Give a Girlfriend as a Gift After Rebirth? !

I voted for two monthly tickets. Come on, it's quite good. As I said before, don't have too many female protagonists 🙂

The author puts the current income and prices into 2008. It always feels a little weird when I read it.

At first, I could accept it with some career in daily writing, but in the end, I couldn't act anymore. The story is so exaggerated. I wrote about an encounter with a stray cat. Are you planning to write about the cat's messy things and why it was abandoned? I usually just play with the cat when I have nothing to do. Last time I read a book, it was so popular. I don't understand why such a pet is written. It's so obvious.

The only thing that kept me watching was the interaction with the heroine. This kind of character charm was originally written quite well, but now it has become more and more industrial saccharine. Other content has a sense of popularity, and the commercial part has no plan at all. In 2008, in the era of feature phones, even Android had not yet entered the country. I even remember that I was still using a push-button mobile phone at that time, and launched group buying, video, and AI. The project... Is also written in the article. Neither mobile networks nor mobile phones support it, so it is just a hard work... I understand that group buying can be achieved barely if there is no starting capital, but after finishing the group buying and making money, shouldn't we consider the actual background of the times? It's very inconsistent, you know? Is it true that other business articles started out as live video broadcasts and you are not willing to change the template? If you don't look at others, they are all 12 to 14 years old. When are you now? As for AI, tell me the significance of the forced launch of AI in 2000 and so many descriptions? Do you have to write if you want to be popular now? It's totally illogical.

I've finished reading Xiancao. The author is very familiar with all aspects of entrepreneurship and handles the details very well. It seems that he came back to write a novel after losing money. Although the love line is too sci-fi, the details of getting along are very comfortable. Come on and update me. I will give you the ticket.

Gone, gone, Zhang Zhen's food has been tasteless recently, it's a pity to abandon it

To be honest, the free chapters of this book are really good. However, in the middle period, it became a bit tired of aesthetics, lacked ups and downs, and became unattractive. I think it was a bit watered down. Maybe this is also the author's technique. The early stage is too graphic and beautiful. I look forward to it being full. I suggest that the author switch to editing and writing jokes! What a pity this book

There is no pretentiousness, the parents are short-tempered, which is worthy of praise, but several companies have gained names. . . . The band, hehe, black leather, really not that good, this is the only drawback.

It's been four months since I took a break, so it's time to publish a new book, right?

Pretty good. I just have an opinion. Those scenes that are similar to Shenhao's pretentiousness can be reduced or eliminated. If there is a plot conflict or the introduction of new characters, I think it can be smooth and over-the-top. There is no need to arrange a pretentious scene. Although there are many in reality, I will give you the position of rebirth + pure love + entrepreneurship for the time being.

The overall situation is good, but the details are a bit taken for granted. First of all, starting a business is not that simple. In addition to the framework, management details are equally important. It cannot be easily completed by finding a senior graduate to help run the business. Besides, in terms of time span, it only took less than two months from the beginning of design to the A round, which is too unreasonable. Two months is not even enough time to adjust the framework. .

Why do you keep writing about other people's family affairs like dog bites dog?

This may be the last novel I read and finish. I need to work hard in advance when I turn 30!

The beginning was good, and the middle was also good. Unfortunately, the more I read, the less energetic it became, and it became a complete mess after it was released.

I finished reading it in one sitting and it was quite interesting. The heroine has personal charm. The text feels very rushed, with almost no detailed description. I don't know if it's intentional or not.

At this time, it is better to be a video sharing website than to be a picture and text sharing website like Xiaohongshu.

This book has great plot development and character traits. It has a single heroine. As long as the author doesn't write the sequel, you can keep reading it.

The writing is good, but the plot has no ups and downs and is dull.

Although I realize that the book may be almost finished, but not so soon, right? 😭 The book I have been chasing for so long is gone?

Good looking