Daily Cultivation of Immortality in Two Realms

Why are you a licker? Giving money to your ex-wife is a disease. If you die, will you let other men spend your money to beat your children? Don't you know there is something called trust?

The poison starts in the third golden chapter. It writes about garbage spiritual roots and rapid leveling up. There are glitches, but it only takes twice as long to cultivate and comprehend. The technique is not something you can start to improve after you comprehend it. You have given limited spiritual roots. Just like a car, you can't ride a bicycle to the speed of a four-wheel drive. If the hardware is not good, all the good technology is useless.

The real world is too bland, and the second child's talent is written too well, isn't it? The protagonist has a low-grade spiritual root that can be upgraded in a few months, and then he can be upgraded several levels in a row by cheating. The talent of the second child and a handyman can actually catch up with the protagonist and level up in a few months. Looking at the writing that focuses on describing his continuous attempts to break through in cultivation, he won't have to upgrade again in a few days, right? If his talent was really that good, he would not be a handyman disciple, but a direct disciple.

This is the ugliest two-world text, bar none. I can only say that the dogs shook their heads after seeing it.

Licking a dog, your IQ is worrying, you have no brains

In Chapter 50, two thousand spirit stones increased the space by more than two thousand acres, the flow rate of time increased by two thousand times, and the concentration of spiritual energy increased by two thousand times. It is so unbelievable It is recommended to save a million spirit stones to directly turn the space into a fairyland!

Your article states that handyman disciples can earn sixty or seventy spirit stones a year. If we multiply the income of outer disciples by fifty times, it is only 3-3.5K spirit stones. However, your yellow-level low-grade disguise technique requires 20,000 spirit stones. Outer disciples need to save up for six years without eating or drinking to buy a spell, not to mention the elixirs and talisman money they need to spend every year for practice.

It only gave me two feelings, the collapse of combat power and the collapse of commodity prices. 😅

It was written by AI, it's not reasonable anywhere.

As a normal person, if you are not afraid of nuclear bombs one day, I don't believe you if you don't poop. As the saying goes, wealth does not return to its hometown, just like walking in brocade at night. Ask yourself, can you do it yourself? Sun Wukong couldn't even do it, so he was kicked out of the disciples by Patriarch Bodhi.

There's nothing wrong with returning to the mortal world, but it's disgusting for your ex-wife, daughter, buddies, etc.? Still soft. Gone.

The front is so-so, and the style starts to look wrong starting from the upgrade space. It feels like a fool is writing this

But don't lick your ex-wife back again. Judging from the author's writing style, there is a strong tendency to do so. The protagonist in this article is too peaceful, in other words too soft. I doubt that my ex-wife said we should get back together, but the protagonist just said it doesn't matter, let's get back together. The ex-wife said again, I think we are still not suitable, let's break up, then that's fine with pig's feet, let's just separate. This is the feeling, it doesn't matter anything, soft and content with everything. And since the plot is not exciting enough, you might as well raise your stakes a little. Really, you are too bland like this. To be honest, it is suitable for retirement. However, I have not reached that age and I feel drowsy while watching it.

It is also understandable that some of the people who read the novel have reached this point in reality. The author just wants to better represent himself

Xiaoxiao has not appeared in the show for thirty years. According to her age, she is thirty-eight or nine years old...

It's okay, but I'm just not cautious enough. A secret is a secret if more than two people know it.

The two world texts have different emphases. In fact, the author understands a truth: real life is the starting point, and all other worlds are just gorgeous dreams. Many times, how to handle plot progression is simple.

The first paragraph of the writing is separated from the next paragraph, and AI is smoother than you.

For this kind of book, I suggest the author go to a female channel, but not a male channel.

I don't even know how the author wrote such a poisonous novel. He didn't die even in the Foundation Establishment Stage or Nascent Soul Stage. I suggest you give it a try and refresh your understanding of poisonous novels.

One thing is repeated over and over again, leaving me speechless

How can I write about the prehistoric times? The prehistoric times are the beginning of the world, and we are all modern people. The prehistoric times are already history, so why do we have to do it again! Honghuang is no longer interesting to chase!

