Twin Cities: I Am the Storyteller of the Gods

Let's post about Shen Nong, up to chapter 49 This book is surprisingly okay. At first I saw in the comments section that the previous plot was poisonous. I thought it was a novice novel that is full of poison. After thinking about it, there are not many good fans in Shuangcheng. It is easy for the author to write a book for the first time. It's poisonous. Many authors will gradually get better after they get used to writing. Plus the heroine Jinx, I'll take a look first After looking at it, I found that the accident is not bad. I can only say that there are some flaws in the previous chapters, such as the evaluation of Jinx, such as In terms of writing and description, there is nothing serious about poison. The protagonist enters the soul lotus and can be hooked by Thresh. It can only be said to be a setting, not a poison. On the contrary, I feel that this setting is quite unexpected. It controls the golden finger so that the combat power will not collapse too quickly, and it will not die inexplicably. Suppressing the protagonist's combat power makes readers unhappy. The author can use cheats to control the plot according to his wishes The highlight of this book is the character design and interaction. The author has a good grasp of the original character design, especially Jinx, who can write a stand-up character book very comfortably. The interactive scenes written about Jinx are very warm, and the regrets of the original work are very good. Come more, come more Finally, there is the issue of the heroine. According to the logical development of Jinx's character, in theory it is best to have a single heroine. If there are two heroines, it can only be written with a lot of effort later, and the harem character design will completely collapse. In fact, many authors write harems, and they are just vases when they are included. They cannot describe the characteristics of the female supporting characters at all. There is no need for a harem when there are already excellent characters, unless the author is very confident in the writing style. In addition, the biggest emotional driver of fan fiction is to make up for regrets. It is not meaningful to include all the women in the original work. Of course, it is still the same sentence. Fan authors really have the ability to set up everyone in the harem. That is very awesome and can be written. Otherwise, there is no need to be like a collection card.

Overall it looks pretty good now. First of all, the characters and emotions are very delicately portrayed, and there is not much difference from the original work. The original work I am referring to here is based on the animation of the Battle of Two Cities. Especially the portrayal of Jinx and Silko. To be honest, many novels about the Battle of Two Cities fall apart in the portrayal of these two people. It's not clear whether the author's portrayal is in line with the public's feelings, but it won my heart. The advancement of the plot is also very reasonable, there is no such thing as brainless invincibility or brainless reform. To be honest, I think that in terms of plot, we should finish the bottom part first and then advance to the upper city, because most of the plot turning points of the Battle of Two Cities are in the bottom city. The author did a good job in writing this. Another point is that if the current plot develops, the old cake will not die, and then there will be no subsequent story of Little Cake Joining the Army. How Noxus intervenes later depends on the author's writing skills. Since there is this soul lotus, if this book is to be longer, then the subsequent Ionia should not be able to escape.

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I feel like the plot is weak after the male protagonist is resurrected. The author is obviously not good at writing sugar-splitting plots. It's too cliche. It just keeps the male protagonist praising Jinx. There's nothing new and it's too repetitive.

Tsk, tsk, tsk, I'm planning to run away. The popularity of the Twin Cities has gone down, so I'm not going to write about it anymore!

It's a pity. I thought it was a harem, but it turned out to be a double heroine, so I didn't want to book it anymore.

Jinx means Jinx, stupid!

Love token - cat ear hat Active functions: ①Anti-virus fog ②Enhance night vision ③Pop-up cat ears Hidden attribute: This is our bond (dense fog)

I hope there won't be a single female protagonist. There are so many beauties waiting for you to save lol. Why would you give up the entire forest for a tree? Just Ahri and Zuan's 998 as described by the author earlier, and the policewoman asking her to do lace. Isn't this a waste of resources? So the author should consider it

It's not that giving the plug-in is the same as not giving it. Just give me some when you think of it, but don't give it if you don't. The protagonist was also forcibly written to death. If only that dog thief protagonist would work harder. It's not like it's a fart.

Jinx

If the author really wants to write about Noxus, you can look at several militaristic countries in history. In the early stage, he was able to do what Swain said, "Noxus makes you stand up", but in the later stage, he was able to stretch his hips even more than Noxus in the background now. And this kind of change only takes a few decades. The most familiar example in China is the period from Qin Shihuang's accession to Hu Hai. When we only talk about military merit, Bai Qi has only reached level 16 after fighting in battles for a lifetime. From Qin Shihuang's annihilation of a country and the title of a marquis, to Fan Kuai's lifetime of never having Xiang Yu charge more heads than Wanhuhou in his lifetime, the gold content of this military merit title has been declining. The ups and downs between Darkwill's rise to power and his removal by Swain were exactly the same as those from Qin Shihuang to Hu Hai. The old aristocrats fought for power, the emperor played with checks and balances, the military merit system collapsed, and the channels for advancement were blocked. It was exactly the same process. The "Noxus" Swain mentioned was what it was like when Xunzi entered the Qin Dynasty, and we see that the Noxus in the background story was already in the Qin Dynasty during the Hu Hai period.

It's either a harem or a single heroine, you can't have both. The relationship with Jinx is made so sweet and the result is two heroines. The more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes.

The persona has been established, and the harem will destroy the persona. Don't listen to those in the comment section who want to write about the harem, they want to harm you! ! No harem, no harem🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅

If you have any ideas, you can put them forward here and I will look at them one by one. It can be considered as adding inspiration to me~

This pussy should be both open, one chapter per two days, probably a eunuch.

I suggest not touching the timeline. All those who can travel through time without being able to figure it out are just a piece of shit. Just get a low-level rune and you can travel through time. So what about someone like the Dragon King who can create planets? As long as you touch time, there will be countless bugs. In my understanding, unless your energy far exceeds all the energy of the entire world, and you appear as an alien god from another world, it is possible to play with the time of this world. Otherwise, you are just a little Karami, how can you reverse the world.

Write more Jinx candy for me

Handsome, can you appear in this outfit?

One more chapter!

Book it all after it's finished, even if it's not finished, you can still accept it

The group also disbanded. I promised to write an ending, but I still can't finish it. The copy of the hero system is yours too, right? The writing method is exactly the same, and I don't write anymore until the ending.

17 Is nothing. Look at me

Is the author four years old? Why not update?

Small bet five cards

In the early stage, I even cried because of the death of the protagonist. It gets a little bland after that.

Not too much, please update soon

Eight monthly passes, this is not a plus