Xianting Xingji

I feel like my writing is too bland now😭

The risk level of the work is too high, does that mean you know how to be a eunuch? Damn it, the few eunuch masters I read didn't have this reminder and you actually did. How many books have you read as a eunuch?

There is a big bug in the middle. In the beginning, through the long river of time, the protagonist got the research results and information about the future of parallel time and space, but then everyone knows how to travel through parallel time and space, not to mention the bad streets, and the big forces can play it. Then the main world should have exploded with all kinds of information. Are you still waiting for your protagonist?

The more I read, the worse it gets. I can vouch for it. If this book is going to die, it will definitely die because of the parallel time and space future that you wrote with the same concept but failed to write well. In addition, the female characters with pig-nosed personalities really make the protagonist's personality worse and worse.

At present, I have seen that after the college entrance examination, I went to the interstellar home planet. The world view is quite good. However, the author's level is a bit difficult to control. There are currently two poisonous points. He rules such a large territory and so many worlds. A remote rural planet can have several Nascent Soul students. You are only in the Nascent Soul stage. Can you enter a thousand? Okay, you can skip this for now. The second one is the large transportation hub next to the home star. There are only thousands of spaceships every day. . . I suddenly remembered the joke about poor people writing cool articles. . . . It's all interstellar, brother! ! An empire that rules countless worlds in such a vast territory. The large transportation hub next to the capital only has so much traffic a day. I don't know if you are talking about writing ancient texts.

I have been reading it all the time. To be honest, I believe that the author may finish it, but the parallel world timeline matryoshka doll that the author wrote in a large space has locked the book to a great extent. If the parallel world timeline is as important as the many scenes written by the author, then Xianting's exploration and capture of the parallel timeline is not something that the protagonist can do as an afterthought. It should not be a local dish or development stagnation, and it has to wait until the protagonist is established before starting to develop. The author writes this way to destroy the powerful exploration, knowledge and development character of Xianting before it was destroyed. Then, the author did not impose any restrictions on the timeline. Now the author's description of the timeline is basically like a parallel world of infinite matryoshka dolls, and you made it stupid and boring. There are villains in this timeline causing trouble, there are villains in that timeline causing trouble, villains from multiple timelines get together to cause trouble, and then they want to destroy the Fairy Garden in the protagonist's timeline 🙂 Author, are you dead? You will never lack material to write about this kind of trouble, reader It just feels dull and boring, plus the impression that the fairy world is powerful and fw To say this book is bad, I think it started with the war with the dark world. The two good world wars were written by you and ended in an anticlimax. No, you speeded up and skipped it. I don't know what inspired you, the author, to abandon the collision of different civilizations in the world, the absorption, integration, progress and development of Fairyland. If you have to write about a parallel world with bad matryoshka dolls, just write about it. What you write is bland and frustrating for Fairyland and the readers. By the time you write about solving the problems of this parallel world, conquering other parallel worlds, or concluding the world line, readers will be impatient. Also, if you compare three supporting actresses with the same stupidity, we know that those supporting actresses with beady lips are useful to the protagonist and can help the protagonist with his research. But looking at it now, the three lip beads that the protagonist takes care of as a nanny are really not as cost-effective as anatomy. ​In the final analysis, you still describe those three people as the kind of characters who have strength but no brains and need the protagonist to tell the truth.

There is always a smile, a curve, a touch. . . . After reading 263 chapters, there are 260

The whole text is dull, with a few small bumps occasionally, but it passed quickly, mainly in the following aspects. First of all, the college entrance examination, such an important thing, something that was foreshadowed from the beginning, ended in a few sentences. Can you believe it? In terms of fighting skills, it is even more mediocre. Can you believe that a monk only has two spells? There are no defense, attack, escape, consciousness, concealment, or physical body, and there are very few in terms of fighting. They are all done with one move, and then there are various simplified terms, and the dark spirit world is also, what the hell, it was so powerful that it brought the fairy court to collapse, but it ended in just a few pictures? That's it? Will the Immortal Palace collapse? I'm so speechless. Also, it feels like the whole article is just various researches, and the rest doesn't feel important. Also, the whole environment is very vague. It just says there are several worlds, so where did the ascension go? Don't you want to introduce the Ascension Realm? Also, the realm you achieved with your golden finger is too bad. It's all 100, so isn't your cultivation in vain? Only a few are enough to reach such a high level? Very convinced

Your book cannot even be invested in 😥, why is that?

I probably know who the author is.

The initial idea of ​​reading this book was about the starry sky civilization war in the world of immortality. As a result, a parallel universe has popped up. The writing is very abrupt, unsightly, and deviates from the main line. It is like an infinite matryoshka doll. The plot of the main world has not advanced, and the civilization war has ended very hastily.

Things that other great masters would only dare to play with later in life, you can write about them in the early stages. You are the one

Okay, this book can be moved out of the bookshelf. The main plot begins to be deliberately delayed. Because it is difficult to deal with, this line will be exposed in the future. I probably couldn't do it even a year ago, it's very frustrating to watch. The real-life plot is even more word-county, and there is nothing exciting about it after college. It's a bit behind-the-scenes writing, but there are various reasons to suppress it. It's very frustrating to watch. You just said you can die? Do you have to hide it?

I found that the author has a problem, that is, he clearly should write down the cool points but doesn't write them down. For example, the process of the college entrance examination, such as the details after being interviewed by reporters Don't pretend to be b when you want to pretend 🙂

After seeing Xianting➕Modern Middle School, I left. This book was not my cup of tea. 😁😁😁 Just like the square dance aunt is in the golden elixir stage. It's unacceptable.

Moreover, the portrayal of the heroine Mu Danxian is average, and she feels more or less like a drag. Even the most proud alchemy skill cannot compare with the protagonist, so this heroine has somewhat failed...

I feel that the style of the book is very similar to a certain eunuch in my impression 😥

The parts that should be fun are written vaguely, as if you are constipated.

Don't write about your wooden elixir fairy. A good character will be written like a puppet in the later stage...

Isn't the plot too watery after I went to college? I was refining alchemy and studying immortal patterns, but also traveling and studying space. I was running around in several colleges. There was no priority and I couldn't remember too many characters.

The logic of the future world in the long river of time written earlier is a bit unclear. The latter may have been chosen to speed up and skip for some reasons. Apart from the previous point, everything else is pretty good. The author's writing style is obviously very good. Logically speaking, such a result should not be achieved. Perhaps the exposure is too little. The author can find some other authors to recommend each other or find some book lists to recommend.

I read it from QQ. The writing is really good, but there are too few updates. Don't be influenced by others, just write at your own pace.

The biggest bug in the book is the three great gods. Not to mention that you only described two of them, but you also raised these three levels too high, which makes them feel disconnected from the setting background. Also, until the end, I didn't know which level the protagonist was in the Immortal Court. He kept adding to the Immortal Court, and his power expanded greatly.

How is the situation on the Chaos battlefield?

Which three great gods are there? ! Immortal Heavenly Lord, Mechanical Heavenly Lord, and one more? !