Cultivation of All Heavens: Starting from One Person

Longhu Mountain Zhang Jingqing invited the protagonist to join Longhu Mountain, but the protagonist refused to go, and ended up going to the Trinity Gate to complete the entrance trial. Was it difficult? The protagonist Goldfinger needs to join a sect, and it is not the designated Trinity Sect. Longhushan has been the number one sect until modern times. The Trinity Sect was disbanded within a few years. It will be thankless for you to join.

The idea is quite good and the subject matter is interesting, but instead of becoming a disciple of the headmaster of Longhu Mountain, you go to the Trinity Gate to participate in some kind of trial. Seeing this, I have no desire anymore.

If you don't go when the headmaster of Longhu Mountain invites you, why don't you go to Trinity Gate to participate in some kind of trial? Author, are you okay?

Chapter 22 is really poisonous. Li Muxuan takes the initiative to destroy the protagonist, and Zuo Ruotong comes up to punish the protagonist? I couldn't bear it anymore in Chapter 22. From the beginning, I started to bring in private goods. There is no logic. I don't know if it was generated by AI or I haven't read the original work at all.

It feels like the protagonist was specially recruited by Peking University, and then resolutely chose to go to Kassel for the unified examination Why Kassel? Because although in the Dragon Clan it is about slaying dragons, in reality it is a junior college

Can't understand something? The introduction says that the protagonist is weak in talent, and the article also says that the protagonist is valued by the Heavenly Master Zhang Jingqing and wants to be accepted as a disciple. Isn't this a conflict?

I don't believe that Chapter 22 didn't poison people. . .

Isn't Yuan Jingui so awesome? He actually dared to talk to Zuo Ruotong like this. The rest of Quanxing couldn't even run away after seeing him. Since he was not afraid at all, he still dared to make sarcastic remarks to the side. It's so nonsense.

It feels like conflict for the sake of conflict, a bit explosive

1. The description of the characters is a bit bad, especially the description of Zuo Ruotong, which is extremely torn, not like the Daying Immortal in Mi Er's novel at all 2. It really can't be written out of the routine. You can just follow the routine and join the Sanyi Sect to practice. Even the poisonous point of Li Bulan is exactly the same as the routine. Otherwise, it will be useless and turn against the protagonist. Become an enemy, or ignore it and still turn against each other 3. Li Buran provoked the protagonist like a maniac, and the protagonist fought back in self-defense, but ended up being beaten up by the three judges. The key is that the reason you criticize is exactly the same as the way the protagonist did it Just read Chapter 22, he died of poison, goodbye

It feels like this kind of time-travel novel without knowing the plot. Usually they copy the original work

Okay, it depends on what the author thinks. How to fill the pit of becoming an immortal under one person?

It was originally a good subject matter, but it was written about people who are not humans, ghosts or not. The messy character settings before Chapter 20 are understandable. But those after chapter 20, such as chapters 21, 22, and 23, are completely different from the character settings. Things that could have been explained clearly turned out to be unexplained. Isn't there any subjective initiative at all? The protagonist doesn't even know the plot, but you, the author, follow the plot. I know that subjective initiative can be difficult for many authors. But what do we readers want to see? What do you want? Do you need to figure out what readers want? You find it difficult to write without following the plot. But when you write the kind of thing that you can open your mouth to explain or not? Can it solve the problem or not? You should take responsibility for the mistakes made by others. I think it's quite difficult for you to write against your will. Okay, that's it. Just take a look. I don't care whether I take it seriously or not.

Chapters 20 to 23 have a serious sense of separation, and the word "prehistoric" suddenly appears at the end. Isn't the Journey to the West in this book a black myth, and is it still related to prehistoric times?

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Everyone, I can't stand it anymore. Farewell.

Overall, it's good, but the conflicts in the academy are relatively fragmented.

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