I Understand a Magic Skill in One Day

It's a mess 🤫 Find a big guy to give you some guidance, it's so messy.

What the hell are these written on? So chirping. Just kill, kill, kill.

You can see for yourself how it goes with the profile. If someone wants to kill you, it's like licking a dog, licking and watering, pretending not to know how to do it, and still learning cologne.

If you have an ancient dragon, you will have a destiny, but if you don't have an ancient dragon, you will have talent.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                            There are different writing methods and cool points about each era. The ancient era was a time when there were not many people showing off their saints in front of people, and the atmosphere of literary youth was rampant, so there was time to watch the characters make fun of themselves. The current era pays attention to a rhythm. The rhythm of your writing is not bad, but the dialogue between the characters is imitation of Xiao Gu, which is disgusting. I read so many chapters and couldn't stand it. Can't normal Jianghu people speak?

It's true that the protagonist is a dog licker. If nothing else, you really surpassed Gu Long in terms of water articles.

The plot logic is messy, and it's a cool story without any brains. . .

Open a martial arts studio, and everyone can leave their own martial arts creations here for me to copy. After all, the protagonist learns magic skills every day, and just thinking about it will make him bald. It is best to have a name of more than 5 characters. Of course, less is fine, but the longer, the better. Only when it is longer can it look more stylish. (I am definitely not thinking about the word count) It would be better if you could add another sentence to make it a poem. For example: Chapter 14: The protagonist learns "A Touch of Red Hate". How long will it take for a trace of blood-red hatred to come to an end? When the protagonist uses this move, if you think about it again, it will be very powerful. Finally. Thank you for your support!

The author crazily imitated Gu Long. What's unpleasant to say is that there were not many novels in that era. If Gu Long wrote novels in modern society, he would basically be a piece of shit; and in terms of plot, the male protagonist was almost killed by a woman, and he even went crazy to lick her! This woman is still the heroine! ! ? Your grades don't lie, buddy. Writing novels is not for you. Find a job in a factory.

I feel that the author is too ambitious and the target is too high, resulting in an overall mediocre story, neither above nor below, and the writing is unsatisfactory and a bit literary. Just like I saw Telliga, fighting non-stop, just like a social animal, no entertainment, not astringent, a good screwman

There is no life like a great god, but there is a disease like that great god🐶

No monthly ticket can understand. You can understand even if you keep reading. But what's the matter with no one investing. Could it be that all the brothers are secretly making money without telling me? They don't even care about the starting coins for free prostitution. Buffetts, save me.

The author can't let go, and the result is that there are four different things

I don't know what's so cool about it, I can't stand it anymore

I don't understand Why everyone is talking about the male protagonist licking the female protagonist It seems that this book is destined to be a hit A year ago I returned to the starting point for the second time Excited and high-spirited Everywhere this author goes, readers are sincerely welcome It can be said that he has all the time That kind of vitality and everything is competing. Still in front of my eyes Just one year later Has this place turned into my burial place No matter how you say it The book is not finished yet The advantage is mine

There is no way to distinguish between good and bad names of magic skills. I just pieced them together from a few ancient poems. Wei Qiang can only see one of the seven magic skills. In order to highlight the so-called feeling, the article was written very messily. The division of realms is not obvious, and the introduction of Magic Golden Finger is not detailed. It is purely written to describe the Jianghu style, and the dialogues are also designed to have a sense of Jianghu. It took the protagonist two and a half years to master the magic skills until he was bleeding like a river. Do you understand the magic skills? Only demons? What about quick fix?

You might as well just write about a random magic trick every day in the martial arts world and be done with it.

He talks about how awesome the magic skills are, but he is afraid of giving the protagonist a big blow. It takes him a month to kill someone to gain a lot of energy in a year. The style of writing is a bit like Gu Long, but it is not very refreshing. The text is too dry. You should read other people's comments for yourself, the author, and you will not change it.

Uh, if you don't write fan fiction well, why should you write about martial arts?

It's a bit of a pity. Setting aside the setting, the writing alone is actually readable. It's just that the setting is so bad, it feels like you want to show it but don't show it. It's much better to bring a gold finger directly through time travel than to teach the skills to the natives. You can also add settings at a later stage.