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Next, Ascension suggested to directly control the world in the palm of your hand and take over the two realms of China and Canglan to directly teach and ascend 😏

It's really hard to write a book. It doesn't matter if it's good or not. It doesn't matter if it's good or not. But if you're writing a long novel with a rich experience like this author's, it starts from chapter 188 and it becomes a running account. It's not worth reading at all. In the end, it even stitches together the prehistoric period and completely turns into a pile of rubbish.

This book should be labeled as "Gate of Time and Space" and "Travel between Two Realms". If added, it could increase the popularity of "I Have a World of Cultivation" to some extent.

Theoretically, going back to modern times requires some pretentiousness, but in the end it's all trivial things that people just want to skip.

He also has to take the daughter of the earth who has no aura to cultivate immortality! ! ! I guess this book won't last long 🙂🙂 It's unrealistic

The author's writing is good, both reading and listening are very fluent, and the storyline is okay, but the time in the middle is fast forwarded 30 years, which seems a bit awkward. The book will be finished soon, because the level jump is too fast, the author is a little unable to write, and I don't know how to feel overwhelmed? In fact, although this book has a 3000x speed farming space, I can't enter it. This is actually a good limiter. As long as you don't write acceleration later, you can increase it, so that the book will not collapse. If the author doesn't know how to open it, he can actually write the alchemy talisman array. , Cultivation of Immortals and Hundreds of Arts. Currently, the main character is only at level 9 in Formation, Weapon Refining, and Alchemy. In fact, you can also write and write Talismans. There are also puppets. In the space, the puppets can actually harvest spiritual fruits and elixirs automatically. You don't have to harvest them yourself. There are also spiritual weapons that are generally used in the foundation building period. Magic weapons are generally used in the golden elixir period. Nascent Soul Generally speaking, acquired spiritual treasures are used for people above the stage of spiritual transformation. Occasionally, some people have innate spiritual treasures for those above the divine transformation stage, so the weapon training can actually be discussed in many chapters. If you feel that there is nothing to discuss in the world of immortality for the time being, you can discuss the invasion of aliens in the modern world, fight to defend the solar system, and then write about the colonization of the galaxy. , For the elders in the cultivation world, the small world described by the author is not necessarily as large as the modern world, the observable universe → Pisces-Cetus supercluster complex → Laniakea supercluster (containing 100,000 galaxies) → Virgo supercluster → Local galaxy group → Milky Way → Solar system → Earth‌. Author: In fact, this book can contain at least 5,000 chapters, 😁. If you feel that you are tired of writing at the same word count, you can use the current AI to check the information, and then combined with the author's excellent writing style, you can modify the AI ​​information and it will definitely look good. Then after cultivating the world of immortality and becoming an immortal, you can also write about the world of immortality, the world of demons, and then the world of gods. Of course, when writing a novel about cultivating immortals, it is best not to mention the ancient immortals or gods, otherwise the author will feel that his writing power is limited, because if you write about those immortals randomly, you may be unlucky, and write about them randomly may cause dissatisfaction among some readers, so it is best to be blind and not get involved with them. Twelve Transformations, etc., You will find that after you write it, you don't know how to define which one is more powerful. If you insist on saying which one is more powerful, a lot of readers will come to criticize it. Therefore, those who write novels about cultivating immortals are not innovative and are linked with nouns and celebrities from the ancient world. Many of them will be finished soon. Sorry, Luo Li is rambling a lot. I just like the writing style of this book. I hope the author can continue to write so that I will not be unable to find books to read. Thank you, author.

The story is not told well. After reading more than 80 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It is completely inconsistent with a normal person's thinking logic. The various settings in the article are also extremely awkward, and the reading experience is extremely poor. First of all, this two-world bead can travel through it, has internal space, and can extend and grow. Don't you think this is too big? To understand, we are talking about people and stories, not about gossip. Let's talk about a low-level cultivator who doesn't have enough resources and is still selling spiritual stones and spiritual talents. How serious is this? Can't there be so many resources from other worlds that can be sold now? Sitting in a world and not knowing how to make a fortune is really ridiculous Logical errors are the biggest problem. Any biological plant must comply with a basic logic of survival of the fittest. If you plant something in the two worlds, you can upgrade it into a spiritual material, which is a pure intellectual enhancement. Being able to become an inner disciple has plenty of time and flexibility, but instead he sticks to being a handyman disciple. He is not so low-key. He is really talented. With this logic of thinking, how can others take over?