Huo Yuhao Was Reborn, and He Beat the Little Zha San Violently at the Beginning

Huo Yuhao would never give up on Wang Dong'er if he could be reborn. Before his death, Wang Dong'er had just found the transition point between brothers and lovers, got rid of the tendency to rely on her boyfriend, and regained her personality. As a result, she died in Qingqing Valley.

Little Huo Niang

Come to Duan Yeshi

In fact, I have always felt that those who write fanfics must have the awareness to write fanfics. You must understand that what readers like is not your original plot and protagonist, but the characters in the original work. Studying, imitating, making breakthroughs, making up for regrets, and beating up enemies are the main core 🙂

It feels good so far, but I don't know what will happen in the future.

Little Huo Niang

Little Huo Niang

To be offensive, author, have you read the book Next Door: Intention of Evil? Why does it feel so similar?

When I first started watching it, it seemed quite to my liking. Dou Er's colleagues have already tasted enough candies in autumn and winter, let's give Orange more roles😭Liao Huo's first love

After all the trouble, in the end he was just a god king, an anticlimax.

I've always wanted to see pictures like this. The author is advised to slow down a bit. This is still in the early stages, the frequency of appearance of the God Realm is a bit high, and the pace is a bit fast. The main theme of Dou Er is still the soul guide. It would be best to write more about soul guides. The impact of the development of soul guides on civilians, on low-level soul masters with ordinary martial arts souls, and on top-level super martial soul soul masters. You can also write about battle armor, which can enhance the combat power of soul masters and help them fight against the gods.             ，，，            ， ，， Huo Yuhao is the master of the plane. When these are almost finished, you can start writing the climax of the confrontation with the God Realm. It is not recommended to write a climactic plot of confrontation with the God Realm from the beginning. Once you finish downloading the hard stuff at once, it will be unattractive to write about other things later. It's just a little personal suggestion. Come on, author.

It shouldn't be too much, right? Or should I accept everyone who has a role to play?

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I like this book very much. I hope the author will speed up the update a lot. I must finish this book.

Not many people have read this book. I think the first few chapters are too bland and fail to capture the readers. I only read this book after reading it for the third time. I ran away after reading two copies the first two times. 🙂

Will you kill the first Shura God in the future?

Will Poseidon, the first sea god, be killed in the future?

Will Yuhao have the power of time in the future?

There is a future. If Douluo's subsequent works start with you writing like this, they will definitely explode 😏

How to deal with the first generation of good and evil god-kings in the future

What ideas does the author have for the next plot? I look forward to writing more war plots between Sun Moon and Douluo. That kind of all-out war scenario. There is too little written in the original work. The soul mentor group is so powerful after a long time of foreshadowing, but there are few scenes later.

It fills in a lot of loopholes in the original novel and it's quite smooth, but I feel that Huo Yuhao, who is reborn as the God King, has grown up too slowly, and he can't bear to join Shrek after reading a lot of anti-san novels with debuffs. What's even more speechless is that the other fan I read before reading this novel was by anti-san and black Huo Yuhao... I couldn't follow the chapter where Tang San vomited blood under double debuffs, so I put it on the bookshelf to keep it, hoping not to die 🥵