Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Building a Cave

Readers are very greedy. In the first few pictures, the protagonist performs various actions, except for showing off, and feels like he is losing money. For example, if you don't have enough money to repair the formation, it's usually 20 yuan, but the protagonist only needs 10 yuan, and finally receives 3 yuan. It's true that there is a task at the bottom. The first time, I recognized it. Then, the second time, Senior Sister Zhou came to the house without pay. In the end, she found out that the repair could not be done, but she promised to go to some party. In order to protect myself, improve my strength in the short term, and avoid being in danger outside the sect, the reason for going is that it is easy to hide from open guns, but difficult to guard against hidden arrows. . . But the enemies in the sect can't kill the protagonist. No matter what he does, just don't go out. Just a few people who practice Qi at the fourth and fifth levels can surpass them very quickly, no matter what they do. Besides, the original person is useless and has no origin. Who wants to harm him when he has nothing to do? This reason feels unpleasant. The third time, the protagonist accepted the acceptance task, the cave of Yunxia's beautiful master uncle, the protagonist directly said that the acceptance failed. Although the master uncle did not give additional revenge, this can be regarded as the protagonist's behavior. Then the protagonist started to bet with other cave builders. He couldn't tell where he failed. The protagonist kowtowed to admit his mistake and then went to tell his uncle that he was wrong. He was right. Well, the protagonist gained the joy of pretending to be cool, and the others got information about what was wrong. . . . I just watched a few of them. Generally speaking, the protagonist has nothing to do and likes to find things to do and dangers for himself. If you have this time, it's better to just do the task. ps: The author most likely won't do it either. . .

There are problems with the layout of the chapter First, the point of the Ash-Destroying Immortal was not grasped to write Second, the suspense was not grasped to set up The Ash-Destroying Immortal can divergent thinking, for example, the construction of the spiritual field requires formations, and the secret realm needs formations to crack, it is either a construction site or the Ash-Destroying Immortal The suspense setting is a bit stiff, but it is okay, but if the suspense setting can be placed in the opening few pictures, it will definitely not be what it is now. In the future, when downloading dungeons, don't write about killing and killing, but focus on the Ash-killing Immortal. After all, there are a lot of fights in the dungeon, so why would people read what you wrote instead of what the master wrote? And to kill people, you don't have to kill the person. If you kill the Gray Immortal, wouldn't it be better to directly attack his cave? This is the world of Xianxia. You don't even need the cave to collapse. As long as the spiritual energy is exhausted or the spiritual energy is reversed while he is practicing, he can kill people. In short, you have to play the role of Ash-Breaking Fairy to write

I don't know what it's about, but out of nowhere someone wants to kill the protagonist, a person with extremely poor talent and no sense.

Daily poisoning, well-deserved reputation. Anything that's normal won't make the list.

If her cultivation is higher than that of the cheap master, you might as well cut her off if you don't want her to experience the same life-and-death threat! Poison! Licking a dog will lead to a bad death

ps: That's it for dusting!

The flashbacks are poorly played. If you don't have enough writing power, you can't play.

Don't write about things that have nothing to do with dusting. What everyone is watching is the protagonist's fancy dusting. If you write so many irrelevant plots, will it help the protagonist's dusting? It's best if your plot revolves around beating ashes, otherwise how will it be different from other immortality novels?

Is the author majoring in architectural decoration?

That scene where the law enforcement agency directly arrested the protagonist was handled outrageously and was very childish.

What is written is nothing but nonsense. To say this book is rubbish is to insult the word rubbish.