Kaiyuan Love Poems and Sword List 5Th Anniversary

From the B station up zero number 0 video, the author's book is really interesting. It's a pity that I didn't know it back then. Now I can only see the masterpiece from pirated resources, which makes me feel quite ashamed. I can only praise it and leave some words behind after reading the old and new editions. As the author said, this book is a revised version based on the 19-year-old work "Kaiyuan Love Poems and Sword List". In my opinion, compared to the old work, the new work has more deletions and less additions. Perhaps there is a situation of "not knowing the true face of Mount Lu, just because I am in this mountain" - the author has deleted some content, but retained some parts. Compared with the old work, there will sometimes be incoherent problems in the text. For example, in the first major plot at the beginning of the chapter, Xiao Chen Qianqiu meets the saint with full emotion. Compared with the old work, the third poem has been rewritten (ok, what was originally written); Xiao Hui's first poem has been added (ok, although it is not important, but the author worked hard); the plot of Xiao Chen's first flirtation with a girl has been deleted (I still like the original one); the test has been adjusted Commentary, the sequence of the poem presentation and the plot of the Little Princess have been deleted. (I have no objection to the adjustment of the order, but the introduction to King Qi and the Poetry List of King Qi has been deleted a lot from the original text of the old work. The new work only leaves one sentence without beginning or end: "The list of King Qi's Poems has not been interrupted, how to talk about reopening", which is not as detailed as the old work); By the way, the old work seems to have two editions? An earlier edition presented the poem "The beautiful face in the Luan Mirror is frightened and darkened." The whole poem angered the emperor. The second edition presents poems and water tunes, leaving only one sentence in the article that the emperor thought about himself, "Zhu Yan changed". The new work only retains the poetry and water tone, without the lyrics of the little princess. In comparison, I prefer the second version of the water-melody plot, because the first version is too serious, and the third version is too vulgar - it is childish and peeing. However, in the second version of the song "Gushen Song", he believed that Shui Tiao was not Xiao Chen's work and there was no need to retain it. In addition, the new work of Emperor Rang and the Qi Wang Song and Dance Troupe won the first place in the music festival. It complemented the second version of Qi Wang's background information. The poem battle link was rewritten (the plot of the new work has more charm) and deleted. The emperor's joke of "appointing prime ministers" retained the ambition of Zibi Ganluo and the Twelve Prime Ministers (what would he do if he deleted it? It would be better to leave it in). In addition, the second edition continued to say that 740 AD was the original plan to "appoint prime minister in the second year", which is no problem. The new work writes that 740 is the year away from Xiao Chen's "plan to become prime minister" There are still six years left "I don't know where this time came from, and I really didn't understand this sentence - could it be said that it is the later article "The saint laughed after drinking and said that he will be the prime minister in ten years"? But doesn't it conflict with the previous article about Zibi Ganluo's twelve positions? Wait, I read the second edition and the new work again. This is confusing, the title of the second edition is "Become the prime minister in ten years", the content If you pass the imperial examination in ten years, "I will wait until Prime Minister Zhang Li is old to use you", it does not mean that you will be the prime minister in ten years. As for the new work, it is even more wrong. The new work of the saint only said "you will be a great minister in ten years" and did not mention being a prime minister. Although both the second version and the new work mentioned that the emperor will be prime minister for ten years after drinking, it can only be said that both versions did not write it correctly). Added the plot "The First World's No. 1 Poetry Conference was a complete success" (it ranked Xiao Chen at the eleventh position in the world's poetry list, echoing the introduction. I don't know what the original introduction was like, but the second version of the plot did not have this part. In the second version, Xiao Chen came back at the end of the Hangzhou chapter and returned to the tenth place in the poetry list). By the way, if you add this plot, you cannot use the plot of the old work "Xiao Chen only went to see Prime Minister Zhang before his death" - although the author has not updated it to this point, and I don't know when he will write it again. Added a new statement about the emperor asking Xiao Chen to stay in the south for a while, and updated three rumors (the following article deleted the memories of Night Thoughts on the Boat, and the full text of the new work only stated that the reason for not returning to the capital was drunken beating of Li Balang - because he had offended Li Xiang, and Li Xiang figured it out and sent a killer to chase him, which is an exaggeration) The reason for going. There are rumors in the article, so maybe not. However, the new work states that "Xiao Chen went to Fangling for several months and went into hiding", and in the old work, did he really intend to change the assassination? Nineteen people died during the chase, which will be explained later. What's the meaning of the revised number of people in the new work? What's more, the original text of the new work "Bu Er woke up Xiao Chen, and then blood splashed on Xiao Chen's face, and Xiao Chen ran away." Although it didn't say that Bu Er was dead, he later told Yangzhou Station that Bu Haifeng