy.

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Don't suppress the main character too much when writing a riot. Otherwise, even if you write millions of words, it won't look good. If you keep it up, it will be uncomfortable to watch.

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author!

Not to mention the slow progression of the plot, it's also very special.

Brother Changzi hasn't come yet, I am Brother Changzi

After reading the background data, this book is not well-written and is considered to be at the bottom of its genre. I would like to sincerely thank you for reading this book. If you don't like this book, just scratch it or remove it from the shelf. There is no need to scold me in a long speech. As for the evaluation, please feel free to do so.

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

It was the gameplay panel of Explosive Soldiers that kept me going The author has a mediocre grasp of the plot and mediocre character creation, often using too much force The writing style is mediocre, and a key point in the character dialogue has to be set off by ten useless nonsense To rule on the minor matter of losing something to the residents, the small matter of the family being cheated by the neighbor next door, not to be direct when speaking, where to say a lot of "I feel about this matter... My beloved residents, I am extremely sympathetic, but..., What do you want me to do..." Say a lot This kind of nonsense looks good, but in fact, if ten words can be explained clearly, it has to be watered down into a hundred words Then there is too much effort in character creation Tyrion, who has only met the protagonist once, only had one meal, and said a few words, seems to have become a life-and-death acquaintance. Same The Goldfinger application is also rubbish. The loyal soldiers summoned by the system are used by the protagonist as consumables, and the loyal guards are used to protect the slave soldiers bought by the protagonist Shouldn't the summoned loyal soldiers be used as generals to lead the cannon fodder militia? The protagonist is a knight, and a wealthy knight actually provokes a bunch of viscounts and counts to hunt him down. I can't figure out why The protagonist has more than one illegitimate heir. The protagonist's family has no grudges against those nobles. The protagonist and the leader The land property is only a few dozen gold dragons, and there is no profit to be made It is not for political reasons. The Aylin family has no big enemies in the valley. Even if there is, it is not the turn to take action against the protagonist, a knight who is loyal to Aylin Economy The system was also in ruins. I bought some food and hundreds of slaves, but it actually cost 50,000 gold dragons When the protagonist inherited the family business, his property was only 30 gold dragons Go to the Eagle's Nest City to hire a free knight for 2 gold coins a day, and you have to pay 2 gold coins a day. Give a table of good food and wine You are a knight leader, with more than a thousand people, I don't know how many years you have saved to get 30 gold dragon property Can a free knight, working as a bodyguard for half a month, earn more than you, a wealthy nobleman, can earn in a few years? A set of ordinary full-body armor only costs four or five golden dragons. It can be used as a family heirloom. You, a wandering knight, can earn half a set of armor for one day's employment fee? It is impossible for Tywin to make money so fast When writing these places, there is no brain at all Then the protagonist did not use the golden finger to develop when he was eight years old, directly skipping the prime time of development, and went directly to the beginning of the plot, Jon's death The time point The protagonist, an inconspicuous wealthy knight in a small corner of Westeros, was actually poisoned by the Faceless Man with the Strangler. He was poisoned just after the protagonist redeemed the antidote Not to mention how much it costs to hire the Faceless Man, how much does a bottle of the Strangler cost? As a result, the protagonist drank the antidote and was still unconscious It was really poisonous. If I didn't want to see what happens when the protagonist's golden finger explodes in the later stage, I really wouldn't be able to watch it Very Toxic

In fact, the writing is very good, but the subject matter is too niche, which limits the results.

There's a fire in the backyard. If we don't deal with it quickly, Sansa has all the power and still believes that he wants to transfer Mary. The male protagonist has water in his head, but he is still too confident and believes that Sansa has to be in love with him, so he is worried for him.

The author is amusing himself. Messy

You must know that Robert hates lions and regicides very much. He just asked the lion to be the guardian of the east. Are you sure that the valley will not directly rebel?

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