Mythic Game: Beginning as the Spirit of a Lost Clan

First of all, I am very grateful to my friends who have been watching. This is not a eunuch notice, so you can read it with confidence. This book should be completed. As for the results... In fact, the author rarely reads data now 🪖 This is the first time for the author to write a book, and this book is very special. It is just a random story written by a man in his head, and then submitted it to the editor. Unexpectedly, it was passed. The author has never scanned any lists before, and has never learned any routines. He just has a hot brain, so it may look very different from other books and may seem very fragmented. I would like to apologize to everyone. 😭 Then I wrote a hasty outline and published it in a hurry. The author's expectations for this book were originally very low, because the author suddenly felt free when he went to college, so he wanted to write a novel. In my mind, this book is more of a process of trial and error and constant exploration. In terms of writing techniques, character creation, plot arrangement, and various attempts, I want to gradually explore the style I like and the style that the market can accept. So I am very grateful for the opinions of many people, including now that I have written so many words, I have clearly discovered my shortcomings. Mainly talk about two big problems with this book and how I want to improve it. The first one is the literary youth and affectation in writing. There are a lot of comments like this. In fact, I don't quite understand what Wen Qing means. Then I checked online and found out that they were mainly complaining about nothing. They liked redundant descriptions of the environment and unimportant things, and did not focus on the advancement of the plot itself. Then I found that I often make this mistake. In the following chapters, I am also consciously controlling myself and getting rid of this bad habit. It may be that my thoughts have not completely changed. You need to separate yourself from your previous high school environment and use more spoken language and vernacular. So the author will revise the previous chapters one after another, deleting many of his unconscious expressions of thoughts, unnecessary moaning, and pretentiousness. However, there are many chapters, so he will take his time. Thank you everyone for your valuable opinions. The second big problem is the fundamental contradiction in the plot and characters. For example, some conflicts are forced, but in fact they cannot withstand scrutiny at all. For example, some of the angles are too confusing, there is no fixed angle of view, there is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. For example, some people say that there are too many elements mixed together. The fourth natural disaster they want to see has not yet been presented. The pace is too slow and it does not give the desired expectations. For example, some people think it is a hodgepodge plot, and some things are unnecessary, and some things have too many words. For example, some people think that my name is not chosen well. Some places are awkward, some are unnecessary, and some are not connected smoothly enough. I would like to apologize to everyone here. I have written down all these things, but because the outline has been completed, if I forcibly modify it, I may just write whatever I think of later, which will make it easier to collapse. So this is difficult to change. I can only say that you should pay more attention to the next plot, and then you may try to avoid these problems in the next book or volume. This book should not be about eunuchs, because it is a story that the author likes, and it has been signed, so he said that he will continue to write it according to his own ideas. As for listing and perfect attendance, just leave it as it is. The main purpose of this book is to accumulate more mistakes. Then, to gain more experience and realize many of my own mistakes, I think writing this book is already worth the money. As for updates, because the author is a student, and it happens to be finals week recently, I can only keep updating, but the time is extremely unstable, it should be at night. Everyone is also welcome to put forward their own opinions on this floor, just don't curse or make personal attacks. Thank you everyone! ! 😆😆

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One chapter a day? Too little, not enough to see, or should it be put on the shelves? Please vote for more updates

The update is too slow, the protagonists in the next few pictures do not appear, and the content of these chapters is too bland, like the kind of system author who can write ten chapters a day.

There are some problems with the author's writing techniques. For example, in the chapter about the mysterious player, I feel there is no sense of mystery. I can't grasp the mystery in logical thinking.

It's well written, but it feels a little flawed. The power of 1.3 People's faith can support the consumption and upgrade of a god. The power system is too taken for granted. Ethnic totem, 3 beliefs.

It's a very interesting book. Good luck to the author. I'm going to sleep now.

There are few updates and it's too slow. I need to be flogged 🤓. Either vote or vote.

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