People Write Diaries for Entertainment, Don't Be Jealous, Wife

Either it's AI, or the studio, or the author wrote it casually without remembering the plot. Sometimes the preface and follow-up of the same chapter are inconsistent, and the plot is all kinds of contradictions. I said I watched the film "The Sinner" by a certain director, but then I didn't watch it at the premiere, and I said I had already given it to a certain actress, and then it changed to "I just gave it to a certain actress".

These two chapters are a bit rubbish.

Tian Xiwei

Soliloquy type, popular science type, no sense of drama, procrastination!

I've tasted it and it's poisonous. Erase, don't write. The content of film and television dramas is not written. I don't write my own creative ideas for film and television drama adaptations. Don't write entertainment gossip. Just write a diary. Various speculations about female celebrities. Data analysis. A bland batch.

The entire story is made up of popular science talking nonsense and inexplicable psychological activities. The plot is less than one tenth of the story. The contents of the diary are messy. The protagonist's decision-making is also inconsistent. The whole thing looks like a mess.

What are the latest chapters about? Argumentative essay? The whole chapter is about winning the Golden Bear Award and why. The latest chapter introduces Liu Tianxian, what's the plot? You really write an argumentative essay! Give an argument and the whole article is full of arguments. There is no feeling of pleasure or climax. Won the Golden Bear Award and Best Actress. The response was mediocre. I suggest this author look at other entertainment novels. Others have won awards and achieved high box office, and how they wrote such climaxes that I couldn't stop reading them.

There is basically no plot. The whole story is about my own psychological activities or introducing this and that. If you don't know, I thought I'd look at Baidu Encyclopedia.

The idea of ​​this diary is pretty good, but just like a novel I've read before with a similar idea, it feels a bit broken. Let's not talk about anything else, just the first few dozen chapters. The various intrigues between the heroines take up too much space, and are very disturbing to watch. Their IQs are also raised to be too otherworldly, and the male protagonist is also demoted to too low. Various reasons that emphasize that the male protagonist is full of loopholes and the heroine acts with her are not convincing.

Disadvantage 1: Joining the group is really a failure. There are only 9 people in the group. Suddenly there is one more person. How can I not pay attention to it? It means that the famous protagonist knows that they can see the diary. The pull of the hard-to-get game is gone, and the excitement of the diary is gone. The author's brain is somehow capable of coming up with such a plot. Disadvantage 2: There are too many narrations, often a whole chapter of narration explaining, explaining, and complaining Disadvantage 3: In ten or twenty chapters, the diary is owned by 7-8 women, and they know each other's existence. The way to obtain the diary is even more speechless. The protagonist mentions the woman's name in the diary, and the woman can have the diary, which highlights a collapse Disadvantage 4: The protagonist is missing, but the access channels are limited to the entertainment industry. Everything in the entertainment industry can be accurately dated, but finance, stocks, gambling, futures, currency speculation, etc. Are completely unknown. See The protagonist wants to make several movies in 6 years and earn hundreds of millions. I really want to die laughing. He has been reborn and cheated in this drama. If the protagonist is to improve his self-worth, readers will recognize it. The protagonist is actually to make money... Even if you spend 300 million to buy gold, you can make 300 million in 6 years 😜, not to mention some obvious stocks, such as Tesla

16 This book is still level 2. I can't imagine it. I even feel a sense of fear even clicking into the book 😰

Why are they all "explanation" and "introduction"? Sometimes it's like this for several chapters in a row.

The idea is good, but it's awkward for readers to take it for granted, especially when writing a diary for other actresses to read. I wrote this billion-dollar script by myself, and I also scripted that hit movie. Anyway, all the good things in the future are related to you. You are the only elite in the entertainment industry. It's okay if everyone doesn't know that you can predict the future, but they are already known. Even people with unlimited IQs will find it strange, right? Anyway, I feel extremely embarrassed watching these plots!

Who is this? She has appeared in several novels I have read recently, but I don't recognize her at all and have never heard of her.

Really convinced, celebrity fan fiction has turned into urban cultivation fiction? Author, guess why I read celebrity fanfics instead of directly reading cultivators. I subscribed to more than 200 chapters. You finally changed it to urban cultivators? Funny

Most people who write diaries these days rely on deception. I was speechless after reading this. Are there no novels that are more honest? Please recommend

After reading only a few dozen chapters, there are several inconsistencies in the diary. Was this really written by one person? Could it be that the studio text or the transportation was not correctedright?

I recommend this book, but it's a little over the top.

Let me talk about some of the blocking points I think. The protagonist has not written a diary for more than half a year since he was reborn. It stands to reason that during this half year, you would just talk nonsense every day without writing down names, and then write down a running account of your daily life, such as what did you eat today? I drank a few glasses of water today, went to the toilet a few times, pooped a lot, walked a lot, talked a little bit every day, and got a lottery once a week. I was able to do it many times in the past six months, so I got a lot of things. The second point is that you write too much content at once. If you make up the rest of your life at once, then people will read so much, and your use value will be relatively less. You might as well talk a little bit every day, talk a little bit every day, slowly, take your time, so that the plot can be written better, and you can write down the numbers better.

More than a dozen books, Level 2? You succeeded in making me laugh

What the hell is going on behind - time travel and fantasy? The author is happy

The boss borrowed precious land to use "China Entertainment: The Light Chaser" Liu Yifei, single

I only comment and don't read novels, so I got lost

Watch the ebb and flow of the tide＼(*T▽T*)／

It feels like the book collapsed after going around and around.

Even a dog's paws on the keyboard can't write any worse than yours.