Reborn, and I Even Got a Girlfriend?!

I voted for it with two monthly tickets, and it's actually quite good. But like I said, please don't add too many female leads! 🙂

The author used current income and price levels in 2008 terms, which felt a bit odd while reading, so I left.

A slice-of-life story with a touch of career-related content is acceptable, but this is ridiculously over-the-top. They write about a chance encounter with a stray cat, and then they're already planning to write about all sorts of messy things about the cat and why it was abandoned? They just keep writing about petting cats all the time. I read a book like that last time; I don't understand why anyone would write about pets like this. It's clearly just filler.

The only thing keeping me reading was the interaction with the female lead, which was originally quite well-written, but now it's becoming more and more like artificially sweetened saccharine. Other content feels like it's jumping on the bandwagon, and the business aspect is completely unplanned.

Finished reading it, amazing! The author seems quite knowledgeable about the ins and outs of entrepreneurship, handling the details very well. Looks like they lost money and came back to writing novels 😂. While the romance plot, with its overly fantastical elements like love at first sight, is beautifully written, the details of their interactions are very comfortable to read. Keep updating, I'll send you my votes!

I'm leaving, I'm leaving. Lately, I've found Zhang really unappetizing, but I can't bring myself to throw him away.

It's been four months since my last break, time to release a new book!

To be honest, the free chapters of this book were really well-written, but I started to experience some reader fatigue around the middle. It lacked ups and downs and became less engaging. I personally think it got padded out, which might be the author's usual approach. The beginning was so vivid and engaging; I was really looking forward to finishing it. I suggest the author switch careers to screenwriting and writing jokes! It's a shame about this book.

There's no melodramatic pretentiousness or trivial family drama, which is commendable. However, the names of several companies... The band, hehe, and the dark-skinned guy are really not good; that's the only flaw.

That's good. I only have one suggestion: reduce or eliminate those overly extravagant, tyrannical plot points. If you need plot conflict or to introduce new characters, a smooth transition is fine. There's no need for a tyrannical plot point, although it happens quite often in reality. For now, I'll stick with your book's theme: rebirth + pure romance + entrepreneurship.