was there. It was Divination Er back then, which is not quite right. Divination Er was also seen in Yangzhou in the old work, but he did not appear at the scene of the assassination.); The description of Xiao Chen and the Chen family's holy support was deleted (although there is only a short paragraph, but after deletion, it left a headless "The Chen family, which was once famous, gradually disappeared", which is not as good as the old work). In the Jinling chapter, the story of Xiao Chen publishing a book and running a tabloid was deleted, as well as the fact that Xiao Chen published a collection of poems for Confucius Meng (it was a bit of a drama to leave the title of the uc file to the local tabloid. The old work mentioned that Xiao Chen published a collection of poems for Confucius, but the new work does not mention it here. Later, Shao Sheng used Shao Sheng to blame Xiao Chen, which made Xiao Chen impersonal and incompetent. Clever, bad); deleted the plot of Sheung Shui Pavilion, and deleted the interrogation part in the later part of the story (it is a pity to delete the plot of Shui Pavilion, the new work is not as stylish as the old work on the third floor when you meet each other as soon as you enter the building. However, although the plot of writing three poems in a row in the old work echoes that of Shao Sheng being reported for writing anti-poems and being imprisoned and being interrogated, it makes Shao Sheng look hateful and difficult to clean up. In the new work, the county magistrate framed Lao Wang in order to scare Xiao Chen, and Xiao Chen solved it in two or three sentences. The plot was okay, and he didn't do Shaosheng's business); a new singing plot of the fifth stage of Li Ye's boat competition was added (a bit awkward); the eighth stage of the examination and copying process was modified (if the change is good, Shao Sheng should take the blame first. The old work made Zhaoyang talk hard) This is not the way to destroy the character and suppress the desire first); modified the poem Yi Si'er sings at the end of the Guan Dynasty (the new work is "Su Jian Dejiang" and the old work arranged this poem to appear later, but Xiao Chen's reaction to this is similar, so it can be regarded as a cut); deleted some plots before and after the awarding (it is still a pity, except for "We I personally feel that the lyrics of "are the champions" are too dramatic and would be better if they were deleted, but the rest of the plot is quite enjoyable). The Yangzhou chapter has not yet been written by the author in the new work. My suggestion is not to write the part about Gong Ziye. It is too vulgar. Even if there is an explanation later, it is also far-fetched. After all, the first impression is really important. Although Xiao Chen has entered the room now, it is better to make the mistake and let him and Xiao Chen recite poems directly to let everyone misunderstand. Xiao Chen will explain the misunderstanding and get over the plot. In the Hangzhou chapter, the plot of Zhao Xianglu and Shaosheng's appearance was deleted (which is quite a pity); the plot of Shaosheng's whitewashing was deleted (whatever, I don't like Shaosheng in both versions, so just get out of here). Guilin chapter, the new work has not been written yet, I will comment on the content of the old work separately. The first chapter shocked me. I thought it was a problem with pirated resources, but fortunately it wasn't. When I saw the five tigers of the Mo family appearing later, I recognized Mo Feng from Warcraft Liu Feng at a glance. I remembered that this book was the fourth online book I had read, and I felt closer to the author. The plot of the antiphonal song is very happy, some lyrics are a little abrupt, and some lyrics are very interesting to use. However, the Guilin chapter has three flaws. First, Xiao Chen's identity is discovered by passers-by again and again, and the plot is clichéd and repetitive. The second is that we agreed to go there to investigate the mysterious incident of the stone tablet and the Buddhist scriptures. However, due to various reasons, we could not continue the investigation, and we obtained the Buddhist scriptures before leaving. Although it was associated with "Southwestern Italy", it inevitably felt like an anticlimax. Third, I just criticized Xiao Chen in the Hangzhou chapter. In the next month and a half, you go to Guilin to tour the mountains and water and fight monsters to upgrade. It's too fragmented. The content of the old work ends here, please wait for the follow-up "Youyan Detective Chapter". I would like to mention some other flaws here by the way, and maybe they can be revised together: in the old work, Xiao Chen got a strange book at the age of 7, and in the new work, Xiao Chen read all the strange books at the age of 7. If you don't plan to write this book, you can just read a lot of books at the age of 7, without mentioning the strange books. This is obviously inconsistent with the setting of "pretending to be a child with an adult's thinking", not to mention that there are more than 70 ancient poems in the later text, and it is recommended to modify it; both the new and old works have repeatedly used the "break-off" plot in the text, which is inconsistent with the subsequent attitude of the Liu family, so it is recommended to delete it; both the old and new works say that Xiao Chen is in the General Xu Temple

The author's writing is really interesting. I'll go

Great, I haven't watched it for a few days and it's really embarrassing. It does have the characteristics of someone who spends three days fishing and two days drying out the net. I just hope that more people will read this book. After all, I think it is very interesting. I am also curious about which of the eight literary styles the author is from. Ps: Apart from being uncomfortable being suppressed by "Shao Sheng" as a disciple of Meng Haoran, I don't have any objections to the long response arc of folk songs and love songs. ( ╹▽╹ )