Video Popularizes Ancient People and Changes the Course of History

Ming Dynasty monuments have been excavated in Europe. I can't stand those who boast about the great voyages of the West.

In order not to become like a chronicle novel that only reads videos without actual content, I interspersed a lot of trivial things in each video, but it felt like too much force, which made me feel watery and messy at times. After a long time, I even forgot what the video was about at the beginning.

If the curtain is really raised, it cannot be imperialism unless the people are all mentally retarded

What are you talking about comparing Zhao Da with Ming Zu? The difficulty of the opening, or the great achievements. The first one is bullying orphans and widows, one bowl at a time. Let's talk about achievements, Mingzu rebuilt China alone, how can you compare it with Zhao Dada? No matter how much he boasts about it, he rebuilt China, bridged the north and the south, recovered Youyun, recovered the Northeast, and recovered Yunnan. These are all the disasters left by you, Zhao Da. How can you, Zhao Dahe De, compare with Mingzu?

If you have high standards, you will look good; if you have low standards, you will be exposed.

The first video is a bit watery, but it gets better from the second one. The third video has a lot of ancient plots and the pace is too slow But the writing is okay, so keep it for now.

First, everyone knows history. Even if you write about it, it won't be interesting. What's more, most authors, including you, write like this. Second, there are a thousand Hams among a thousand people, and there will also be a thousand Emperors of Qin, Han, Wu, Tang, and Song. It's time to rush Third, you haven't figured out what's so exciting about this kind of writing, so you just mess around with the number of words. No matter how many words you write, it'll be a loss. The first cool point is the comparison between ancient and modern times, the second cool point is the comparison between China and foreign countries, the third cool point is changes and reforms, and the fourth cool point is modern gains. Take a look at what you wrote, and what do you want us to see?

It's too watery, and it's very wordy.

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There is something wrong with this book. It always focuses on ancient times. Do you think the Internet talks more about ancient times or modern times? Especially if there is no topic, look for a topic.

It's bland and tasteless. It's all anecdote.

Low standard. It's written inexplicably

No matter how good the achievements of Zhao Da are, they cannot hide that the Song Dynasty was just a separatist regime, so it cannot be compared with the standards of a unified empire.

It's so confusing. It feels like there's no main thread at all. Everyone is talking about their own things. It's very difficult to understand.

There is a hammer in one place and a stick in the other, and there is no logic at all. Then the behavior of various characters is chaotic, and the author is seriously self-indulgent, and he is still a clean slate.

I don't even dare to write couplets, I'm more timid than my neighbor