I Comprehend a Demonic Art Every Day

It's a mess 🤫 Find a big guy to give you some guidance, it's so messy.

What the hell are these written on? So chirping. Just kill, kill, kill.

You can see for yourself how it goes with the profile. If someone wants to kill you, it's like licking a dog, licking and watering, pretending not to know how to do it, and still learning cologne.

If you have an ancient dragon, you will have a destiny, but if you don't have an ancient dragon, you will have talent.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                            There are different writing methods and cool points about each era. The ancient era was a time when there were not many people showing off their saints in front of people, and the atmosphere of literary youth was rampant, so there was time to watch the characters make fun of themselves. The current era pays attention to a rhythm. The rhythm of your writing is not bad, but the dialogue between the characters is imitation of Xiao Gu, which is disgusting. I read so many chapters and couldn't stand it. Can't normal Jianghu people speak?

It's true that the protagonist is a dog licker. If nothing else, you really surpassed Gu Long in terms of water articles.

The plot logic is messy, and it's a cool story without any brains. . .

Open a martial arts studio, and everyone can leave their own martial arts creations here for me to copy. After all, the protagonist learns magic skills every day, and just thinking about it will make him bald. It is best to have a name of more than 5 characters. Of course, less is fine, but the longer, the better. Only when it is longer can it look more stylish. (I am definitely not thinking about the word count) It would be better if you could add another sentence to make it a poem. For example: Chapter 14: The protagonist learns "A Touch of Red Hate". How long will it take for a trace of blood-red hatred to come to an end? When the protagonist uses this move, if you think about it again, it will be very powerful. Finally. Thank you for your support!

The author crazily imitated Gu Long. What's unpleasant to say is that there were not many novels in that era. If Gu Long wrote novels in modern society, he would basically be a piece of shit; and in terms of plot, the male protagonist was almost killed by a woman, and he even went crazy to lick her! This woman is still the heroine! ! ? Your grades don't lie, buddy. Writing novels is not for you. Find a job in a factory.

I feel that the author is too ambitious and the target is too high, resulting in an overall mediocre story, neither above nor below, and the writing is unsatisfactory and a bit literary. Just like I saw Telliga, fighting non-stop, just like a social animal, no entertainment, not astringent, a good screwman