Douluo Dalu: Ruling the World from Commoner Beginnings

The three major poisonous points that I can't stand are the first one, which is Tang San. The protagonist snatches Xiao Wu, and Tang San only glances at it at most, instead of wanting to kill the protagonist as it is written in the book, because it is unnecessary. And don't tell me anything about world will. The second one is Tang Hao. Although Tang Hao is semi-disabled, the protagonist can discover Tang Hao. Why can't Tang Hao discover the protagonist? The third point is the martial soul. I originally thought it would evolve in the direction of the Death Scythe. However, it turned out that the protagonist wanted to practice ninjutsu. As for whether there will be ninjutsu in the future? I don't know, because Shen Nong is dead. There are things like burning paper, small things to summon spirits, and big things like digging up graves.

The entire world view of Douluo's broken world is distorted. There is no right or wrong, only the love brain and the strength of someone's lust after having sex with a female college student. If you don't plow the whole world and destroy the God Realm by the way, something will happen sooner or later. After all, no matter in any world, there is always a shortage of overfed people. The day is not far away when the world is unified, we advance and retreat together, everyone is like a dragon, and there is no evil or resentment ~

It's so poisonous that I can't stand the first 20 chapters. Writing novels doesn't have to be scientific, but it must be logical. In the first 10 chapters, I kept saying that I wanted to be transparent and want a dog, but in Chapter 8, I went to school the day after my martial soul awakened and there was a fight for the dormitory boss. You, a 6-year-old malnourished child with a level 1 soul power who can't even eat enough, can actually defeat a 10-year-old soul master with a level 7/8 soul power who has been exercising for several years? After the fight, he ran to flirt with Xiao Wu. A first-level person ran to contact a 100,000-year-old soul beast. He didn't say what to do next, but said that Tang Hao ran to see Tang San. He would not hit you. Chapter 9: Making money by brewing wine and making a lot of money is the funniest thing. You are a 6-year-old first-level soul with no future, no background, and no connections. Why should other nobles want to cooperate with you? What skills can't be obtained by arresting you and beating you up? Another thing, Douluo has all kinds of martial arts spirits. Which of those wine-making spirits doesn't make better wine than you? Do you still want to make money by buying wine? The logic behind the novel I wrote is completely broken. Zhang Zhang said he wanted to be a dog but wandered around. He was always pretentious and only had level 1 soul power. He was making a lot of money but the things he sold had no characteristics. It would be better to write that the protagonist is a rich noble or businessman from the beginning, with full soul power, and lick Tang San Xiaowu in the early stage.

I hope the author will refer to some History Channel novels when writing the book. Don't compare the three views of modern people to the three views of the indigenous people of Douluo Continent. It can be seen from the name that the main theme of this book should be that the common people overthrow the nobles. It is not a kind of individual heroism. It should be written with a group portrait in mind. The romance of this book lies in the scenes of new ideas replacing old ideas and the liberation of common people. There is another point to take advantage of. Before the master cultivated Tang San into a talent, the general consensus on Douluo Continent was that those with full innate soul power, or nine or eight levels, if they were not top-notch martial souls, could not become very powerful soul masters. He was considered a waste by the society at that time and someone who could be won over. In fact, many readers of Douluo Dalu have a misunderstanding. Before Douluo 1, they believed that innate soul power equaled the qualifications for cultivation. Otherwise, Tang San's innate soul-powerful Blue Yingcao wouldn't be considered a useless martial soul. The role of a master in helping people choose soul rings was still very rare at that time. If a soul master with innate soul power chooses soul rings randomly, the probability of being useless in this life is very high. From Douluo to Douluo 2345, it is actually a process in which scholars gradually deepen their research on martial arts, allowing some recognized wastes (the wastes are not complete) to have a chance to become geniuses. Some people who trolled the master on the Internet expressed their displeasure because the master's character was not good, yet his theoretical knowledge was definitely the best in the world. As the owner of a useless martial soul, he tried to use knowledge to change his destiny, but his talent was not strong enough and he could not break through the limitations of his innate soul power. I hope that when the author criticizes him, he will not criticize his ability, but his character. But everyone who fights against fate deserves to be respected, even if he fails in the end. I hope that when describing the master, the author will not be as mindless and shady as other Douluo fan authors. The same goes for Tang San. I hope the author can explain Tang San's behavior well later (for example, releasing murderous intent on the protagonist at night. Tang San is a very pure cultivator and killer. This comes from the education of Tang Sect and Tang San's life. I don't think he will pay so much attention to the relationship between men and women). In an excellent work, the characters in it will be very controversial, because these characters are not purely good or bad, and they cannot be distinguished by pure good and bad. People are often complex. I hope the author can reflect these.

See Chapter Nine. Let's complain: Brewing wine at the age of 6 is really poisonous. I don't know why such an old setting is used? Why do you, a kid with no background, dare to grab this business? I'll kill you in a matter of minutes! If you don't want the protagonist to be short of money, give the protagonist a better background. Instead of giving such a poisonous setting! Also, you, a person with level 1 soul power, can actually beat others at level 10. Just because the protagonist has learned Taekwondo? Do you think a 10-year-old kid who learned Taekwondo can defeat a 30-year-old strong man who knows nothing? The difference between level 1 and level 10 is similar to this

The biggest fear when writing a book is that it cannot be logically self-consistent, and it only comes out one after another. In the beginning, the author said that wealth should not be revealed in vain. There are also various worries about the nobles. As soon as you enter the academy, you will cooperate with the city lord's son to sell wine. The profits are so huge and my son doesn't check. Do you think I don't check your background? With your level of martial arts, even with Xiao Wu, you will still die. Same question, the beginning of the chapter is all timid, afraid of Tang San. Then, as soon as you enter the academy, you fight Wang Sheng directly. Even if you know Taekwondo, you were so timid before and started fighting without any prerequisites. The change is abrupt. After that, let alone fighting Xiao Wu, level 1 fighting against level 10 is completely nonsense. Especially the personality, sometimes timid and sometimes strong, changing all the time.

