Naruto: a Sparkling Fruit at the Beginning

To be honest, on the night of the genocide, Shimura and Sarutobi should annihilate the genocide together, so that the ninja world will be in chaos.

Can be developed into Ultraman, with immortality and finger-exploding stars, the ultimate man

A Kyouka Suigetsu makes the Hokage invincible, and a Shining Fruit makes even the Hokage invincible. The elemental Hokage can hurt you. It's useless to ask for anything else

Take a look and relax!

The setting is good, but the writing power is not enough, please write more

Eunuch stuff, a waste of starting coins

I would like to give the author two suggestions: either slow down the rewards and stop being so brainless Or slow down the plot and try to control the tempo, don't write fast, otherwise it will be a dead end for the shelves.

It's time to test the waters! Please read it! The follow-up reading data in the next week will determine the fate of the book. Whether it can advance to the second round depends on how much it is read. Next is the climax plot. The author has written it with all his strength. Please follow up and read it! The author is grateful! ! Thanks! !

Can we stop chatting and say the names of moves during the battle?

With a mass the size of a human body, and hitting the ninja world at the speed of light, the ninja world will be over in an instant, so the so-called light speed of the Shining Fruit is just bragging.

First of all, the author's writing is pretty good, and the setting of the traveling frog has been around for a few years. It's like fishing in the heavens, and it's quite attractive. Whether it collapses or not depends on the author's control. And I don't know if the author has written martial arts novels. The occasional martial arts-style grammar is a bit awkward for anime fan fiction, but it's okay and no problem. In the end, the author should be the type to look up information in order to write this novel, rather than write this novel because he likes the content, so he wrote some erroneous content that seems normal but violates the basic common sense of the original work. For example, in the first ten chapters, fans of the original book were discouraged from refining and learning chakra in order to prevent being controlled by illusions. After all, those who brought the backpack should be wearing it. Without the 130 trillion cell physique of the aboriginals, and the chakra seeds distributed by the Six Paths Sage, which can extract chakra, and with its own thunder attribute, the aboriginals can only refine chakra without attributes, and then test it with chakra test paper to know which attribute they prefer, so that they can practice the changes in properties to add attributes. Furthermore, illusions are effective against chakra. If you don't have chakra, you have to give yourself a weakness. . . After that, I read two or three chapters. I just couldn't stand the common sense errors in my mind, so I quit~

Did it hang up too quickly and I can't write anymore 😏

Please book friends, please don't keep books. If you want to keep books, can you help me to follow up on Mondays and Tuesdays? This is related to whether I can get recommendations! Thank you!

It looks pretty good so far, it just depends on whether the author can write better and better.

Another one who committed suicide after just a few chapters.