I Comprehend a Demonic Art Every Day

It's a mess 🤫. I need to find an expert to guide me; it's too disorganized.

What the hell are these pictures saying? All this rambling and whining. Just go and kill, kill, kill!

Look at your own description and see if it matches. People are after you, and you're still acting like a sycophant, fawning and flattering. You can't even be pretentious, yet you're trying to imitate Gu Long.

Having Gu Long grants you a good life; not having Gu Long grants you talent.

Stop patting yourself on the back in the introduction with "Little Gu". Every era has its own writing style and appeal. Gu's era was one where there weren't many people showing off their talents and a prevalence of pretentious intellectualism, so people had time to enjoy reading about characters spouting nonsense. In this day and age, rhythm is important.

Indeed, the protagonist is a simp. Putting everything else aside, in terms of padding the story, you have definitely surpassed Gu Long.

The plot is illogical and nonsensical; it's a mindless, feel-good novel.

Let's open a martial arts forum where everyone can leave their own martial arts creations here for me to copy. After all, the protagonist has to learn a new magical skill every day; just thinking about it would drive him bald. A name should ideally have more than five characters, though fewer is fine too, but the longer the better, as longer names tend to be more sophisticated.

The author is blatantly imitating Gu Long, but frankly, there weren't many novels written in that era. If Gu Long were writing a novel in modern society, it would basically be garbage. Then, regarding the plot, the male protagonist is almost killed by a woman, and he even frantically tries to lick her boots! And this woman is the female lead?!? Results don't lie, buddy. Writing novels isn't for you; go find a factory job.

It feels like the author had overly ambitious goals and set excessively high expectations, resulting in an overall mediocre, neither good nor bad writing. It's neither particularly exciting nor satisfying, and even a bit pretentious, much like my experience with Trigger – constant fighting, much like being a corporate slave, lacking entertainment and not particularly erotic. A well-written, albeit somewhat cheesy, story.