Immortality in Two Realms: Double Pupils Are the Road to Invincibility

Didn't the author check after he finished writing? How come there are some sentences that don't make sense in every chapter 😐

Good starting point. Of the hundred new books, seventy need to be cut, and twenty hang half-dead. Five veteran authors persist with their popularity. Two great new books. There are also three books that have been reported to have hasty endings. . . It needs to be streamlined, it needs to be innovative, it needs to be deep, and it needs to be maintained. . . As a reader, I feel sorry for them.

I'm speechless after reading a few chapters. I subscribed to a review chapter just to complain. I don't understand why the author keeps mentioning discrimination. You want to say that it is possible to be discriminated against because you are ugly and have no money or have scars or your opponents in business life. Of course, there are inevitably a few evil people, but most people are still normal, right? , It is possible for children to be discriminated against, but what about adults? The protagonist either lives in the countryside, or is a superstitious person in the countryside. Maybe he is the reincarnation of an immortal sage. The protagonist is from a big family. Doesn't he have any brains, education or experience? Discrimination is also due to hostility or jealousy or looking down on the person. This kind of discrimination is not because of glasses, but because the person is not good enough. More people use language and blindness and ignore curiosity. They are not children, so they have to keep describing discrimination. Is there something wrong with the author? , Do you have relevant experience or what?

Double pupils are the path to invincibility. Many bones, many paths.

The plot is okay so far. From the front, the first one is outrageous. In this modern era, who is a good person who would cast so many strange looks at you? The driver also wears sunglasses. How do you know that he has eye problems? People nowadays are either playing with their mobile phones or chatting with friends. Who will look at you more? To be honest, only a small number of people are willing to help you. How could so many people look at you?

Fortunately, I survived the first five chapters, and the writing in the following chapters is really good. To be honest, if the first five chapters hadn't been about the protagonist having double pupils and being discriminated against, and then this and that, the book's score would have been even higher.

Why didn't the protagonist buy contact lens straps since he was a child? Did you gain a brain after traveling through time? 😰

Just write the realistic plot normally. Most people will not pay attention to a stranger, and most of them will ignore it. But high school students may think double pupils are cool. The sense of separation is too strong. Just because I live in reality and have gone from elementary school to university, I can't understand it.

There is no need to keep writing about how people with double pupils are discriminated against in modern times. Who would listen to a person's eyes? Even if you see double pupils, you can't just look at them.

The plot is okay, but can the ridicule of the protagonist in this ancient novel be restrained? Is it true that someone would shout "Look there is a blind man here!" When they see a blind man in real life. Do the two of them know anyone who would say such a thing? This kind of ridicule of the protagonist is not only not enjoyable but also annoying. I don't know what the author has always emphasized about the significance of the protagonist being ridiculed in reality. No one really likes to watch it 😥

There is a lot of nonsense, do you want to learn that book that was scolded as 🐶?

The modern part has to be given an ancient mocking halo, it's not necessary

Double pupils are the road to invincibility Many bones, many roads

I feel like I can wait for the protagonist to reach a certain level and then start the spiritual recovery in the real world. If I don't pretend to be cool, it won't feel any better in the real world.

The plot feels too slow. I feel like I watched it but didn't watch it 🙂 Do you feel this way? There is also too little use of Blue Star.

After reading it, I didn't feel any emotion at all. Maybe the plot is too familiar.

The plot is generally okay, vote 2 for more chapters. A few more comments: ① The plot is a bit bland ② There are too few realistic social plots. The description of the discrimination plot mentioned in the comments is a bit too much. Moreover, now that he has cultivated Taoism and is on the road to transcendence, the protagonist's current mentality should be to look down at others. If his mentality has changed, why should he wear contact lenses? There is no need to go abroad. The university is to study Chinese medicine. You can discuss the conditions with the teacher when you enter the university. Studying Chinese medicine is not to heal people but to learn martial arts by yourself. You need to understand yourself. You also need to visit Taoist temples across the country to learn Taoism and Buddhist temples. Martial arts require spiritual cultivation. The knowledge of Buddhism and Taoism in real society is the crystallization of thousands of years of wisdom. It is helpful for the protagonist to practice Taoism in the central world. A college degree is not necessary.

Many books of the same type fail because they have too little or no proportion of reality, and the extraordinary world is also a commonplace. I hope the author will not go to this dead end🥺

The road to double pupil is invincible, but the road is to break many bones.

Your description of urban life in these two circles is too little and understatement.

I really don't want to write about the modern stuff that I hate, and write more about otherworlds. I really don't want to watch the modern stuff.

How does the male protagonist pretend to be a beggar when he travels back in time? Are we modern people with tender skin and tender flesh, or young people who become beggars and are not afraid of not surviving the third level?

Do you have double pupils? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted 😎

Double eyes opened up the world, and there has been no defeat in the world since ancient times? 😏

Double pupils are the way to be invincible, so why purify uranium 235?

Shouldn't the biggest pleasure be appearing in front of the people on Earth? But the plot on Earth is different, just a passer-by 😅

There is no modern plot at all, it is better to just travel to another world...

The Yangshen-style cultivators of the two realms are excellent.

Write well and I will give you three monthly votes. Don't be a eunuch. I like the subject matter very much.

Too little, not enough to watch👀