I feel like there is something wrong with the heroine. Xiao Wu is being watched by Tang Hao. If she hadn't been on good terms with Tang San, she would have been killed by Tang Hao long ago or kept as a spirit ring for Tang San. Xiao Wu is an explosive bag, and it is also an explosive bag in the fire. The protagonist has no chance, unless of course she has a stronger background or strength. A hundred thousand year soul ring and soul bone are too tempting. Don't expect Tang Hao to have sympathy. He came from the city of killing.

It feels like the protagonist's behavior is completely illogical. First, innate soul power level 1 cannot be practiced properly. Why are you following Xiao Wu? Xiao Wu likes Tang San for many reasons. Just a few carrots and you're done. I really think that these 100,000 years of my life have been in vain. Xiao Wu confessing his identity is also very later in the plot. Second I don't know if the innate soul power at level 1 can be raised to level 10. Still thinking about 100,000 years Third, I knew Tang Hao was following behind. Also go do Xiao Wu. Fourth: Don't you want to be a revolutionary who is a civilian soul master? There is no method developed to help civilians rest. Just follow the steps like everyone else. That soul master doesn't do physical exercise or something? Fifth: The spirit of martial arts is like a sickle, so there is no need to fight with others. Sixth: As mentioned earlier, going to school is very important. I am worried that there are no places for work-study students. From now on, just make money as a need for spiritual practice. No matter whether it is reasonable or not. I will go out with Xiao Wu every day. Forced to leave school. What the hell kind of plot design is this. I originally thought that I could see a strong protagonist find a new way to practice and become stronger even though he is at level 1. The waste-chai flow is simply not suitable for Tang San's plot. Even if Tang San had five or ten years of development time earlier than Tang San at the same age, it would be better. Tang San's progress on this line was too fast. The protagonist is also designed to be a person who doesn't understand anything. Even if it is designed to have the same skills as Tang San. Then the protagonist's time travel is too short. Even if the protagonist spends more time with Douluo's parents. Even a year is fine. I haven't even met anyone in just a few days. It's a matter of life or death. Want revolution. There is no emotional foreshadowing at all. The author can do whatever he wants. Not even overly dramatic.

Let me talk about this novel in an absolutely rational way: The first 4 chapters are pretty good, starting from the part where the protagonist fights Wang Sheng, but the author can't have even a little common sense of Taekwondo, a martial art, right? The author writes that the protagonist is a 7th-degree black belt who received professional training in college. The minimum age to apply for a 7th-degree black belt in Taekwondo is 43 years old. He needs to teach outstanding students or vigorously promote Taekwondo. He must make a considerable contribution to the martial art of Taekwondo. Both are indispensable. Obviously, the protagonist, as a college student, does not meet any of these conditions. At most, he is only a 4th Dan Taekwondo. After beating Wang Sheng, this part is not too vicious. Even though the protagonist is malnourished, the opponent is several years older than him, and when there is no soul ring, although there is level suppression, it is not particularly powerful. Although Taekwondo is a bit dirty, it can beat people with no trace of training. If the protagonist can beat him, I can barely accept it. I won't talk about the battle with Xiao Wu, the author forcibly increases the combat power. The most important thing is to pick up Xiao Wu, and I got it. If I want to establish this point of view, I must first erase what Tang Hao said in the original work. He originally discovered that Xiao Wu is a soul beast on the first day, and wanted to kill her and leave the soul bones to Xiao San. However, he found that he and Xiao San developed a relationship, and then thought of himself and A Yin, and finally let the two of them go. Obviously Xiao Wu has become someone else's. Our Tang Hao naturally killed Xiao Wu and exploded his soul bone. Then there is the alcohol selling scene. I don't think so much about this. Since the author wants to write a simpler society, it is not impossible and I can accept it. I can't comment on the following, I really can't stand it anymore, I'm sorry, thank you. The author said below other comments that he is a very Buddhist person. In fact, the author is not Buddhist at all. A Buddhist-minded person would not be able to write such a murderous article. This book contains strong prejudice and murderous intention, and it does not look comfortable at all. The protagonist has a great aura, the supporting characters have no IQ, the society is very simple, the logic is unclear, the literary talent is poor, the book looks uncomfortable, and the original work is ignored. I can accept one or two of these seven shortcomings, or even three or four. I can also take a look. You can't have all seven shortcomings, right? Speaking of which, the author requires a reward of 100 before being able to comment. I remember that there was no such thing before, probably because they were afraid of being criticized. Now some true fans are posting comments without thinking. For the sake of my reward of 100, they shouldn't delete my comments, right? I very much hope that someone can defeat me with logic from what I said above, instead of just saying "If you don't like to watch it, no one will force you to watch it" which is unreasonable and logical.

The first time Tang Hao met Xiao Wu was on the day of enrollment. Do you know why he didn't kill her? Because he wanted to keep this hundred thousand year soul beast by his son's side and kill Xiao Wu when Tang San reached a certain level of cultivation. But later he found out that Tang San and Xiao Wu were in love, so he didn't do anything. Therefore, any novel that picks up Xiao Wu at the age of 6 is unrealistic, because Tang Hao will immediately kill Xiao Wu to get the soul bone. Of course, he doesn't need to kill Xiao Wu to raise him by his own son's side. Why not kill him if he goes to someone else's place?