Grinding My Way to Demon King from a Succubus Lair

I have a hunch that at this pace, the book may be abandoned after twenty chapters. The opening rhythm was very good. The protagonist was born in a succubus farm. The succubus used happiness to dominate human livestock. Under the influence of the succubus, the humans among them became walking zombies full of desires for the happiness provided by the succubus. The main plot of the opening is basically to ensure one's own survival while growing up to have enough strength to escape from the succubus' lair, and to ensure that the heart is not dominated by the happiness brought by the succubus The atmosphere at the beginning is full, and the person who has been squeezed out of his life for a short time is struggling desperately to show that he can still hold on, just to get more happiness. A child who is as old as the protagonist and often cries. When the succubus teaches him a lesson, he immediately stops crying and begins to indulge in the succubus's teachings. This means that the succubus can exert influence on humans from a very young age and subtly turn humans into milk-making machines. The fanatical human believers in the outside world regard the humans in the succubus farm as accomplices and kill them as demons. Until the protagonist's talent is revealed, the development of the plot deviates from the theme, at least it has nothing to do with the beginning. The protagonist no longer has to worry about the threat from the succubus, because the succubus with the highest status around him sees his talent as a treasure and plans to train him from childhood until he becomes a powerful shadow mage for his own use. The protagonist no longer has to worry about threats from humans, because he has the Paladin profession, and it is almost impossible for a Paladin to become an accomplice of the devil. The protagonist's strength has grown so fast that the low-level succubus has not brought enough oppression and has turned into a miscellaneous soldier. The protagonist can deal with it casually. In the plot, those low-level milkers hardly pose a threat to the protagonist. Why not seduce the protagonist, let him be dominated by happiness from the beginning, reduce the possibility of the protagonist's rebellion in the future, and let the protagonist follow the succubus wholeheartedly? The explanation given by the plot is that the succubus is too young to make him addicted to the succubus. To put it simply, the protagonist is not even one year old and does not have that kind of worldly desire. However, after the other crying babies in the beginning were taught a lesson, it had an effect and made him addicted and no longer cry. How to explain it? The protagonist is too precious, does it need to be carefully crafted? Only in this way can we barely explain the past. Then he turned around and recognized a witch as his master. Then the witch released magic to make the protagonist grow up. The body grew, but the hormones in the body did not change. It was unreasonable that the succubus still could not exert its influence on the protagonist. The plot arrangement was too deliberate and it was very uncomfortable. In the latest plot, the protagonist directly went to play unlimited streaming, went to the nightmare world to do tasks, and was assigned a person who was euphemistically called a guide. In fact, the role in the plot so far is just as a system. This system can also understand jokes like edible Paimon. The feeling of dissonance is overwhelming. So if the plot continues like this, it will become an unlimited stream. Then why don't I watch other unlimited streams? What kind of readers did your book attract at the beginning? The vast majority of the audience who came to read this book came for the succubus. After all, the title of your book contains this element, and it is a very important element. But the problem is that now the element of the succubus farm has become dispensable in the plot, which means that the original audience of this book has been abandoned. After all, there will not be readers who specifically want to read Infinite Flow, so read a book with this kind of title and introduction. Author, you have to figure out your audience. Most people who read this book are here for the succubus. If the nightmare world in your outline occupies a very important position, it is recommended to change the title of the book or change the introduction quickly, otherwise it will not attract unlimited readers. In the future, the succubus will only become a partner or a nurturing person. The protagonist has always had no worldly desires. This setting will not last long. If the succubus does not want to use happiness to dominate humans for a long time in the book, this is a characteristic of the succubus. If the product is not right, readers who want to see Succubus will leave. In fact, there are still many things I want to complain about, such as why the protagonist is focused on improving the Holy Light talent to restrain the succubus when he knows that his talent can be detected. It would be okay if he could not be detected by the succubus, but the problem is, the protagonist is still a fish at that time, and his life and death depend on other people's thoughts. It is very uncomfortable to try to increase his own threat level like this. It means that the author knows that doing so will not have any adverse effects on the protagonist in the future, because he has arranged it and the readers do not know. This information gap is very frustrating. That's it!

Why doesn't the new Demon King Leon conceal that he was a Paladin? My ancestors and Leon once worked on a dairy farm. At that time, Leon was secretly selling gouzi. Otherwise, how do you think he grew up so fast? When the paladin took him away, it was he who survived by selling gouzi. Otherwise, all the paladins would have been killed. Without Leon, there would be nothing. Later, Leon would sell gouzi all the way to the big market.

I didn't expect it to be a baby growth article, not the stilted article I imagined, and I was very disappointed 😅

Gouzi literature is really harmful to people

Why doesn't the new Demon King Leon de Anjou conceal his history as a Paladin in his early years? Of course because the real situation is darker and crueler than historical records. In his early years, he worked in a succubus breeding farm. Really, my boss was an out-and-out succubus queen, more powerful than the devil king. First, I forgot about it later

The common problems with infant abortion are the slow pacing and the fact that the main character is only one or two months old and is covered in muscles, which makes it feel a bit disgusting.

It smells like a cat, what kind of extraterrestrial demon is this?

I've finished updating them all, and I feel pretty good about them. They have advantages and disadvantages. Advantages, the author is currently writing about baby flow and Succubus Seese. The writing is pretty good and the creativity is good. I was attracted to Succubus Seese at the beginning, and I have been reading it until now. There are also many shortcomings. 1. There are quite a lot of sick sentences, which are uncomfortable to watch. 2. I don't know why the sentences are broken. Sometimes it's okay to read, but sometimes it's uncomfortable to read. 3 The pace is too slow. Is it a baby miscarriage? That's it. It takes a lot of content to describe the growth of the protagonist, so the pace is naturally slow. But we were attracted in because of Sesese. Many people want to see Sesese. Of course, baby flow is also good, as long as the rhythm is balanced. But the author obviously doesn't have a good grasp of the rhythm at the moment. He writes too much about babies. Chapter 105 is only written when he is three years old. When will he be able to write about adulthood and when will he be able to write about it? The two main attractions of this book are contradictory. I can only say that those who like watching babies have abortions are fine, but those who are attracted to it, such as me, will gradually lose interest. Currently, the reason why this book is going up and down is because of these reasons. The main reason is that the rhythm is not grasped well. The baby flow and the succubus flow are contradictory to each other by the author, and the writing style is not very good. These two are the main reasons for the loss of readers. It can only be said that when writing about the growth of babies, one must grasp the rhythm well. If the rhythm is not grasped well, readers will be lost seriously. For example, I have few friends, but the book Qingmei Girlfriend has many. This book was average in the early stages, and got better and better in the later stages. However, I couldn't stand it as I continued to follow it. In the final analysis, the pace was too slow. It took 1.05 Million words to write until the protagonist was in his first year of high school, and the protagonist had only kissed several female protagonists for the first time. I get very tired from chasing after it and can no longer watch it. That pace is too slow. Good guy, this one is about the same as that one. 240,000 Words at the age of three. At the age of fifteen, at this pace, you will not be able to write 1 million words. If you keep chasing after the reader, you will become tired and lose interest in chasing. Who is interested in watching a little brat like you write millions of words to practice cultivation and beat him to death? I'm not interested in seeing it even though I'm practicing it. So the author still has to grasp the rhythm well. He has started high and gone low. If he doesn't grasp it well, he will wait for the street. If he can't write well later, he can only go high, low, low, low, low, low.

Sorry it can't be loaded 😏 This succubus is too big to cover. I'll find a smaller one for you later. It's not a succubus but it belongs to the queen.

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