The Female Protagonists in the Story Are Material for Traits

Senior sister, you should focus on writing variety comics and western fantasy. Although you can't recreate the grandeur of a gentleman, it's much easier at least.

Gouzi was strengthened to the second level in just a few days, so why did the protagonist upgrade so slowly? In addition to the destiny entries and genius judge, I feel that the protagonist can also add some useful entries...

Uemoto-senpai is not from that field. My fantasy writing style is average, so I'd rather write Western fantasy.

The author must be a new author. There are a lot of logical loopholes in your novel. I won't ask why the protagonist can withstand the attacks of extraordinary beings. The assassin is from the three realms and the second-level ancient elf can block him. I won't say anything more, but can you please change it? I'm really having a hard time.

After reading it, I felt that the character of Dorothy was poorly portrayed. Then I don't know why I fell in love with the pig's feet and wanted to keep them. In the first few chapters, the city guard was massacred, and then the atoning and whitewashing in the next few chapters was too blunt.

I feel like sitting on it will force me to descend 99 floors.

The protagonist is not a scornful person, I feel like he lacks the flavor of a senior

Brothers, brothers, let me ask you a question: why do you call him senior?

My senior sister may not be very good at it. In the past few years, there have been no long novels, only short stories with less than a million words. But the little ones are also very cute, after all, they are all useful stuff

Unattractive, not very good at characterization, and not very innovative.