Loving Threesome

Let's talk about the reading progress first. I have finished reading all 30 chapters. Regarding the female protagonists, this book currently has two female protagonists. There is no possibility of other female protagonists competing for the time being. Female 1 is gentle, kind, silly and sweet. She is a good art student except for her bad studies. Her family background is ordinary. This is the Bai Yueguang of many people. Female 2 She is aloof and beautiful, with a blank slate and zero emotional intelligence. She is a pure scholar and a rational god of learning. Others are too stupid. Only the protagonist can be recognized as smart and has a profound background Currently it is a youth romance novel with a slightly slower pace. After the college entrance examination, she switched to commercial novels Finally, I would like to complain about the alleged plagiarism of the title of the book (bushi)

No, bro, what is your attitude? I complained about those people who insist on being singled out as female protagonists, but you gave me a permanent ban, and now you still want to be transferred to single female protagonists?

The quality of the book does not match its popularity. Personally, I like the author's writing style and plot arrangement, but I feel that the last two or three chapters are a bit off-kilter, and the plot connection is not as good as before. I am looking forward to the freshman life of the three protagonists, which should be the climax of the whole book.

1. First of all, I acknowledge and praise the author's attitude. I checked it on the starting point data chart. The original title of the book is "Who is still a passerby after being reborn". The first subscription is only 76, and the collection ratio is 26.4; It may have increased a bit now, but the average guess is that it is only 2 or 300 subscriptions at most. This result is even without eunuchs, [True Power for Love]; The current title of the book is "The Love of Three People". I subjectively think that the author also likes this book very much. Yes, because I have also written novels. When I write the story I really want to write, I don't care about the results, and I sincerely hope that the author will not let the eunuch live up to the book 2. Discuss the plot ① Double heroines are actually difficult to write, which limits the performance at the beginning. In fact, double queens and then add some harem stories of other supporting female characters, such as Qi Xinyue, Shen Ruobing, and even the extreme Ms. Jiang, it may be easier and more attractive. Be more attractive; Double heroines only have two heroines. Once the creation is completed, there is no way to continue to create attractive characters to attract people, and then the attractiveness of the article will naturally decrease; Since there are already dual heroines, readers will not mind a few more. The only number of heroines that readers care about is no heroine, single heroine and multiple heroines. Double heroines are actually a false proposition; But now it is 690,000 words, measured in millions If the words are finished, it will be more than 300,000 words, and the plot of the two heroines is almost the same ② The narrative is very good, but it is too smooth, and the excitement is not enough, especially the basketball game. In fact, it is very fragmented. The most obvious one is the scene where the horses are killed at the racecourse. It suddenly feels like the persona has been changed. Maybe it is to create a sense of crisis. She used to be an iceberg beauty, and then suddenly she became a yandere beauty. Although it was found in the plot that the yandere beauty is very reasonable, the early foreshadowing may have been too obscure, which made me feel that there is a big gap between the characters before and after. Poison point, then to Qi Xinyue, then to the art troupe, each one competes with poison; I almost gave up on Qi Xinyue, I posted several chapters saying that I was afraid that the author would be seriously ill, but I stopped it later, thankfully; Now to convey positive energy, there are also plots such as unspoken rape, which is simply a huge poison point, and it is even possible to be reported and completely banned; In ancient novels, there is a drama where the protagonist travels through time and is raped by aphrodisiacs. Love, and then start the process of chasing his wife, it is not popular now, not to mention Lin Chusheng is still a supporting character. If it happened, we would have to spend a lot of ink to write the supporting character's confession and chase his wife. Readers have no patience to read the supporting character's story and waste their subscriptions; Xue is too crazy, Qin Ge is too soft, and the room for manipulation is too small. In fact, we readers are very much looking forward to plots such as Shura Field, [Gentlemen, I want to see a river of blood. Jpg], because the gap in shaping is too large, it is impossible 3. Future Outlook ① I sincerely wish the three protagonists a bright future. Although the future is difficult, the three of them love each other ② I hope the author can stabilize the plot, update it smoothly, and finish it smoothly

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Why does this comment section seem so familiar? I have the same question about whether the writing will collapse and then double the order. I also feel that it is a bit high and low. Is there any Shennong who can comment on it?

I feel like it's starting to go up and down, let's take another look

Why is there a book with such a strange name and introduction in my collection? Looking at it in the folder, I must have put it there because I thought it was okay at the time. But now, looking at the title and introduction, it doesn't match any book in my memory.

When a gun appears, normally it will go off But I still don't see the meaning of writing Chu Sheng as such a beast😂 Qi Xinyue seems to have suppressed the devil's claws because of readers' public opinion; but this wave of the art troupe is a bit abrupt. In the previous impression of his character, he was still a pure and good man. He seemed reluctant to seek help from the three people outside. He also had a good relationship with his wife Jiang Yingqiu. In the latest chapter, they suddenly became polite and respectful to each other Was this character designed just to raise Shuxue's threshold? In order to further distort her character and flesh out her character arc? But it seems that the rhythm is a bit out of control now, and it will be a bit difficult to come back later...

Qin Shuxue

It's a very good book, but not many people have read it. I hope the author won't be too stressed. If he doesn't have money, he can only subscribe to it and support it.

At first glance, I thought it was a game article

I feel like not many people have read this book. It's well written and not too cliche.

Name changed? I almost deleted it. . .

Give a monthly ticket to support! Good books deserve positive feedback, come on!

After changing my name, I don't even know what it is anymore.

A relaxing and interesting book, very suitable for reading, but it's a pity that I almost finished it