Two Realms: Becoming Extraordinary from the Battle of Yashan

Are you really afraid that your book will become popular? You just thought it was a little interesting and came up with a local extraordinary system. Do you think your idea is good? It has successfully made me lose interest in watching it.

The various popular science explanations in the article are hard to explain. . . . . The author has too little ink in his stomach. Please eat more before writing! ! ! !

My head hurts from watching it, I want to complain but I don't know where to start.

A silly article about working as a dog nanny for the Zhao family.

The writing is messy! All kinds of contradictions!

If you don't become the emperor and take charge of your own affairs, it's not unreasonable to attack the streets

Hundreds of thousands of incense will not increase the combat power, but he will increase the auxiliary. If the combat power is useless, then how can the god's world use combat power to subdue the people? More than 1 million incense in a month will not improve the combat power. This is a scientific and technological article, incense is just electricity. The author let me know that it is useless to increase the level of incense. Even if you are 5th level, you are still a mortal. All authors do not increase the level.

Without an emperor, the world is under heaven. In a few generations, capital will rule the world.

I punched a shark to death in the sea, and then said that my body is not as good as that of the Mongolians. Is the waistline of the Mongolians you write about four feet tall? Or are you saying that all the Song armies in your novel are soft-footed?

Doesn't this count as copying books? Tomato's

It is recommended not to write too detailed history. The root of the Yashan naval battle was not the destruction of the Song Dynasty by the Yuan Dynasty, but the revenge of the northern Han people on the southern Song people who looked down on them, and the revenge of the military generals on the Song Dynasty who oppressed them. Moreover, the focus of the Yuan Dynasty was never on the Han people in the south but on the fellow villagers in the north.

Why does it feel like I am copying Tomato's book? There are also similar shuttles between the two realms, incense, space expansion talisman, yellow scarf, and later developed the visualization of the statue of Guan Yu. However, the follow-up to Another World is mainly set in modern times, and then it feels like it follows the urban farming style.

The latest chapters are painful to read. The description method has been used in some previous chapters. Is there anyone who can write a hundred chapters like this?

I'm speechless. You wrote so much history in just one fantasy novel.

More than 60 chapters, the protagonist is forced by the situation to go out of the city with some people to fight! And the cannon with 10,000 steel balls has an explosion speed of 5,000 meters per second! At that time, I could already tell that the author was running out of inspiration, and that he would still be struggling later! Can't the extraordinary gun have a multi-barreled Gatling type? It has a high rate of fire. Even if the range is the same as the extraordinary gun, its power is no better than that pretentious cannon in field battles or when fighting large armies! A pretentious cannon is worse than a tiger crouching cannon. It is light and scatters. Not to mention the mortar, it is difficult to handle. The one that can fly can bring a bomb. It has energy, materials, space and weight reduction. The food transportation of more than 500,000 stones only has an hour's time limit. Not to mention the simple version plus the extraordinary version of the helicopter. Hot air balloons or delta wings can't fly yet. How many bombs can be pulled down in one hour! There have been dozens of chapters of pretentiousness and slaps in the face, as well as the plot of the little emperor. . . . The writing is the same as Licking My Ex-Girlfriend. The subject matter and creativity are good. Unfortunately, most of the plot is difficult to explain in one sentence. When I think of the sentence I saw, it was originally about a field battle, but it turned out to be a guard in the city! Then he went out of town to fight at the expense of his face. . . The three-stage shot of the flintlock gun can crush the opponent to death in a field battle. When the protagonist gets the Pangu ax, he can chop it for a long time without causing any damage.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I read it in one sitting and it was very well written. When I first saw the comment, I almost deleted it. Why did I put such a comment on it?

A lot of nonsense

Nonsense article with water word count

I can't stand it anymore, I don't have any basic common sense. Mathematics is taught by the physical education teacher

After watching too many Dynasties, many of the highlights are actually how the protagonist builds trust with others, and which ones are just copied and pasted. One look at the late

If you really follow Yashan's path to overthrow Meng Yuan, this book will not even count as a god! At least it's on the list, mainly because there are very few writers on this subject!

The author should read ancient novels. The Yellow Turban Warrior is just a migrant worker. If you imagine Monkey King Erlang Shen, he is billions of times stronger than him!