Begin the Game with Darts and Obtain the Full Level of Magical Power.

The author wants to write about a escort, so he should act like one. For example, if you take a gold coffin, the protagonist must have it inspected, but the consignor says you are not allowed to open the coffin, so you should make it clear in advance: What I am escorting is the coffin itself, and I am not responsible for the contents of the coffin, because I don't even know what is inside. Don't let the owner of the coffin ask me what happened to the contents in the coffin when it was delivered to the place? If you ask me to compensate you, I won't be able to explain it to you. Secondly, the protagonist should not have the idea of ​​escorts. The protagonist took advantage of a loophole and opened the coffin that he had promised not to open. Wasn't that also opening it? What I see now is a shameless and untrustworthy person. This kind of protagonist is not my cup of tea.

After reading some of them, the advantages are that they are written with the spirit of a teenager, full of curiosity and confidence in the world. The disadvantages are that they do not read back after writing, the left and right brains are constantly fighting each other, they like to deviate from the main line, and they have no social experience.

Watch this novel! Suddenly I felt that my employer was so miserable! As long as the male protagonist takes the job! Employers basically have to die! How miserable! ! ! Anyone who takes a job from the protagonist will be killed!

It's so fucking stupid. Do you know how wide the road is for eight horses to pull a cart? It's a fucking mountain road.

Just like another book, escorting becomes investigating crimes, which is a digression.

A bunch of garbage plots, forcibly stitched together, introducing the realm of martial arts, not mentioning the strength of the protagonist at all, and a bunch of suffocating words

Who will tolerate you? If the previous plot is not good, people will leave. Who will wait for you later?

First of all, if you don't write about martial arts that everyone is familiar with, your appeal will be half as good. Believe me, if you write about Jin Yong, Gu Long's martial arts will be much better.

The one who escorted the escort suddenly turned into investigating the case. I'm afraid it was an AI article.

It is outrageous to see the use of formations to seize blood and bloodline inheritance. Any ordinary villain can master such a powerful formation without any side effects. Those big families or sects that have this formation will allow it to exist? To put it bluntly, this formation is aimed at aristocratic families and sects. What is the energy of such a powerful formation? What is the medium? Don't say that just relying on innateness or being one level higher can take someone's inheritance at will, right? In the end, you, the one who writes similar invincible articles, let the villains slip away at will, and you also get the benefits. What has been hiding behind is that you are filtering out those who want to read these articles. The author does not have a good grasp of the audience for his novels. Don't write novels that both want and want if you don't have the ability, otherwise all the readers will run away in the end.

The plot is very strange. From the owner of the Wooden Sword Manor trapping people inside to catch the murderer, to the protagonist taking someone else's secret book to a place he knows is a trap, none of the plots are interesting. It's very uncomfortable to watch.

The Twelve Swords of Xuanyin is no longer an ordinary skill. It has a spiritual essence, and it is not just a simple spirituality. It can be said to be the birth of spiritual wisdom. In other words, the skill has become a spirit and a demon.

The setting is good, but the writing is so poor that I can't read it with my brain.

The title and the content don't fit together, but when I reach 12 chapters, I still fucking investigate the case, what the hell. As soon as I think about it, why don't you just do a few lucky draws? You can also offer a full discount, and you will get one free after 10 draws. I'm really speechless.

Speechless, I wanted to skip this kind of woman who was tricked to death when she came out of the world, but I didn't expect to follow her from the beginning to the end. Are you a nanny? Go to the factory and screw screws. It's not suitable for writing a book.

This may be the author's first time writing this book. The style is very classic, with the atmosphere of classical martial arts from decades ago, 🙂 so you understand.

The end of Chapter 6, Generally speaking, the subject matter is quite good, but many settings are not well written. First of all, the protagonist does not have a panel. If there is a panel, the realm can be introduced directly through the panel, instead of being introduced separately, which is very abrupt and completely undesirable. The second issue is the price issue, which requires a complete financial system. For example, how many things can be bought with five hundred gold tickets? Your casual attitude of saying that five hundred gold tickets will directly cause prices to collapse and make people unable to feel that there is any meaning in making money. Anyway, you can buy as many gold tickets as you like. Also, when writing about this subject, you must at least understand the profession. The escort agency is actually the current express delivery. It seems that some people know what the escort is, and there are some secret escorts who don't know the content. If you know it, you have to pay the corresponding amount. I don't know how much it will be based on the evaluation. If no one collects it, it seems that these secret darts can be auctioned or something. I don't know much about it, but the author who wrote about this profession must understand it. Logically speaking, this theme should be, keep betting on darts and then continue to become stronger. The reward will be increased according to the value of betting on darts, or the difficulty of betting on darts. The value of all aspects of this kind of price must be stable. The results are omitted, and I only know the three and no. The summary does not describe the occupation, nor how strong the protagonist is. It only shows that the protagonist wants to swallow the dart. This is the case in Chapter 6, otherwise the protagonist will suddenly know why he is holding the coffin. The main character who wants to swallow the escort when there is a hook is Zhenla. Normally, if you understand the escort, you can decide to escort it and deliver it. Later, if the recipient is gone, it may be auctioned somewhere, or it can be sent back, or no one wants to open it and find it. If there is any accident, you can see for yourself. If you want it, just want it. What is the difference between this behavior and the courier who wants to open someone else's express delivery? Your express delivery was damaged due to an accident. Will you ask the courier to accompany you? It's not whether you can see it or not. You didn't make it clear before sending the express delivery what to send. You just sent it if it was a private item, but it was damaged halfway. I don't even need to read the rest. I guess it will only end up in the hands of the protagonist due to fate? Or a related opportunity for the protagonist. It's really a cheat and dishonesty. In reality, if couriers were like the protagonist, they wouldn't be able to work. The escort is yours. You can write about how the major masters along the way fought and what they went through. And then because of the rise of this escort agency that affected the world and so on, the escort you escorted broke on the first trip? The author first understands the profession well and writes about it first!

That book is much better than yours

I died from the poison. It was not a highly poisonous poison. It was a chronic poison. My poison resistance was so high that I was poisoned to death by a little bit of bloodletting.

I don't need a backer, I don't need a master, I just have a system and I will be awesome sooner or later, but in the end it's either this chase or that chase, is it just a forced plot?

After beating the young one, the old one is shameless. Running account

Everyone is targeting the protagonist, and then the protagonist passes the level all the way.

Funny and interesting new book, come and help to avoid book shortage

Do you think this woman is just a chatterbox, looking for trouble to attract hatred?

I've caught up with the latest chapter. Brother Long, do you think the pace is slow? From receiving the golden coffin to getting [Shura God-Destroying Palm], there were 7 chapters and 14,000 words. Even when I was writing from the starting point, the pace felt a bit slow. Maybe I was used to writing and immediately pretending to be cool, but when I got [Shura God-Destroying Palm], I didn't pretend to be cool right away. I don't understand (Fenghua accent). And the [Five Spirit Demon Boy] in the middle is obviously a replica of [Five Poison Boy]. There is not much foreshadowing before and after, it is instantly over, but it is not satisfying in seconds. Is there any new plot to unfold in the future? Let's talk about the poor man plot that just opened in Chapter 11. The counterattack of the widowed son-in-law and his rise does not seem so refreshing. After reading the entire 11 chapters, the main line is not clear, or there is not that strong desire to read it. Come on, I will give you daily recommendation votes!

After reading a few chapters, I can see the level of writing and the writing is smooth. Come on, I wish you a great success 😰

I think it's okay to write, at least I can write things clearly.

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The coffin is sometimes bronze and sometimes gold.

Overall it's okay, barely watchable