Starting from a Refugee, Martial Arts Leads to the Gods

I am Shen Nong, and if I eat this book, it will not be poisonous.

The writing is smooth and the plot is okay. I feel like I don't have the urge to read it in one sitting. Is it too bland?

Not bad, the feeling comes from the eloquent talk

This author focuses on a salty and wet thing

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To be honest, the beginning of this book is really good, and the male protagonist is also very three-dimensional, tough and coquettish, but why is it that after the Buddha Demon Case, including the latest chapter, the plot progress is so slow, I feel that it is not as exciting as it was at the beginning, and I can't tell what went wrong. Anyway, I subscribed for more than 10 chapters, and the plot can still be connected, I am speechless 🤫

The protagonist is dating the teacher's daughter today and the princess the next. He still pays attention to the leader. He learns this magical power and that magical power, but he doesn't get promoted. Every time there was a real fight, he was almost kicked to death like a wild dog on the roadside, and then nothing happened. The supporting characters will all die one by one in these chapters no matter how much they are written. When Lao Zhang dies, he behaves like a stray dog ​​that he occasionally feeds. When the teacher and father-in-law dies, he behaves like his own dog. When Peacock sees so many people die, he can discuss his own way of annihilation. Even the protagonist's psychological activities are a single stroke. My opinion is that it is better to let Peacock become a full-time employee. His desire for seeking is much stronger than that of the protagonist.

What's this thing about Xiangling? It's just a side dish. I feel like it doesn't push the plot. It's all about this animal. What's the Lao Biukeng Poetry Club? I can write about it occasionally.

This book is quite good, but why are the data and ranking so low? The current starting point is a bit confusing.

There is a lot of gossip, the plot is lame, the pace is slow, and the upgrade path is not obvious. With this writing style, if you change the above question, earning one million a year will not be a problem. It depends on whether the author likes money💰💰💰💰!

It gets more and more boring as you go to the end, it's too long-winded, and it's too watery. It's always explained and introduced, and there's not much real plot advancement. Almost two-thirds of the 2,000 words in one chapter are water, and the water filling is getting more and more serious, forget it.

It suddenly occurred to me that this book actually has nothing to do with martial arts, except for the training of the violent wind sword technique at the beginning. The rest are just opposite waves. Come up and turn it up. Replace the knife or something with a staff. In fact, it doesn't matter.

Your two books about human nature and worldliness are quite wonderful, and you can recall many details. It would be impossible to write them without experience. The opening chapter of this book is really as good as that of some great writers, and it deserved to be number one on the fantasy new book list at the time. But, you are really partial to science 😵. Daily life is so interesting, but it turns out that you can only write about daily life. Your advantage ranges can only help you to reach the upper limit, but you can't write the main line. If you can't support the story, it won't look good 😅. This way, the further you go, the more you will feel like you are stuck. This is true for both books. Everyone still reads novels mainly for the story, but it is a pity that the most important thing cannot be done well.

In the story, the martial arts are almost at the top level, and they are still the servants of several women. Does the author have masochistic tendencies or something like that, or is this a brand new sexual orientation?

I've always felt good about it, and the characters are very flavorful. Nie Shi and Xiang Ling are very interesting, and they have a certain style. However, when I looked at it, suddenly a bunch of women started to buzz around and started to have no brains. Either the protagonist was licking without a brain or the woman was accompanying them without a brain. The halo of the protagonist began to grow, and I felt like I was falling down. To be honest, having a few more confidants is not a big problem, but in the later chapters, it starts to look very cheap, and it feels like paying to watch Long Aotian's AI novels, which lacks the motivation to spend money. It feels like every time I watch the clips about Xiangling, the pictures are in color, and when I write about Mingyue, they are in black and white.

I feel that the author is of a very high level, and the character creation and daily writing are great, but the main plot, climax, and excitement are a bit lacking, so it seems watery. The newspaper seller said in a single chapter about Dafeng the Watcher that he used to be in this state when writing books. It was all due to his spirituality. Later, he worked hard to practice routines and cool writing skills, and then he became the Dafeng Watcher. Is it a male video? It's about being a saint in front of others, changing the world, and having fun. The more advanced and natural the fun is, the better the results will be 😜 Come on 😡

This is a refreshing novel. Little monsters and women are just a side dish to go with the meal. They are indeed refreshing, but they are not a staple food. The author must not make the mistake of prioritizing! Moreover, the following writing is a bit confusing, with no plot foreshadowing, and the plot of the copy is also the same nonsensical and surprising flow, just like daily writing, this is not a good sign! Moreover, too much is really boring!

To be honest, Xiang Ling has too many scenes, and Xiang Ling will interrupt at every turn. There are so many descriptions for this weasel because the author only limited the number of words. Whenever I saw a description of a weasel, I jumped straight into it. It was too watery, and the descriptions were too tiring. I ordered more than half and left.

I subscribed to chapter 153 in one go. It is very benevolent and has good writing and settings, but it is too watery. It always resorts to various debates and does not promote the plot. It is no problem to cut off 1/3 of chapter 153, and it slipped away.

No matter how good the writing is in the front, it will be too shabby in the back, as if someone else has written it.

It's on the shelves and there are achievements. Wenqing is suffering from a disease.

The setting of Tianjitu really ruined this book. This world is about whose Tianji Diagram is more powerful and whose inner strength can release more Tianji Diagrams. This is more boring than playing games.

I have ordered more than 100 chapters of both this and the previous book but have not read them yet. That's what his books are like, full of risqué words and flawed plots. If you read too much dirty talk, you will get tired of it. The characterization is really awesome. Author, please spice up the plot, those characters are such a waste. I still remember the name of the heroine in the Medicine Hall from the last book. The depiction of the weasel in this book is also very pleasant and cute. The plot is getting started. You can't just talk nonsense. I really want to see the characters you write and develop the plot.

First of all, I have been following it since the last book. Like this article, the previous book is also the best in the early foundation building period. The author's strengths lie in daily life and character description. Sometimes a character can be established in just a few sentences, so you can try to work on this aspect that you are good at. In addition, as far as voting on various community forums is concerned, readers who prefer harems are still a silent majority, so the author does not need to pay attention to the comments that often criticize the appearance of female characters in the book. I hope to continue to write more interesting and soulful heroines~

On average, one chapter in three chapters is "very reasonable", and one in five chapters is "I don't know what to say" Everyone describes it like this, it really makes me fall into the uncanny valley effect.

I was reading the novel "Liao Zhai Xiu Xian" last night, and suddenly I thought of Xiang Ling. I was rummaging through the bookshelves today, and it took me a long time to find it, but I didn't expect that the author had cut it.

It's a pity that the protagonist is finished in the last three chapters. The opening chapter is really well written.

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Although the process seems very torturous, I haven't seen enough of the ending. Write more about the harem)

The author is very creative and both books have new ideas.